icypain Wrote: Great story shows the true meaning of deception and that lovely dark feel exellent

Thankyou Icypain.

I'm glad you found those elements within the story. I'm sure it made it better for you.

Tanya's quite a power-hungry thing, wouldn't you say? lol. I love it, Mr. T!!!

Michelle_the_Belle Wrote: Tanya's quite a power-hungry thing, wouldn't you say? lol. I love it, Mr. T!!!

She is that power mad! I'm glad you liked the story too! Thanks!

I really liked this a lot. Except for the fact that you killed Sindel, who's my favourite female Kombatant of all time. But excellently written and quite possible. I'd love to see Tanya more involved in the story than she was in MK4.

bezou Wrote: I really liked this a lot. Except for the fact that you killed Sindel, who's my favourite female Kombatant of all time. But excellently written and quite possible. I'd love to see Tanya more involved in the story than she was in MK4.

Thanks a lot man. Sindel dying was a nice plot twist and was probably unexpected. It didn't have to happen. I too like Sindel a lot so it was a shame to kill her.

If Tanya was this involved in MK4, she'd have probably been received a lot better. Hopefully, she will be in MKD.

Yea I LOVED IT! Its really god, the ending is cool, but wat happens to Mileena? How bout if mileena turns against her since she wanted that realm for herself and Mileena brutally beats her for using her..then later Tanya goes to the Dragon King for help and tells him wat Mileena did and there, The dragon Kings kills Tanya, thanks to his loyal ally mileena.

really good story. very original. u should do some stories on other characters like smoke, rain, or fujin. i give u madd props fo' that Tgrant.