Character Concpet: Cavlote
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04/01/2005 12:41 AM (UTC)by
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Black-Rose
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02/22/2005 05:06 PM (UTC)
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Kano_rulz
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what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?

03/24/2005 09:08 PM (UTC)
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I liked it. I saw you returned to a couple of your old habbits like saying Cavlote's name too much, restating things more than you should, and bad lines (Smoke), but that didn't make it a bad concept. Sub-Zero vs a werewolf: great idea. I give it a 4.5/5 smile. it had a lot of writing mistakes, but hey; it was definately better than others I've seen. I'd tell you who I'm talking about, but I don't want to embarass Mechrealm...oops
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Black-Rose
03/24/2005 11:37 PM (UTC)
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Kano_rulz Wrote:
I liked it. I saw you returned to a couple of your old habbits like saying Cavlote's name too much, restating things more than you should, and bad lines (Smoke), but that didn't make it a bad concept. Sub-Zero vs a werewolf: great idea. I give it a 4.5/5 smile. it had a lot of writing mistakes, but hey; it was definately better than others I've seen. I'd tell you who I'm talking about, but I don't want to embarass Mechrealm...oops

Thanks dude. I really couldn't think of any other reason for Smoke attacking Cavlote, so I had it as if he thought that Cavlote was the one who killed Noob-Saibot. I am glad that you like it.
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what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?

03/24/2005 11:41 PM (UTC)
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your reason for bringing Smoke in was better than what I was thinking of. I was thinking Smoke could help Sub during the first assassination attempt, but what you did was kooler smile
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Black-Rose
03/24/2005 11:45 PM (UTC)
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It was originally that way, but then I changed it. Yah I kind of like it better myself. There really couldn't be a major fight at the Lin Keui because someone might of walked in and saw Sub-Zero knocked out on the floor. That is pretty much the main reason why I switched it to the way it is now.
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what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?

03/24/2005 11:48 PM (UTC)
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that and the lin kuei would have uncyberatized Smoke if he went back
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Black-Rose
03/24/2005 11:49 PM (UTC)
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That is true.
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~Crow~
03/26/2005 03:09 AM (UTC)
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I think the ideas behind most of your concepts are nice overall, but here are a few things I can think of which can improve them:

1) Use a Spellchecker. Everyone makes mistakes when typing, but there are multiple FREE programs out there which include a spellchecker. All that is needed is to activate it and it will scan over whatever document you have for words not in its database. While the names of characters will likely appear as well, you can simply ignore those while correcting the errors automatically.

2) Include Special Moves, Fatalities, etc. This makes characters more interesting and shows how they would look in the game.
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Black-Rose
03/26/2005 06:12 AM (UTC)
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Okay, so spelling and showing the moves and fatalities of the charcter. Got it. Thanks for the advice Crow.
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Subzero-2K4
04/01/2005 12:41 AM (UTC)
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As you can tell, i'm a subzero fan, but even I would like to see what happens next with Cavlote and subzero, Great Work.
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