noob_sareena Wrote: ok now, to be honest, she is just too powerful, even though she is a goddess, she has too much power, if all that would be in just use one move and boom, opponent is dead, wouldnt necarrily be fair, though her story is good, and the rest is good, but she does seem a bit too dependent on that light dagger of such, but i soppuse it is good, another prhase you could of used is hikari are which means in japanese let there be light! which could fit, but i soppuse she is good enough as it is, im saying eight and a half out of ten.

Thanks bro. i'm glad you like her! I understand that she is powerful and that is how I wanted her to be. Raiden seems to be a little to weak in the games. The gods need more power. And again, they would never give her loads of power or all these options in game! That would be cheap! lol

I'll keep that phrase in mind too.

Ryoko Hikari is a character made for the MKStory. She will play a vital part in the the story. If you want to see what this story is about then look at the url in my link.

yanden Wrote: Ryoko Hikari is a character made for the MKStory. She will play a vital part in the the story. If you want to see what this story is about then look at the url in my link.

Excellent! I'm glad that she'll be of use in the story. I'm also glad you like her enough to use her in it.

Good job tgrant. I really like this character it's very original. I think this is your best yet, the powers of light are really awesome and her special moves and weapon fit this character very well.The idea of her weapon is very cool and i think these special moves with the light would visually be very spectacular to see in the game. The only minor is that she indeed seems to be too powerfull, but other then that its a great character. And you say that she is hunting down Mavado and Kano. It would be great if Liu Kang's soul was in Kano's body while she is hunting him down. But i like your idea, she really fits in the MK world and i hope to see a character with these powers of light in a future MK game. Keep up the good work.

Daemos Wrote: Dude you honestly have waaay too much time on your hands creating these characters that will NEVER make it into an MK game. I'm being very serious, you're putting waaay too much effort in the wrong places.

First of all, your in no place to be saying what he should and shouldn't do with his time. You're obviously not an aspiring writer, and all writing skills originate from projects such as this. Was my 100+ page MK fanfic a waste of time as well?

Once again, you've done a good job, bro. Keep expanding on it, and perhaps implement her character into a fanfiction. Just keep the character development rolling.

Great job, bro!

10/10

spike81 Wrote: Good job tgrant. I really like this character it's very original. I think this is your best yet, the powers of light are really awesome and her special moves and weapon fit this character very well.The idea of her weapon is very cool and i think these special moves with the light would visually be very spectacular to see in the game. The only minor is that she indeed seems to be too powerfull, but other then that its a great character. And you say that she is hunting down Mavado and Kano. It would be great if Liu Kang's soul was in Kano's body while she is hunting him down. But i like your idea, she really fits in the MK world and i hope to see a character with these powers of light in a future MK game. Keep up the good work.

Thanks, man. I’m happy that you liked Ryoko’s concept. As for her power, I’ve already explained the reasoning for that. And seeing her powers of light, especially the Spectrum Blast, in game would be sweet!

Your idea of Kang’s soul being in Kano’s body while she hunts him down is a good idea and it would add a big twist. She would be able to sue the dagger to detect whether he is good or not.

Thanks again, man and you have some good ideas!

TemperaryUserName Wrote: Daemos Wrote: Dude you honestly have waaay too much time on your hands creating these characters that will NEVER make it into an MK game. I'm being very serious, you're putting waaay too much effort in the wrong places. First of all, your in no place to be saying what he should and shouldn't do with his time. You're obviously not an aspiring writer, and all writing skills originate from projects such as this. Was my 100+ page MK fanfic a waste of time as well? Once again, you've done a good job, bro. Keep expanding on it, and perhaps implement her character into a fanfiction. Just keep the character development rolling.

Thanks bro! And thanks for the support! I hope to be able to get Ryoko into a fan-fiction, but it won’t happen straight away. I’m glad you liked the concept.

Reiko1337 Wrote: Great job, bro! 10/10

Thanks bro! I’m glad you liked the concept too!

This character is simply awesome. I hope they do something like this in the game! I think she has so much potential!

queve Wrote: This character is simply awesome. I hope they do something like this in the game! I think she has so much potential!

i agree with u queve and trgant this 1 of the best charchters concept ive ever seen she sounds cool i bet she can beat raiden lol

queve Wrote: This character is simply awesome. I hope they do something like this in the game! I think she has so much potential!

Thankyou again, Queve! Ryoko has been very well received and I’m glad you like her so much!

sektor101 Wrote: queve Wrote: This character is simply awesome. I hope they do something like this in the game! I think she has so much potential! i agree with u queve and trgant this 1 of the best charchters concept ive ever seen she sounds cool i bet she can beat raiden lol

Thanks Sektor101. I’m glad you like her. Ryoko vs Raiden would be a cool match. I think it could go either way myself!