My Storyline for Mortal Kombat Deception (LONG) ( Let me know what you think of it)(Updated- new story added- Part2)
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My Storyline for Mortal Kombat Deception (LONG) ( Let me know what you think of it)(Updated- new story added- Part2)
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posted07/03/2004 04:24 AM (UTC)by
I thought i would have some fun so i have created my ~official~ storyline for MKD. Let me know what you think of it.
THE STORYLINE FOR MKD:
After defeating the deadly alliance, the warriors of earthrealm settled down to enjoy their relatively peaceful realm.
After spending most of their time relaxing, Blaze spent most of his time training and perfecting his fighting moves. the rest of the warriors looked at him, confused, and just gazed upon him, training 24/7. After waiting several days, Blaze still did not stop, and Jax knew he was up to something.
he walked up to Blaze, and asked, "why are you training and killing yourself Blaze, what is wrong?"
"Earthrealm is in danger," he said. "The Dragon King has been born. He will take over Earthrealm and the Netherealm. He will kill us all. I must train. We all must train. Otherwise the Dragon King will come back, bring his undefeatable army with him, and kill everyone."
After hearing this, Jax told Sonya, and they then informed the rest of the Earthrealm warriors. After hearing the news, they trained. And waited.
Meanwhile, Scorpion was still on the hunt for Quan Chi. he had been searching everywhere for him. Until he stumbled across the egg of the Dragon King. With the Dragon King training right there.
"What is this?" he said to himself. He then realized that it was the father of the undefeatable army. He realized if he didn't run away the Dragon King would instantly kill him.
But suddenly, Quan Chi showed up aswell, by accident, searching for Kano. But hadn't realized the Dragon King, but he was more interested in Scorpion. "Hahahahaha..."laughed quan chi. "So we meet again Scorpion. "ROAR", the Dragon King roared. Quan Chi suddenly noticed the Dragon King standing next to his egg.
"Who are you mortals?" the Dragon King asked, with a reptilian voice.
"I am your slave", Quan Chi said, frightened to death, knowing the Dragon King was invincible.
"and who are you mortal?", he said, pointing to scorpion. "I...am....um.." he stuttered, speechless.
"He has come to kill you", he said to the Dragon King, trying to backstab Scorpion so the DK would kill him.
"ARGHHHHH", he growled, thinking, Scorpion was here to kill him.
Realizing Quan Chi's plan, Scorpion hurled his spear into a wall, reeling himself in, escaping. And then ran for his life, knowing he couldn't beat the DK.
With Quan Chi unable to escape, he said these words to DK. "If you help me kill Scorpion and the Earthrealm warriors, I will do everything in my power to serve you."
After thinking quite a bit, the dk said,"Hmmmm. you could be of use to me. Come with me", he said. "Where are we going?" Quan Chi asked. "To find my undefeatable army", he replied, smiling.
meanwhile, back in Shang Tsungs underground chamber in his palace, moloch and Drahmin knew nothing about their defeat. Realizing the Deadly Alliance was done, moloch and Drahmin searched for new masters, eating mortals along the way.
After walking a long time, Moloch and Drahmin stumbled across the Dragon King and Quan Chi. Quan Chi greeted them, showing them the dragon King, and telling them that the DK was their new master.
The DK agreed to keeping Moloch and Drahmin as henchmen to kill any enemies in their way. The DK agreed to feed them mortals along the way.
After searching far and long, Quan Chi saw Kano, performing a kata, similar to Liu kangs. The DK came up to him and said, Who are you?. Kano then replied, "I am the champion of Mortal Kombat, Liuy Kang". Quan Chi then rememebred that Liu Kangs soul had possessed Kano when he cut Shang tsung.
"Join us", the dk growled. "No, said Kano (kang). You must battle me in a duel to the death", e said, testing his new powers in kanos body.
After agreeing, the dk and liu began a fight to the death. but Liu Kang realized if he did die, only Kanos body would be destroyed, not his spirit.
After throwing millions of punches, using extreme moves, and pulling out swords and weapons, the dk finally had enough. "It is time for you to die", he said. Confused, Liu Kang tried to kick him, but the Dragon King then sucked in a huge amount of air, and then breathed a flamethrower of flames onto Kanos body.
After being burnt to a crisp, Kano's body was now a pile of ash lying on the ground, but Liu kangs spirit still stood there, laughing at the DK. "Hahahaha, Dragon King, you may have beaten my body, but you haven't beaten me!" he said, laughing.
The Dk realized that the spirit of Liu Kang had fooled him. Liu kang then ran away, still laughing, then disappeared. With the dk furied, he continued his search for his army, bringing Quan Chi and the oni's with him.
Meanwhile, Baraka was still in the netherealm, training day and night, trying to get revenge on Quan Chi.
But after training one day, he stumbled across a mystical portal-like circle. He walked through it, crossing through realms. He now realized he was in Earth realm. Gladly, he watched as he was now free, and with all the power he had gained, he knew he was able to kill Quan Chi. Searching for Quan Chi, he walked upon a giant egg. he realized this was the egg of the long-forgotten Dragon king. he realized that the Dk was out there. But then as he walked, he saw the robe of Quan Chi, laying on the floor. Confused, he now knew that he had allied with the dk, too frightened of his powers. With the dk, Baraka would be killed.
So Baraka then searched for the earth warriors, planning to persuade them to kill the dk and Quan Chi. After searching long, he found them.
The earth warriors took guard, preparing for a battle. "I do not wish to fight", baraka said. 'I have come here to tell you you must kill the dk and Quan Chi. They will take over both realms if nothing is done."
After realizing Baraka was on their side, not fully, they then searched for the dk and Quan Chi, trying to kill them. Baraka left, and did not go with them, but went his own path.
They then came across the lin kuei teple, hoping Sub-zero would join them in the battle.
After trying hours, Sub-Zero finally decided to join them in the quest to kill the new alliance.
Back at the place where DK and Quan Chi were, the dk openend a mystical door that led them to a myserious place. Quan Chi confused, said what is this place. But then the Dragon king replied, "We have found them."
"We have found who?" asked Quan Chi. "We have found my undefeatable army!"
Part 2 continued...
After finding the Dragon Kings army, Quan Chi now realized that if he could control the army using the special amulet that was in Shang Tsungs possession, he would be able to order the army to kill the DK, and send them to finally kill the Earthrealm warriors, ending the tournament. but he had now realized that Shang Tsung was still back at his palace, half-dead, feeding off the limitless souls. He would have to confront him, and battle him to death.
But knowing that Shang Tsung was nearly dead, he knew a victory would be an easy battle. Quan Chi then said to the DK, "We must go back to Shang Tsungs palace for...um..er...eh...so we can kill Shang Tsung, and use his limitless supply of souls to feed you and the Oni's, and you can absorb them to give you more power."
After thinking quite a bit, the dk agreed to go with him. He brought the army with him along the trip aswell.
After finally arriving there, they saw Shang tsung, laying there, dying, gasping for air. He looked at over at Quan Chi and the dk, fearing death. He knew Quan Chi had come to kill him.
Quan Chi walked over to him confidently, knowing only one skull fireball would end his life. But as he walked over to Shang tsung, he noticed something, very strange, and breathtaking. He realized Shang tsung did not have the amulet to control the Dragon Kings army.
Confused and shocked, he said to Shang tsung in a whisper, "Where is the amulet?"
"Hehehe', laughed shang tsung, weakly. To a sudden surprise, Baraka came out from behind a pillar, holding the amulet of the undefeatable army.
"Baraka!", gasped quan chi, shicked. "Muahahahaha", laughed Baraka. "Now i control the undefeatable army Quan Chi, now i am able to defeat you, hahaha!"
Realizing he was about to be killed, Quan Chi turned to the Dragon King and said, "Kill this enemy".
But before the Dragon King could move a muscle, baraka shouted to the army, "kill the Dragon King!" After hearing them words, the whole army surrounded the Dragon King, ready to pounce upon him and tear out his insides.
Quan Chi on the other hand, knew he would be next. In a desperate jump, he ran for his life, escaping the palace without baraka seeing him.
With the army ready to attack, the Dragon King then looked over at Baraka. From behind a door, Nightwolf and Smoke appeared, smiling evily.
"Haha, Dragon King, meet my new alliance, Nightwolf and Smoke."
With the dragon King now extremely angry, a rage circled from within him, creating a loud roar come from his mouth. Baraka, Nightwolf and Smoke watched as the Dragon King's eyes became a fiery yellow, with flames coming from his body. In shock, the three new alliances ran away petrified, while the Dragon King sttod before his own army, that were ready to kill him.
After several moments, the army jumped upon him, using their swords to slash the dk. After losing some blood, the dragon kings fury grew, until, "AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!".
The Dragon King unleashed an unbelivably huge amount of fire upon the army, burning nearly half the soldiers.
With the army in shock, and with half of it remaining, the Dragon King spoke these words. "One day i will regain control of my army, and i will command them to kill everyone in Earthrealm, gaining invincibility!".
With that said, the Dragon King left the chamber, searching for the new alliance of Baraka, Nightwolf and Smoke.
With the new trio miles away, the Dragon King still searched, hoping he could find his amulet, and regain control of the army.
But with the new trio back in a new palace ground, they now laughed, hoping they would go and find the army and order them to kill their enemies.
but what Smoke and Nightwolf didn't know, is that baraka would use the army to kill them, having all the power to himself.
And with the new trio planning, with the Dragon King searching, and with the Earthrealm warriors training, they all come together for battle, each individual hoping to win the tournament of Mortal Kombat: Deception!
THE END!
Well, thats my own storyline for deception. let me know what you think of it!
THE STORYLINE FOR MKD:
After defeating the deadly alliance, the warriors of earthrealm settled down to enjoy their relatively peaceful realm.
After spending most of their time relaxing, Blaze spent most of his time training and perfecting his fighting moves. the rest of the warriors looked at him, confused, and just gazed upon him, training 24/7. After waiting several days, Blaze still did not stop, and Jax knew he was up to something.
he walked up to Blaze, and asked, "why are you training and killing yourself Blaze, what is wrong?"
"Earthrealm is in danger," he said. "The Dragon King has been born. He will take over Earthrealm and the Netherealm. He will kill us all. I must train. We all must train. Otherwise the Dragon King will come back, bring his undefeatable army with him, and kill everyone."
After hearing this, Jax told Sonya, and they then informed the rest of the Earthrealm warriors. After hearing the news, they trained. And waited.
Meanwhile, Scorpion was still on the hunt for Quan Chi. he had been searching everywhere for him. Until he stumbled across the egg of the Dragon King. With the Dragon King training right there.
"What is this?" he said to himself. He then realized that it was the father of the undefeatable army. He realized if he didn't run away the Dragon King would instantly kill him.
But suddenly, Quan Chi showed up aswell, by accident, searching for Kano. But hadn't realized the Dragon King, but he was more interested in Scorpion. "Hahahahaha..."laughed quan chi. "So we meet again Scorpion. "ROAR", the Dragon King roared. Quan Chi suddenly noticed the Dragon King standing next to his egg.
"Who are you mortals?" the Dragon King asked, with a reptilian voice.
"I am your slave", Quan Chi said, frightened to death, knowing the Dragon King was invincible.
"and who are you mortal?", he said, pointing to scorpion. "I...am....um.." he stuttered, speechless.
"He has come to kill you", he said to the Dragon King, trying to backstab Scorpion so the DK would kill him.
"ARGHHHHH", he growled, thinking, Scorpion was here to kill him.
Realizing Quan Chi's plan, Scorpion hurled his spear into a wall, reeling himself in, escaping. And then ran for his life, knowing he couldn't beat the DK.
With Quan Chi unable to escape, he said these words to DK. "If you help me kill Scorpion and the Earthrealm warriors, I will do everything in my power to serve you."
After thinking quite a bit, the dk said,"Hmmmm. you could be of use to me. Come with me", he said. "Where are we going?" Quan Chi asked. "To find my undefeatable army", he replied, smiling.
meanwhile, back in Shang Tsungs underground chamber in his palace, moloch and Drahmin knew nothing about their defeat. Realizing the Deadly Alliance was done, moloch and Drahmin searched for new masters, eating mortals along the way.
After walking a long time, Moloch and Drahmin stumbled across the Dragon King and Quan Chi. Quan Chi greeted them, showing them the dragon King, and telling them that the DK was their new master.
The DK agreed to keeping Moloch and Drahmin as henchmen to kill any enemies in their way. The DK agreed to feed them mortals along the way.
After searching far and long, Quan Chi saw Kano, performing a kata, similar to Liu kangs. The DK came up to him and said, Who are you?. Kano then replied, "I am the champion of Mortal Kombat, Liuy Kang". Quan Chi then rememebred that Liu Kangs soul had possessed Kano when he cut Shang tsung.
"Join us", the dk growled. "No, said Kano (kang). You must battle me in a duel to the death", e said, testing his new powers in kanos body.
After agreeing, the dk and liu began a fight to the death. but Liu Kang realized if he did die, only Kanos body would be destroyed, not his spirit.
After throwing millions of punches, using extreme moves, and pulling out swords and weapons, the dk finally had enough. "It is time for you to die", he said. Confused, Liu Kang tried to kick him, but the Dragon King then sucked in a huge amount of air, and then breathed a flamethrower of flames onto Kanos body.
After being burnt to a crisp, Kano's body was now a pile of ash lying on the ground, but Liu kangs spirit still stood there, laughing at the DK. "Hahahaha, Dragon King, you may have beaten my body, but you haven't beaten me!" he said, laughing.
The Dk realized that the spirit of Liu Kang had fooled him. Liu kang then ran away, still laughing, then disappeared. With the dk furied, he continued his search for his army, bringing Quan Chi and the oni's with him.
Meanwhile, Baraka was still in the netherealm, training day and night, trying to get revenge on Quan Chi.
But after training one day, he stumbled across a mystical portal-like circle. He walked through it, crossing through realms. He now realized he was in Earth realm. Gladly, he watched as he was now free, and with all the power he had gained, he knew he was able to kill Quan Chi. Searching for Quan Chi, he walked upon a giant egg. he realized this was the egg of the long-forgotten Dragon king. he realized that the Dk was out there. But then as he walked, he saw the robe of Quan Chi, laying on the floor. Confused, he now knew that he had allied with the dk, too frightened of his powers. With the dk, Baraka would be killed.
So Baraka then searched for the earth warriors, planning to persuade them to kill the dk and Quan Chi. After searching long, he found them.
The earth warriors took guard, preparing for a battle. "I do not wish to fight", baraka said. 'I have come here to tell you you must kill the dk and Quan Chi. They will take over both realms if nothing is done."
After realizing Baraka was on their side, not fully, they then searched for the dk and Quan Chi, trying to kill them. Baraka left, and did not go with them, but went his own path.
They then came across the lin kuei teple, hoping Sub-zero would join them in the battle.
After trying hours, Sub-Zero finally decided to join them in the quest to kill the new alliance.
Back at the place where DK and Quan Chi were, the dk openend a mystical door that led them to a myserious place. Quan Chi confused, said what is this place. But then the Dragon king replied, "We have found them."
"We have found who?" asked Quan Chi. "We have found my undefeatable army!"
Part 2 continued...
After finding the Dragon Kings army, Quan Chi now realized that if he could control the army using the special amulet that was in Shang Tsungs possession, he would be able to order the army to kill the DK, and send them to finally kill the Earthrealm warriors, ending the tournament. but he had now realized that Shang Tsung was still back at his palace, half-dead, feeding off the limitless souls. He would have to confront him, and battle him to death.
But knowing that Shang Tsung was nearly dead, he knew a victory would be an easy battle. Quan Chi then said to the DK, "We must go back to Shang Tsungs palace for...um..er...eh...so we can kill Shang Tsung, and use his limitless supply of souls to feed you and the Oni's, and you can absorb them to give you more power."
After thinking quite a bit, the dk agreed to go with him. He brought the army with him along the trip aswell.
After finally arriving there, they saw Shang tsung, laying there, dying, gasping for air. He looked at over at Quan Chi and the dk, fearing death. He knew Quan Chi had come to kill him.
Quan Chi walked over to him confidently, knowing only one skull fireball would end his life. But as he walked over to Shang tsung, he noticed something, very strange, and breathtaking. He realized Shang tsung did not have the amulet to control the Dragon Kings army.
Confused and shocked, he said to Shang tsung in a whisper, "Where is the amulet?"
"Hehehe', laughed shang tsung, weakly. To a sudden surprise, Baraka came out from behind a pillar, holding the amulet of the undefeatable army.
"Baraka!", gasped quan chi, shicked. "Muahahahaha", laughed Baraka. "Now i control the undefeatable army Quan Chi, now i am able to defeat you, hahaha!"
Realizing he was about to be killed, Quan Chi turned to the Dragon King and said, "Kill this enemy".
But before the Dragon King could move a muscle, baraka shouted to the army, "kill the Dragon King!" After hearing them words, the whole army surrounded the Dragon King, ready to pounce upon him and tear out his insides.
Quan Chi on the other hand, knew he would be next. In a desperate jump, he ran for his life, escaping the palace without baraka seeing him.
With the army ready to attack, the Dragon King then looked over at Baraka. From behind a door, Nightwolf and Smoke appeared, smiling evily.
"Haha, Dragon King, meet my new alliance, Nightwolf and Smoke."
With the dragon King now extremely angry, a rage circled from within him, creating a loud roar come from his mouth. Baraka, Nightwolf and Smoke watched as the Dragon King's eyes became a fiery yellow, with flames coming from his body. In shock, the three new alliances ran away petrified, while the Dragon King sttod before his own army, that were ready to kill him.
After several moments, the army jumped upon him, using their swords to slash the dk. After losing some blood, the dragon kings fury grew, until, "AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!".
The Dragon King unleashed an unbelivably huge amount of fire upon the army, burning nearly half the soldiers.
With the army in shock, and with half of it remaining, the Dragon King spoke these words. "One day i will regain control of my army, and i will command them to kill everyone in Earthrealm, gaining invincibility!".
With that said, the Dragon King left the chamber, searching for the new alliance of Baraka, Nightwolf and Smoke.
With the new trio miles away, the Dragon King still searched, hoping he could find his amulet, and regain control of the army.
But with the new trio back in a new palace ground, they now laughed, hoping they would go and find the army and order them to kill their enemies.
but what Smoke and Nightwolf didn't know, is that baraka would use the army to kill them, having all the power to himself.
And with the new trio planning, with the Dragon King searching, and with the Earthrealm warriors training, they all come together for battle, each individual hoping to win the tournament of Mortal Kombat: Deception!
THE END!
Well, thats my own storyline for deception. let me know what you think of it!


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That's good. I like your ideas, are you gonna make another one.
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Yeah, that undefeatable army of the ancient Dragon King is way cool. We should be able to fight them in a " gauntlet-survival " type of fight
hmm... that beginning seems strangely familiar... ah yes, now I rememb3r... perhaps you should call it 'The (Dragon King's)Mummy(fied Army) Returns'
... which brings me to my next point: Quan Chi was attempting to revive the DK's army, so he of all people would know where they were located, not the Dragon King who had been in an egg for a millenia... and Scorpion seems totally weak... he actually stutters when confronted by the Scorpio--er, I mean Dragon King... Scorpion who's died and gone to hell almost every single MK game and then some! I realize this happens in order for Quan Chi to trick the DK into attacking Scorp and getting in his good graces, but a more realistic approach (if you insist on biting the scene from The Mummy Returns) would've been something like this:
Quan chi: (to Dragon King) My Lord! I am your faithful servant... I have come to warn you! This assassin was attempting to prevent you from awakening! Now he means to kill us both!
DK: (to Quan) We shall see where your loyalties lie... (faces Scorpion) You... ah you are a no mere ninja... you are a hellspawn. Well spectre? Does the other speak the truth? Do you mean to kill me?
Scorp: He is a liar and a coward. The sorceror is my prey, I have no quarrel with you demon. But if you interfere with my revenge, I shall destroy you as well.
DK: So you do not serve me?
Scorp: I serve no one... I hold alliegance to myself alone
QC: (to DK) My King, believe me... Let me live, help me destroy our enemies, and I can help you to restore your army.
*seeing the markings on Quan's body, the Dragon King recognizes them to be symbols for magic encantations to resurrect his army*
Scorpion realizes that Quan-Chi has succeeded in decieving the Dragon King, and prepares to fight for his life
Quan chi: (to Dragon King) My Lord! I am your faithful servant... I have come to warn you! This assassin was attempting to prevent you from awakening! Now he means to kill us both!
DK: (to Quan) We shall see where your loyalties lie... (faces Scorpion) You... ah you are a no mere ninja... you are a hellspawn. Well spectre? Does the other speak the truth? Do you mean to kill me?
Scorp: He is a liar and a coward. The sorceror is my prey, I have no quarrel with you demon. But if you interfere with my revenge, I shall destroy you as well.
DK: So you do not serve me?
Scorp: I serve no one... I hold alliegance to myself alone
QC: (to DK) My King, believe me... Let me live, help me destroy our enemies, and I can help you to restore your army.
*seeing the markings on Quan's body, the Dragon King recognizes them to be symbols for magic encantations to resurrect his army*
Scorpion realizes that Quan-Chi has succeeded in decieving the Dragon King, and prepares to fight for his life
I think its pretty good. I guess you could had made it longer with other characters mixing up stories, also adding important elements, but other then that; I enjoyed reading it.
I liked how you made the story paragraphs, separated so I wouldnt be lazy to read. Good dialogs as well.
4/5
I liked how you made the story paragraphs, separated so I wouldnt be lazy to read. Good dialogs as well.
4/5


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2/5 Not to be rude Sorry it just wasn't that great it was ok just didn't go together right being that some of them are dead and doesn;t go along with the story. Just as I read it wasn;t that great. Unlike the one that someone made not to long ago now that ones really long.
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| Raiden_is_god Wrote: 2/5 Not to be rude Sorry it just wasn't that great it was ok just didn't go together right being that some of them are dead and doesn;t go along with the story. Just as I read it wasn;t that great. Unlike the one that someone made not to long ago now that ones really long. |
It was Elder God who attempted a mortal kombat story and after reading all of that then this one I like Elder God's a lot better.
I agree with what has been said about using scenes from the mummy returns.

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Sorry guys. I had no idea this seemed like the mummy returns!
Anywayz i might add more to it soon and maybe change it a bit.
Anyway keep checking back to see if i've changed it. thanks for he opinions.
Anywayz i might add more to it soon and maybe change it a bit.
Anyway keep checking back to see if i've changed it. thanks for he opinions.

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i have added another part to the story. Part 2. It continues the story from where it left off. Tell me what you think!
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