New character concept-Hatsuma, Ninja of Black Chaos. Check it out!!!!!!!
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posted04/30/2004 02:29 AM (UTC)by
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This is a character that I made up a couple of days back.
Creator SmokeNc-017
Name:Hatsuma
Age:Unknown
Height:6'4
Weight:190lbs
Eyes:Burn blue
Hair:Black, shoulder lenght(turns hilighted silver after fusion)
Color-azure
Alliance:Unknown
Ninja:Shinobi
Abilities:Controls gem stones as weapons,pyrokenesis
Disciplines:Pheonix,Ninjitsu,Dragon,Wolf,Drunken Fist,Boshido,Whip chain

Special attacks:
Rising pheonix- Creates a pheonix image out of flames that engulfs the opponent
Diamond fangs-Shoots out diamond shards that, after puncturing the opponent explode.
Diamond shell-creates a sheild around that renders him invincible for a short time.
Ruby reqium-Upgrades whip chain to ruby blades that, as it intangles opponent, the ruby spikes burn inside the wounds. Diamond Wave-Hatsuma raise a wave of diamonds out the ground and launches it at his opponent.
Dimension shift-form of lightspeed where Hatsuma gains acceleration by jumping through different dimensions, randomly striking the opponent with his whip chain.
Black Chaos-The ultimate attack. Hatsuma will use the power of pure evil, carnage and saddness and harness it into one pam blast that can dessolate intire mountain ranges. However every time he uses this power he becomes less and less human.

Fatality:
Sapphire Storm-Hatsuma raises sapphires from the ground. The sapphires morph into sharp gem blades. They turn at the opponent and launch them selves through the victim, tearing away at his flesh like rain.
Emerald Dragon-summons a two headed dragon made of emeralds from the ground. As it comes up, it intwines the opponent and then constricts them, impaling them on it's spines.It moves it's body counter intutivly(One layer goes left, the other goes right) it cuts the opponent to pieces before finally biting of the opponents upper torso.
Extinguished Humanity-Hatsuma charges his black chaos for one final blast, giving all of his soulto the chaos emerald inside of him. He shoots a blast so powerful, not only of negativity but also his pyro that it incenerates hi opponent. at the end you don't see a ninja, you see a spectre with an eerie blue glow and his soul engulfed in flames behined him.

Story:
Hatsuma was an elite shinobi who had no equal in when it came combat. However since he was a runaway shinobi he also had a price on his head.Many who tried collecting the bounty were sent back battered and broken or with missing limbs. Hatsuma was a ninja who mastered many animal fighting styles and the whip chain. He was also born with the unique ability to control fire. As he trained in his village his pyro skills he learned how to manipulate them into objects.Soon he was untouchable.

He did not let his power go to his head. He had an honor code which said he would not harm the innocent nor would he fight if he could avoid it.This code would eventually lead to his present predicament.

On one of his assassination attempts he found out that his target was a run away kunochi(female ninja) who was helping a family with a bandit problem.This went against the shinobi code and as punishment she was to be executed by the best, that being Hatsuma.When Hatsuma finally found his target he could not execute her. He was in love. However he did not realize that he was being watched on his mission, and by letting the escaped kunochi go free he marked him self for death.

One day Hatsuma stumbled upon an old temple for shelter. When he went inside his eye caught a black luster on an old Buddah statue. As he opproached it, he discovered that it was a black emerald. When he picked it up he was instantly engulfed in black and blue flames. The emerald then merged within his heart. When the fusion was complete Hatsuma fell to the floor unconscience. when he woke up he felt a strange power inside of him. Unaware of the fact that he had been discovered by his clan he stepped out side of the temple only to be ambushed. Still weary from his earlier experience Hatsuma was unable to defend himself. One of the ninjas tried cutting of Hatsuma's right arm, however as soon as the blade touched Hatsuma's arm his skin became diamond and shattered the blade. Overcome with anger Hatsuma lashed out, in so doing he raised a dragon made of emeralds that slaughtered the assassins. It was then that Hatsuma realized his power. He had the power to control precious gems, a secret and deadly weapon. It was also at that instant that he felt his soul darken. He realized that every time he took a life he gave up more of his humanity.He now realized that he could never be with the person he cared for the most, Iayka, the run away kunochi that he was sent to kill.

Late at night Hatsuma would find him self waking up in a cold sweat, drenched in blood with the bodies of those he has killed around him. The black chaos would take over his mind when he slept. He was now in a constant struggle between his humanity and the darkness that grew inside of him.

After killing hundreds of people the black chaos was fed and it evolved from a gem to a part of his soul. It opened a portal to Outworld and in the back of his mind Hatsuma knew that there had to be somebody there that can relive him of this parasite, friend or foe.

I hope you like it. Sorry if it sounds more like anime than Mortal Kombat.
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04/03/2004 05:58 PM (UTC)
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Some one please give me some feed back.>:0
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Cyborg_wolf
04/03/2004 06:11 PM (UTC)
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Dude, it sounds really kool, but id on't really get the thing about his hair. Nevermind, it really sounds nice.
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04/03/2004 08:26 PM (UTC)
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I really like this man. It's veyr original. I love the idea of using the gem stones and I really like the attacks and Fatalities. The story is also very good. I'm intrigued as to would be able to help this guy regain his humanity.
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04/03/2004 09:18 PM (UTC)
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I like the idea but I would never want him in the game because there's already way too many ninjas and don't you think if he had all those moves wouldnt he be a little cheap in the game?
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04/05/2004 02:53 AM (UTC)
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Thanks tgrant, I'm going to put him in the Character Spec, thread so he doeasn't get lost.
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04/05/2004 03:07 AM (UTC)
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He didn't make this character up. He's full of shit.

The character Hatsuma is from "Shinobi" , a title on PS2.

Stupid ass ripping other people's ideas and taking credit.
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04/05/2004 03:17 AM (UTC)
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Two things.1
1)Hatsuma is a common ninja name.
2)The shinobi are an actual caln of ninjas with many sub divisions such as earth, wind, fire, metal, light, dark,water, lightning and so on. So before you get P.M.S. stop chewing me out and get your ninja facts straight.
Look at tgrant's character-Ryoko. Ryoko was the name of the demon space pirate from Tenshi. Plus last time I checked Hatsuma from "Shinobi"never had these abilities. I know cause I'm a fan of the game.
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04/05/2004 03:55 AM (UTC)
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I think that he would work well in MK. I know that there are alot of ninjas in the game but maybe a shinobi class ninja would bring something new.
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04/07/2004 01:05 AM (UTC)
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Please give me some more feed back. I'm going to post him in the Character thread, but until then I don't want to loose him.
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04/07/2004 02:05 AM (UTC)
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the attacks are a lil exagerated.
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04/07/2004 02:17 AM (UTC)
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Well he does have an evil gem fused with his soul.
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04/08/2004 12:17 AM (UTC)
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What changes should I make, if any?
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04/08/2004 10:11 AM (UTC)
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I think your concept is fine as it is. It is really up to you to choose what needs changing. Read through and edit anything that doesn't feel right.
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04/10/2004 12:26 AM (UTC)
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I think he's fine, I just want to know what you think.
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04/10/2004 08:51 PM (UTC)
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I was thinking about adding him to the Dragon King's army first and then the Lin Kuei. maybe he can start his own clan, the Shinigami a band of elite ninjas of the highest calibur who were once runaways. Now they are one of the most feared clans in all of the realms.
I'm thinking of putting this in,but then I think that I would be ruining his story. What's your opinion.
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04/10/2004 08:57 PM (UTC)
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SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
This is a character that I made up a couple of days back.
Creator SmokeNc-017
Name:Hatsuma
Age:Unknown
Height:6'4
Weight:190lbs
Eyes:Burn blue
Hair:Black, shoulder lenght(turns hilighted silver after fusion)
Color-azure
Alliance:Unknown
Ninja:Shinobi
Abilities:Controls gem stones as weapons,pyrokenesis
Disciplines:Pheonix,Ninjitsu,Dragon,Wolf,Drunken Fist,Boshido,Whip chain

Special attacks:
Rising pheonix- Creates a pheonix image out of flames that engulfs the opponent
Diamond fangs-Shoots out diamond shards that, after puncturing the opponent explode.
Diamond shell-creates a sheild around that renders him invincible for a short time.
Ruby reqium-Upgrades whip chain to ruby blades that, as it intangles opponent, the ruby spikes burn inside the wounds.
Diamond Wave-Hatsuma raise a wave of diamonds out the ground and launches it at his opponent.
Dimension shift-form of lightspeed where Hatsuma gains acceleration by jumping through different dimensions, randomly striking the opponent with his whip chain.
Black Chaos-The ultimate attack. Hatsuma will use the power of pure evil, carnage and saddness and harness it into one pam blast that can dessolate intire mountain ranges. However every time he uses this power he becomes less and less human.

Fatality:
Sapphire Storm-Hatsuma raises sapphires from the ground. The sapphires morph into sharp gem blades. They turn at the opponent and launch them selves through the victim, tearing away at his flesh like rain.
Emerald Dragon-summons a two headed dragon made of emeralds from the ground. As it comes up, it intwines the opponent and then constricts them, impaling them on it's spines.It moves it's body counter intutivly(One layer goes left, the other goes right) it cuts the opponent to pieces before finally biting of the opponents upper torso.
Extinguished Humanity-Hatsuma charges his black chaos for one final blast, giving all of his soulto the chaos emerald inside of him. He shoots a blast so powerful, not only of negativity but also his pyro that it incenerates hi opponent. at the end you don't see a ninja, you see a spectre with an eerie blue glow and his soul engulfed in flames behined him.

Story:
Hatsuma was an elite shinobi who had no equal in when it came combat. However since he was a runaway shinobi he also had a price on his head.Many who tried collecting the bounty were sent back battered and broken or with missing limbs. Hatsuma was a ninja who mastered many animal fighting styles and the whip chain. He was also born with the unique ability to control fire. As he trained in his village his pyro skills he learned how to manipulate them into objects.Soon he was untouchable.

He did not let his power go to his head. He had an honor code which said he would not harm the innocent nor would he fight if he could avoid it.This code would eventually lead to his present predicament.

On one of his assassination attempts he found out that his target was a run away kunochi(female ninja) who was helping a family with a bandit problem.This went against the shinobi code and as punishment she was to be executed by the best, that being Hatsuma.When Hatsuma finally found his target he could not execute her. He was in love. However he did not realize that he was being watched on his mission, and by letting the escaped kunochi go free he marked him self for death.

One day Hatsuma stumbled upon an old temple for shelter. When he went inside his eye caught a black luster on an old Buddah statue. As he opproached it, he discovered that it was a black emerald. When he picked it up he was instantly engulfed in black and blue flames. The emerald then merged within his heart. When the fusion was complete Hatsuma fell to the floor unconscience. when he woke up he felt a strange power inside of him. Unaware of the fact that he had been discovered by his clan he stepped out side of the temple only to be ambushed. Still weary from his earlier experience Hatsuma was unable to defend himself. One of the ninjas tried cutting of Hatsuma's right arm, however as soon as the blade touched Hatsuma's arm his skin became diamond and shattered the blade. Overcome with anger Hatsuma lashed out, in so doing he raised a dragon made of emeralds that slaughtered the assassins. It was then that Hatsuma realized his power. He had the power to control precious gems, a secret and deadly weapon. It was also at that instant that he felt his soul darken. He realized that every time he took a life he gave up more of his humanity.He now realized that he could never be with the person he cared for the most, Iayka, the run away kunochi that he was sent to kill.

Late at night Hatsuma would find him self waking up in a cold sweat, drenched in blood with the bodies of those he has killed around him. The black chaos would take over his mind when he slept. He was now in a constant struggle between his humanity and the darkness that grew inside of him.

After killing hundreds of people the black chaos was fed and it evolved from a gem to a part of his soul. It opened a portal to Outworld and in the back of his mind Hatsuma knew that there had to be somebody there that can relive him of this parasite, friend or foe.

I hope you like it. Sorry if it sounds more like anime than Mortal Kombat.


sounds cool an interesting cool fatalties and a good name keep it up.

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04/28/2004 03:41 AM (UTC)
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Hatsuma will never die!!!! Hahahahahahaha!!!I will keep bringing him back for those who didn't have a chance to read about him.
I also posted him in the Character Spec. Thread.
P.S. How do you make it into a Sticky?
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04/28/2004 04:04 AM (UTC)
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Only a mod can make this sticky. I'm a mod and this doesn't really qualify to be sticky. Also if no one replies do not intentionally keep bumping your thread, thanks.
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04/28/2004 04:22 AM (UTC)
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i happen ta like ninjas ..even if there is a bunch of em..this sounds like a great idea..except id tone down some of his special moves a lil bit..i know MK supposed ta be over the top..but some of those are crazy...but other than that it sounds good..do u have a scetch of him..so we can see whut he looks like??
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04/29/2004 03:59 AM (UTC)
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I'm working on one right now.
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04/29/2004 04:37 AM (UTC)
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Awesome ideas.
I really like the stage ideas you mentioned in the tournament. Thanks for the ideas.

P.s. hmmm... the word ninja of black chaos sounds a little like yugioh....hm....
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04/30/2004 02:29 AM (UTC)
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Yeah, maybe I should reword it to Black Chaos Ninja....I think I will.
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