Comic: Stryker! (No real title as yet)
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posted04/15/2004 01:50 PM (UTC)by
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Bloofy
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02/05/2004 04:08 AM (UTC)
Here's my first comic. I think it sort of sucks, but i'll let you judge.











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Born-Again-Vampire
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Anything war can do, peace can do better.
04/13/2004 02:51 AM (UTC)
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I don't really get it. Sorry.
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TomTaz
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"Retirement my ass!"

04/13/2004 03:08 AM (UTC)
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I like it. LOL. But Sonya and Jax coming to his rescue? Oh well Special forces, law enforcement I guess it makes sense. Although what Born-Again-Vampire said it is hard to follow at points. I think I get it though, the whole mugging thing was meant to be a trap for Stryker right to lure him in to kill him? Or was tha just their reactin to seeing him come to stop them? Also you should have done somthing more with Mileena after the Gun guys were stopped, like maybe have her run away or kill stryker herself? Good though I think the sprites came out nice.
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Dark_No0B
04/13/2004 03:14 AM (UTC)
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L0l0l0lo0l0l0ol, funny. I like how sektors crushing material looks like, it actually resembles a huge gun even though its not meant to be one. Johnny looked hilarious to, holding the gun.....lol, you would never see that one coming.grin

It was pretty funny how they asked stryker why he was sitting down, and he said he was charging energy, haha.

For your first comic, its awesome. Keep it up.
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Bloofy
04/13/2004 03:15 AM (UTC)
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TomTaz Wrote:
I like it. LOL. But Sonya and Jax coming to his rescue? Oh well Special forces, law enforcement I guess it makes sense. Although what Born-Again-Vampire said it is hard to follow at points. I think I get it though, the whole mugging thing was meant to be a trap for Stryker right to lure him in to kill him? Or was tha just their reactin to seeing him come to stop them? Also you should have done somthing more with Mileena after the Gun guys were stopped, like maybe have her run away or kill stryker herself? Good though I think the sprites came out nice.

That's a really good point. I actually have no idea what it is about, though! :D
It was supposed to be, "Stryker suspects a couple of homeless dudes, but is instead facing three kombat trained dudes with guns. He curls up into the faetal position, only to be saved by two ultraelite Special Forces members. He uses "Gathering body heat so he can convert it to energy, thus giving him the necessary energy to be successful in the fight" to try and cover for crying like a small child. I think. Oh, and Mileena was supposed to just be really naive. I dunno.
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Bloofy
04/13/2004 02:30 PM (UTC)
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It's good to see so many care!
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Sponge-Zer0
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Hahahaha...?
04/15/2004 01:37 AM (UTC)
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It's pretty funny in some scenes, especially when Cage says:
"Hur hur! You look like one of the Village People!"
However, I didn't get several parts of what they were saying....
Oh well. I like it anyway.
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Bloofy
04/15/2004 01:50 PM (UTC)
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Sponge-Zer0 Wrote:
It's pretty funny in some scenes, especially when Cage says:
"Hur hur! You look like one of the Village People!"
However, I didn't get several parts of what they were saying....
Oh well. I like it anyway.

Thanks man, I would agree with a lot of people who say it is hard to make comics that make sense, because it's sort of true.
Glad you still liked what you got of it!
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