Two things wrong:

If Raiden was too weak to defeat the Dragon King then I doubt the Elder Gods would allow him to become one again...

Second, Kabal became good and the Black Dragon is evil. He left it to fight crime in MK3.

That's why I think it sucks, sorry but critism is a bitch sometimes.

Not bad, way better than BRENDAN's is. He's just insulting your transition because you made a similar post to his and he feels like you're competition, so he's just trying to bring you down.

I wouldn't mind playing your MK7, just not enough new characters.

Story was boring, and the roster looks like you just juggled up MK:D roster and added khameleon(god knows why) and took away a few(good) characters.

What a childish punk HAHAHAHA just to say something like that. I hope you got my reply to your "threat".

I'm sorry LKA I was a bit harsh on ya but you can expect that from a lot of ppl here that don't got any talent. My bad!

Better that Brendans at least. Couple things:

1. Fujin reinstated as protector of earthrealm, raiden goes back to elder gods because of wounds.

Fujin was appointed as protector of earthrealm at the end of MK4 and was never removed of that status even when raiden came back, as demonstrated by his MKDA ending when he said that he would remain on earth as their god of thunder. Since raiden gave up his status as elder god he can't go back unless he did something extremely monumental.

2. Frost appointed head of lin kuei.

I doubt sub zero would appoint frost of the lin kuei. He would probably give that position to someone more experienced, like smoke. But then again we don't know his storyline or even if hes assisting sub zero so i guess its possible, but she would probably end up taking his medallion and getting overpowered and killed by it. Besides sareena is also their and might have plans of her own that go into conflict with theirs.

3. Kabal joins black dragon.

Very highly unlikeley since at the end of MK3 he left organized crime forever to fight against it.

4. Khameleon.

She isn't recognized as an official canon character regardless of the fact that she had a storyline. Meat from MK4 also had a storyline but also isn't official.

5. Story.

What you said just explains what happens between MKD and MK7 and doesn't really have a ground story for MK7. Why does MK7 take place?

Better than brendans. Less points compared to his. I would play it, but only because its MK.

Xalibur, just because you failed English class for making up a lame MK story to read in front of your peers doesn't mean you can just critisize mine. I like the idea of Fujin coming back but I'm sorry I just don't see the Elder Gods letting Raiden come back after he decided to quit in the first place and got beat by the Dragon King. Unless Raiden destroys him in the story...

I liked this story, though I think many characters weren't mentioned.

What happened to Ermac, Kenshi and others?

And there are too many deaths and I don't like the idea of the Dragon King dying either. But this is your story.

But it's a nice story! Good work!

How about this?

Shang Tsung was afraid that the DK was too powerful. Aligned with Quan Chi, to absorb Liu Kang, along with other plans, knowing full well that only Liu Kang could defeat the DK.

Tsung plans to resurect Liu Kang, despite his hatred for him.

(Gobble Gobble Gobble!)

Brendan, get over it. You don't seem to mind doing the same thing to other people.

Here's what'll happen (in my twisted mind) between MK6 & MK7.


Raiden, assaulted by the Dragon King's hordes, is too weak to guard Earthrealm, so he re-instates Fujin to help him watch over Earthrealm.


Sub-Zero dies in a battle against dozens of Tekunin, but before he dies, he appoints Smoke the head of the Lin Kuei. He & her new Lin Kuei team up & destroy the Tekunin, but makes Sektor rejoin the Lin Kuei as a slave to Smoke. Frost, however, believes she can get the head of the Lin Kuei to turn on him. Dareena also belives this, so they set up a conspiracy.


Reiko re-appears, & joins the Dragon King, but Baraka, for whatever reason, has a grudge with him. Havik joins the Dragon King's army.


Ashrah kills Darrius, & returns to Orderrealm. However, the Elder Gods command her to re-cleanse Drahmin from his Oni state. Shujinko joins the Shaolin monks with Bo' Rai Cho & Kung Lao. Hotaru nearly kills Dairou in battle, so Dairou joins the Dragon King's Army out of spite.


Kira finds Jarek & recruits him back into the Black Dragon, bent on destroying the Red Dragon. Liu Kang takes his fate & dies permanently.


Reptile & Khameleon remeet & go to a barren sector of Outworld to reform the Saurian culture. Nitara & Victoria [(Nitara's "sister" (new kharacter], however, spy on the two, & gather info, to exploit Reptile's new klan & try to get them to join Nitara's vampire klan as slaves.


Sonya & Jax recruit Ben Kobra into the Special Forces. Kabal returns, & tells the Special Forces that he's turned over a new leaf, so he joins the Special Forces to get a chance to kill Mavado, with qualms from Jax & Sonya. Kenshi has been assigned to infiltrate the Red Dragon Base & kill off as many people as he can. Mavado, however, has some surprises, such as the fact that Hotaru has joined the Red Dragon.


Ermac & Nightwolf create a klan of telekinetic warriors. A new telekinetic warrior, Karnak, joins the new klan, known as the Psy-Soldiers of Outworld.


Scorpion meets up with his wife in mortality, Viper (my own design, check the thread), & they both go after Quan Chi, Drahmin & Moloch together. Jade & Rain arrest Tanya & kill Mileena, whilst Kitana remains as princess of Edenia. Goro's son, Gokoro (i dunno, new kharacter), who also happens to be Sheeva's son joins up with the Edenian Forces.


ROSTER for MK7:

Scorpion
Viper
Frost
Sonya
Jax
Ben Kobra
Cyrax
Sektor
Smoke
Sareena
Kenshi
Ermac
Nightwolf
Shujinko
Bo' Rai Cho
Kung Lao
Jade
Rain
Kitana
Baraka
Hotaru
Fujin
Kabal
Kira
Havik
Reptile
Khameleon
Reiko
Tanya
Nitara
Victoria
Jarek
Raiden
Dairou
Karnak
Drahmin
Mavado
Ashrah
Moloch
Gokoro
Shao Kahn
Mileena
Kia
Jataaka
Sub-Zero the 7th
Kano


MK7 Story:

The Dragon King reigns, while Baraka & Reiko's forces are regaining. Shao Kahn, however, is trying to regain his power (ooh, conflict) with the help of Mileena (yes, he revived her...), Kia & Jataaka, but first, he has unfinished business with Quan Chi. Smoke is having a successful reign as Lin Kue Grandmaster, & a new Sub-Zero appears! (MK7's Sub-Zero the 7th) Sareena & Frost are conversing as to what to do about him. Scorpion & Viper are after Quan Chi, Drahmin's after Scorpion, Ashrah's after Drahmin. Kira & Jarek are re-creating the Black Dragon, & Kano is found to be alive!


The Special Forces (now with Kobra & Kabal) are after the Red Dragon, while Mavado & Hotaru are holding off Kenshi's wrath. Reptile & Khameleon are recreating the Saurian people, while Nitara & Victoria are after them. Ermac & Nightwolf are creating their new klan. Shunjinko, BRC & Kung Lao are training new warriors.

Xalibar Wrote: Brendan, get over it. You don't seem to mind doing the same thing to other people.

See, all he does is whine and complain when others criticize his work, and brings out dumb, childish insults to those who say this one is better. For the last time, grow up. You're a disappointment and an embarrassment to these boards

You and Xalibur have one thing in common.. you're both annoying twirps.. at least I have decency to apologize to other people. Coming on these boards saying "Yeah this is definately better than his or hers" is moronic and quite frankly pathetic. I just hope you can see this some day.

Good work, LKA

Get over yourself dude, he played his thread off of yours so i was comparing it. And the fact was that it was better than yours.
Besides it can't be that weak and pathetic if you're still bitching about it.