Battle for Edenia
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Battle for Edenia
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posted09/27/2006 01:18 AM (UTC)by

***Please remember that I do not know the official storylines for the Edenian characters in MKA***
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Looks fantastic! 4.5/5
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I really like this.
The background is beautiful. It looks three dimensional, which is always a good thing. Also, the use of shadow is a nice touch. It give this really cartoony image some realism.
Kitana looks nice. The way that she is leaning back looks a little weird however. If you look at where the leg that is on the ground is joins with the rest of the body, it just looks so strange. I don't know - but where the leg joins the hip doesn't look right. Also, her face does not look like it is readied for battle. Fix those things and she will be perfect.
Rain looks very nice. Absolutely no complaints except for his feet. They look a little strange.
Jade is also very nicely drawn. Her feet are way too small however. Make them a little bit longer and it would be better. Also, her hair does not look as good as it could. It is still great, but I am not feeling the white streaks.
With Tanya, I think you should also change the white streaks in the hair. Also regarding her hair, the on the end, it looks like vvvvv, just going up and down. Not really feeling that too much. But other then the hair, Tanya looks great. I love the facial expression and the amount of shading you used is nice.
Overall, the picture looks nice. There are a few things you could fix up, but it still is very nice. The shading and shadows look awesome. I wish Sindel were there, but I won't hold that against you. All up, I give it 9/10. Great work.
The background is beautiful. It looks three dimensional, which is always a good thing. Also, the use of shadow is a nice touch. It give this really cartoony image some realism.
Kitana looks nice. The way that she is leaning back looks a little weird however. If you look at where the leg that is on the ground is joins with the rest of the body, it just looks so strange. I don't know - but where the leg joins the hip doesn't look right. Also, her face does not look like it is readied for battle. Fix those things and she will be perfect.
Rain looks very nice. Absolutely no complaints except for his feet. They look a little strange.
Jade is also very nicely drawn. Her feet are way too small however. Make them a little bit longer and it would be better. Also, her hair does not look as good as it could. It is still great, but I am not feeling the white streaks.
With Tanya, I think you should also change the white streaks in the hair. Also regarding her hair, the on the end, it looks like vvvvv, just going up and down. Not really feeling that too much. But other then the hair, Tanya looks great. I love the facial expression and the amount of shading you used is nice.
Overall, the picture looks nice. There are a few things you could fix up, but it still is very nice. The shading and shadows look awesome. I wish Sindel were there, but I won't hold that against you. All up, I give it 9/10. Great work.


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i don't know it's too cartoony for my tatse. 3/6


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Thanks everyone for your input and a special thanks to Innocent_Lil_Devil12 for detailed constructive criticism.

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