It looks pretty good to me. I dont know why there is two differnt shades of blood on the ground tho. I like the intestines coming out of her. One more thing if the blood from her head is going to the right, shouldnt her head be going the same way as well? Other than that I like it, good job.

The blood needs more editing, and the way you put it is very sloppy. The screen should be darken. Some lifebars would have made the fake pic better. I think you should take your time and come out with ideas that are more original. I am not trying to give you a low self-esteem, I'm just giving you advice as you have potential but you just need to emphasize on your work more and your skills will improve. Good job.

Hmm, so he cut her in to 3 pieces in one swipe eh?
I would work on the blood, it really doesn't flow very well. The insides also look to much like she had tape worm, they should be coming out of her body, not sitting in between.

I have to agree with the others.

The direction of the blood is flowing the wrong way.

If he cut her torso with a swipe going from right to left, then the blood flow should follow the same direction.

Pretty good, but has some minor flaws that could be fixed.

I like the intensity of it. I like how you exaggerated with mileenas guts and stuff. I like the blood stain on barakas outfit. Her head should be going that direction. I would just have 1 shade of blood. good job though.