1st komic (come on lemme have it)

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posted07/19/2004 07:39 PM (UTC)by

SubScorpTile

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03/02/2003 09:09 PM (UTC)

I just wanted to make one, yah i fell into the trend.

yah its bad, lemme have it come on.

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•07/18/2004 03:39 PM (UTC) •

SubScorpTile Wrote:
yah its bad, lemme have it come on.

What was the theme of the comic? Just Rayden and an elder god chatting? Write an idea and a short script next time before you start on the comic. Of course it has to be funny as well.

GD

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•07/18/2004 04:34 PM (UTC) •

IMO, this beats the SHIT out of millions of sprite comics out there. Even though it didn't make me laugh, I do think it was funny for a smile. Besides, I just watched Naked Gun 2 the smell of fear, so maybe I'm just over-humourized.
Good and simple, in my opinion. Try to make more, you'll probably get better.