Character Concpet: Cavlote
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Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/23/2005 05:38 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 04:08 PM EST
I liked it. I saw you returned to a couple of your old habbits like saying Cavlote's name too much, restating things more than you should, and bad lines (Smoke), but that didn't make it a bad concept. Sub-Zero vs a werewolf: great idea. I give it a 4.5/5 smile. it had a lot of writing mistakes, but hey; it was definately better than others I've seen. I'd tell you who I'm talking about, but I don't want to embarass Mechrealm...oops
what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 06:37 PM EST
Kano_rulz Wrote:
I liked it. I saw you returned to a couple of your old habbits like saying Cavlote's name too much, restating things more than you should, and bad lines (Smoke), but that didn't make it a bad concept. Sub-Zero vs a werewolf: great idea. I give it a 4.5/5 smile. it had a lot of writing mistakes, but hey; it was definately better than others I've seen. I'd tell you who I'm talking about, but I don't want to embarass Mechrealm...oops

Thanks dude. I really couldn't think of any other reason for Smoke attacking Cavlote, so I had it as if he thought that Cavlote was the one who killed Noob-Saibot. I am glad that you like it.
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 06:41 PM EST
your reason for bringing Smoke in was better than what I was thinking of. I was thinking Smoke could help Sub during the first assassination attempt, but what you did was kooler smile
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 06:45 PM EST
It was originally that way, but then I changed it. Yah I kind of like it better myself. There really couldn't be a major fight at the Lin Keui because someone might of walked in and saw Sub-Zero knocked out on the floor. That is pretty much the main reason why I switched it to the way it is now.
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 06:48 PM EST
that and the lin kuei would have uncyberatized Smoke if he went back
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/24/2005 06:49 PM EST
That is true.
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/25/2005 10:09 PM EST
I think the ideas behind most of your concepts are nice overall, but here are a few things I can think of which can improve them:

1) Use a Spellchecker. Everyone makes mistakes when typing, but there are multiple FREE programs out there which include a spellchecker. All that is needed is to activate it and it will scan over whatever document you have for words not in its database. While the names of characters will likely appear as well, you can simply ignore those while correcting the errors automatically.

2) Include Special Moves, Fatalities, etc. This makes characters more interesting and shows how they would look in the game.
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/26/2005 01:12 AM EST
Okay, so spelling and showing the moves and fatalities of the charcter. Got it. Thanks for the advice Crow.
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RE: Fan Submission: Character Concpet: Cavlote
03/31/2005 07:41 PM EST
As you can tell, i'm a subzero fan, but even I would like to see what happens next with Cavlote and subzero, Great Work.
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