Nice character. Her fatality is good and well detailed. I like her bio to.

Maybe you should make another fatality for her.

Very cool idea though I can't quite envision the fatality. They're pretty much my favorite things about this series, so they have to be brutal, yet imaginative and original! Yours is cool though, don't get me wrong! Just for kicks, why don't you add a cool Animality and Friendship.

TG

I like this character. The bio is very interesting and I like her Fatality. A proper description of her weapon would be nice and another Fatality would be good too.

It's not that she doesn't have another fatality I'm just choosing to only show certain parts about her. Same for the history of her weapon and the rest of her bio. In Broduer's next character contest, I'll reveal everything about her.

Name:Keely
Age:21
Home Realm:Outworld
Hair Color:Blond w/lighter blonde highlights
Eye Color:Hazel(before her death)Stone Gray(after her revival)
Allies:Siobhen,Li Mei
Foes:The Dragon King and all associated with him
Fighting Styles:Pai Lum Tao, Xiangxing Quan
Weapon Style:Ethereal Slayer
Special Moves(revealing only 2):
Telesault-she teleports and comes from under the opponent with a back flip kick
Pain Killer-dashes at the opponent, grabs them by the shoulder, flips over, and brings them over her shoulder face first into the ground.

Fatality
Ancesteral Light-she reveals her Ethereal Slayer, dashes at the opponent and slashes them across the chest, down the back, on the arms and legs only skin deep. She then impales the opponent in the stomach and lifts them up. The symbol on her blade glows a bright white and the opponent stiffens up and light begins shining out of the opponent's wounds. After a few moments, there is a bright flash and the opponent screams. After the flash you see Keely holding her Ethereal Slayer in the air with the opponent nowhere to be seen.


Thirst 4 Vengence-Keely's eyes turn white and begin glowing as she walks up towards the opponent. When she gets up to the opponent she goes into a rage and delivers flurries of punches and kicks that breaks the opponent's bones. She delivers a kick to the side of the opponent's knee causing the opponent to fall to their knees. She then pulls out her Ethereal Slayer and holds it high above her head. The opponent weakly begs for mercy but she brings the sword down hard spliting the opponent in half vertically and the opponent's halves fall to the side.

Bio(not revealing her whole story)
Her ancestor, Taia was the cause of the Dragon King's premature death 80,000 years ago with a sword that created from magic years before the Dragon King's reign by a sorcerer who foresaw the Dragon King's reign and created the sword to destroy him. Taia the holder of the sword passed this sword down generations in case of the Dragon King's ressurection. Now Keely holds the sword. Before the Dragon King's rebirth the DA held a tournament in her village for a spot in the DK's army but of course the villagers didn't know. Her best friend Li Mei won and the DA transplanted her soul into one of the army's mummified bodies, Keely was the only one who saw this and for that the DA sent out the warriors in the army to hunt her down and they killed her. But through mystical forces she was brought back to life after the Dragon King's rebirth and the DA's breakup. Now her soul cannot rest until she gains revenge on those who killed her and their associates.

Thoughts? Improvements? All thoughts constructive welcome. I also reposted it because the fatality ideas were running together in one big paragraph and I couldn't fix it.