They.... (a poem on the undead)
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They.... (a poem on the undead)
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posted04/11/2004 01:18 PM (UTC)by
They...
Moonlight falls on an empty grave
A foul mist creeps slowly by
That sickening stench fills the air
Theyre coming for you
But you dont know
Mangled feet, carrying dead flesh
Slowly walking, ver silent
They smell fresh blood - Its your flesh they smell
Theyre coming for you
But you dont know
In your house, they climb the stairs
An eerie silence marks impending doom
Your door creeks, you awaken
Theyre coming for you
Dont be afraid
They walk inside groaning loudly
You look around, theres nowhere to run
They surround your bed, you hide under cover
Theyve almost got you
Your fate is sealed
Your shaking and your muscles are tense
You can feel their fingers clawing at you
Someone help me please! Go away you demons!
Theyve got you now
Your going to die
Sweat now pours down your face
You call on every ounce of faith
Bu the screams are now your only cry
Theyve got you now
Your demise continues
A ray of hope shines through the window
Its now their turn to howl in pain
You jump, you kick, you roll out of bed
Theyre dying now
But your heart still pounds
Moonlight gone, sunlight reigns
That foul mist can be seen no more
That stench replaced with the sweet scent of life
Theyre here no more
You have survived!
Moonlight falls on an empty grave
A foul mist creeps slowly by
That sickening stench fills the air
Theyre coming for you
But you dont know
Mangled feet, carrying dead flesh
Slowly walking, ver silent
They smell fresh blood - Its your flesh they smell
Theyre coming for you
But you dont know
In your house, they climb the stairs
An eerie silence marks impending doom
Your door creeks, you awaken
Theyre coming for you
Dont be afraid
They walk inside groaning loudly
You look around, theres nowhere to run
They surround your bed, you hide under cover
Theyve almost got you
Your fate is sealed
Your shaking and your muscles are tense
You can feel their fingers clawing at you
Someone help me please! Go away you demons!
Theyve got you now
Your going to die
Sweat now pours down your face
You call on every ounce of faith
Bu the screams are now your only cry
Theyve got you now
Your demise continues
A ray of hope shines through the window
Its now their turn to howl in pain
You jump, you kick, you roll out of bed
Theyre dying now
But your heart still pounds
Moonlight gone, sunlight reigns
That foul mist can be seen no more
That stench replaced with the sweet scent of life
Theyre here no more
You have survived!


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A good poem I'd say.
It's interesting that it's not a romanticized view of vampires. You chose to apply a more grotesuqe and morbid tone in your poem.
Hmmmmmm...
How... facinating.
Le Dragon Fantome
It's interesting that it's not a romanticized view of vampires. You chose to apply a more grotesuqe and morbid tone in your poem.
Hmmmmmm...
How... facinating.
Le Dragon Fantome
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That's very interesting Tgrant. 


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My knees started to hurt after i read that
Well done T.
Well done T.

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queve Wrote: Simply awesome!!!! I love that style: Dark adn evil....its simply awesome! Great job! |
Thanks Queve! I think the style is what adds depth to this poem. I'm glad you liked it!
I LOVE it! If I had some kind of gun under the bed with me, I wouldn't wait until day. I'd go all House of the Dead on them. Oh wait....that would mean I'd have to fight them for a straight 2 FREAKIN' HOURS!!!!!!! And people would find my adventure a bore.

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Kahn91 Wrote: I LOVE it! If I had some kind of gun under the bed with me, I wouldn't wait until day. I'd go all House of the Dead on them. Oh wait....that would mean I'd have to fight them for a straight 2 FREAKIN' HOURS!!!!!!! And people would find my adventure a bore. |
lol That could be an alternate ending to the poem. I'm glad you and fedegita liked it!


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I know you wont take my advice so I'll just tell you how I liked it, I didn't. Not trying to be mean, just some honest input.

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DanteThePoetic Wrote: I know you wont take my advice so I'll just tell you how I liked it, I didn't. Not trying to be mean, just some honest input. |
That's cool man . I'm glad you were honest.
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