the blood really sucks.
Is this Genesis 32x ?

TheDarkDuelistX Wrote: the blood really sucks. Is this Genesis 32x ?

Lol, yeah. atm, it's all I got.

thats cool Tim i like it alot, hey i got an ani check it out:

it took me 2 days to do on and off, any comments are appreciated so i can get better, and hey tim keep em coming.

yea right, copyrighted.
its not that good but if its your first try at this 7/10

well jax taking heart out doesnt really fit him, nice animation tho.

Thank you. A heart rip done right.
You should create one to make up for the crap skeleton rip they gave Kano in MK3.

Mr_Elusive, I think that's really bad. Not just because I hate you for the personal insults you gave to me, but I really think it sucks.

It looks like there is a box around the characters anytime they move. Jax grabs scorpion on his chest, rips him in half, and his hand magically repositions on Scorpion and ends up holding him from the back. Why would scorpion's upper body still be in his stance if he just got ripped in two? Why in the HELL does it say sub-zero near the life bar? Plus, you spelled KANO as CANO and FATALITY as FATALITY. You didn't even bother to make Scorpion's health bar red. Plus you keep putting a copyright on your pictures as if they belong to you. THEY BELONG TO MIDWAY GENIUS.

But on a postive note, it's not the worst thing I've seen. At least the animation is fluent, and the image quality isn't piss poor. Practice makes perfect.

thanks blacksaibollocks, i appreciate the feedback.

timsmk, another kool animation, I like this one, but the blood look like Nachos.
Mr_Elusive...nuff said, heh.

Mr.Elusive, there are blocks and don't diss BlackSaibot, hes kool.

Murdoink Wrote: timsmk, another kool animation, I like this one, but the blood look like Nachos.

LOL. Yeah, I have to agree.

Mr_Elusive Wrote: thats cool Tim i like it alot, hey i got an ani check it out: it took me 2 days to do on and off, any comments are appreciatedso i can get better, and hey tim keep em coming.

Oh sorry, I didn't give you any feedback (although much has been given in a sarcastic way ;) ).
Okay, i'll be nice:

Okay first off, presentation.
Lifebars need to be more like the game, and the text of course, needs to be smaller.
Secondly, the character is Scorpion not Sub Zero, so that needs to be changed.
It is a little odd to have MK1 characters with MK3 lifebars on an MK3 background, but that's not really that important.
Okay, more on the text, if possible use an MK font, or just copy is straight from a screenshot.
Make sure Kano is spelled with a K and fatality is spelled with a ty at the end.
If possible once again, use an MK font for the fatality text.

Ok, frames
You need more, preferably and Kano bobbing up and down isn't quite the best look. If you're not going to animate the stance, you might as well just let him stand still, and then darken the screen (which you didn't do).
If possible as well, try to add some blood drips where Kano lifts Scorpion's upper body off.
Okay, and believe it or not there are blocks around the character. I don't know how they're formed, I'm not too great with graphics programs.

Okay, next thing is when Kano first touches Scorpion, we can see his hand and wrist (Kano's), but when Kano finally holds scorpion up, we can't see it.

Also, try to get another sprite for scorpion when held in the air, because in his stance, he doesn't look like in much pain.

You did handle the height thing well, i.e., Kano didn't like sink into the floor at any particular time. So that's good.

Wow, I've wrote alot and there isn't really that much wrong with it for your first ani (assuming it is).

Just a little extra effort goes a long way :) (god it feels sickening just saying that, lol).

The fake's great always, Tim. Although, the blood does look a bit w3rd. hmm...and Jax ripping some's heart out isn't very fitting. Try Kano in MK3, or Jax ripping something else out.

Nice one tim. yep the blood definitly looks strange.

Lol.
Perhaps I should explain the blood and Jax.

Well, the blood "thingies" are from Jax's head clap fatality, but I used them as like, the "bloody stump" or wotever they're called in MKDA.

As for Jax doing the fatality, well, i kinda took the easy way out, as he had frames that could easily be edited to do it, lol.

First, Tim, that's some of the best and well thought out animation I've seen here yet. Looks like you really put some effort into making this unique. The blood is not worth mentioning as it's obviously not the focus of the gif.

Second, are you guys really taking Mr_Elusive seriously? There's no way that someone would really make that many goof-ball mistakes without doing it on purpose. It almost looks like when we (LW users) used to make purposefully bad animations as a joke around holidays. I mean his quality is actually degrading exponentially with each post. I think this guy is playin' you all. If this is serious, then I think the point has been unmecifully driven home.

We shall see
Wyatt

Not bad Tim. but not good either.

The idea is not original and the animation looks like it needs some more frames.

And yeah, the blood sux.

Flash-Crash Wrote: Not bad Tim. but not good either. The idea is not original and the animation looks like it needs some more frames. And yeah, the blood sux.

so, i aint tryin 2 B rood but lay off him

I aint trying to be rude either, but it's none of your biz.