A new sprite comic: *Portal Guards*
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A new sprite comic: *Portal Guards*
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posted11/30/2006 04:49 AM (UTC)by
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Eh. It's not great.
Not bad either, though.
3.8/5.
The humor was a little stale.
Not bad either, though.
3.8/5.
The humor was a little stale.
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Tehehe!! 4/5 from me, man!!
-RyanRaiden.
-RyanRaiden.
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6volt Wrote:
The terms are interchangable.Oh and why isn't the comic showing up?
MegaBabe Wrote:
Aren't those Shadow Priests?
Aren't those Shadow Priests?
The terms are interchangable.Oh and why isn't the comic showing up?
It should be showing up. The link works for me.
Here's the url:
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/447/portalguardsof3.png

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Not too wild about the humor at all. 2/5


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Not very funny, I am afraid. :| 2/5

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There's a line between acceptable adult situations, and uncalled for adult situations. Unfortunately, it falls into the line of the latter.
Of course, I don't hold this against you, I have made many mistakes. However, if there is one thing a comic artist should take heed from, is to never have any cursing like "fuck" or "shit" or "cunt", or any really gross words.
Damn and gay and bitch are acceptable, as we are a little rather unsensitized to those words nowadays.
Of course, I don't hold this against you, I have made many mistakes. However, if there is one thing a comic artist should take heed from, is to never have any cursing like "fuck" or "shit" or "cunt", or any really gross words.
Damn and gay and bitch are acceptable, as we are a little rather unsensitized to those words nowadays.
O.O
Well, it made me giggle a little.
But I really don't laugh at stuff like this, pretty much nasty and uncalled for.
But it was a good thought.
I like how you made jokes into everyday life stuff, then stead of just strict Mortal Kombat, which gets old after a long time.
(stuff that you see on different animations over and over again)
And try to improve on props, like that 'T.V.' wasn't that great to look at. Just a black box. You could've been a little more detailed and put in some curved lines or maybe even an intena on the top, or just something to improve it.
And try not to use profanity, as Nemesis said, there really isn't any point.
I would like to see more comics though, keep 'em comin!
2/5
Well, it made me giggle a little.
But I really don't laugh at stuff like this, pretty much nasty and uncalled for.
But it was a good thought.
I like how you made jokes into everyday life stuff, then stead of just strict Mortal Kombat, which gets old after a long time.
(stuff that you see on different animations over and over again)
And try to improve on props, like that 'T.V.' wasn't that great to look at. Just a black box. You could've been a little more detailed and put in some curved lines or maybe even an intena on the top, or just something to improve it.
And try not to use profanity, as Nemesis said, there really isn't any point.
I would like to see more comics though, keep 'em comin!
2/5
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