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posted06/27/2008 04:45 AM (UTC)by
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Whats up guys? As you all know I am a writer and was a huge fan of MKC before it got canceled, well it has been ten years and I have decided that I would write a second season. This season will have everything the original didn't, blood/gore, more MK characters ect. MKCR will take us deeper into the world of MKC as we meet brand new characters!
To wet your appetite here's a poster I made for it:
And here is a plot: Captured, beaten and almost killed, Raiden has managed to survive up until now. Shao Kahn has begun his invasion on earth. Families are slaughtered by his extermination squads and all is forced to bow down to him. But the elder gods have found out about Shao Kahn's recent rule breaking and have resurrected those he have recently murdered and has restored Raiden's health and powers.
Raiden and his three warriors, Kung-Lao, Taja and Siro goes to earth to do battle with Kahn and his armies. As Raiden and Kahn fight fiercly, the outcast witch, known as Omegis, throws a potion on Kahn, causing him to explode.
With Kahn dead, the realms returns to being normal. But when a strange warrior named Taven comes to Zhu Zin, Kung-Lao,Taja and Siro knows that a new enemy is about to emerge...
MAIN CAST:
Kung-Lao:
Raiden
Taja
Siro
Kitana
Sub-Zero
Scorpion
Omegis
Vorpax
Shang Tsung
Quanchi
Siann
Mileena
Noob-Saibot
Reptile
Kiri
Jola
Rain
NEW:
Taven
Valencia
Delia
Daegon
Havik
Hotaru
Darrius
Tanya
Jade
Blaze
Li Mei
Character bio's at a later date
To wet your appetite here's a poster I made for it:
And here is a plot: Captured, beaten and almost killed, Raiden has managed to survive up until now. Shao Kahn has begun his invasion on earth. Families are slaughtered by his extermination squads and all is forced to bow down to him. But the elder gods have found out about Shao Kahn's recent rule breaking and have resurrected those he have recently murdered and has restored Raiden's health and powers.
Raiden and his three warriors, Kung-Lao, Taja and Siro goes to earth to do battle with Kahn and his armies. As Raiden and Kahn fight fiercly, the outcast witch, known as Omegis, throws a potion on Kahn, causing him to explode.
With Kahn dead, the realms returns to being normal. But when a strange warrior named Taven comes to Zhu Zin, Kung-Lao,Taja and Siro knows that a new enemy is about to emerge...
MAIN CAST:
Kung-Lao:
Raiden
Taja
Siro
Kitana
Sub-Zero
Scorpion
Omegis
Vorpax
Shang Tsung
Quanchi
Siann
Mileena
Noob-Saibot
Reptile
Kiri
Jola
Rain
NEW:
Taven
Valencia
Delia
Daegon
Havik
Hotaru
Darrius
Tanya
Jade
Blaze
Li Mei
Character bio's at a later date
About Me
Rebel. Outsider. Fan Of The Obscure. Politically Incorrect. Spitfire!
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The Elder Gods interfering was actually planned for the second season. And thank you for your critique but if this does not interest you you can always leave. And that was just a quick premise, it will be more detailed when I write it out. And I'll write however I want thank you very much, you don't like it? Too bad, so be it, hun What are you going to do? Jump through the computer and spank me,lol.
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ProfesserAhnka Wrote:
The Elder Gods interfering was actually planned for the second season. And thank you for your critique but if this does not interest you you can always leave. And that was just a quick premise, it will be more detailed when I write it out. And I'll write however I want thank you very much, you don't like it? Too bad, so be it, hun What are you going to do? Jump through the computer and spank me,lol.
The Elder Gods interfering was actually planned for the second season. And thank you for your critique but if this does not interest you you can always leave. And that was just a quick premise, it will be more detailed when I write it out. And I'll write however I want thank you very much, you don't like it? Too bad, so be it, hun
Okay, not sure what the attitude is about but you're missing an important point I was trying to make; I was interested, otherwise I wouldn't have gone into the thread and taken the time to tell you how I felt. If I was not interested in the least and didn't want to see you improve, I'd have just not posted at all, or worse, insulted your work without offering any kind of advice, or even worse, been completely sarcastic about what you wrote and praised it.
The content I saw removed said interest because it turned out to be lacklustre. Just because the original concept was to use the Elder Gods as a Deus ex machina does not mean you have to follow it as well. Also, I'm sure you can write better than this, but since you went through the trouble of making an introduction thread, you may as well show us what your best work is to at least give people something to look at that is pleasing. If you aren't going to give your best now, how are we to assume that you work will be better, or just the same as this?
And no, I'm not going to jump through the monitor to beat you; I'm just not going to read your work at all, because if this is how you're going to take critiques, then I have nothing more to say to you.
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