(CONTEST ENTRY)Mortal Kombat 2: Scorpions Story
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(CONTEST ENTRY)Mortal Kombat 2: Scorpions Story
08/03/2005 06:23 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: (CONTEST ENTRY)Mortal Kombat 2: Scorpions Story
09/06/2005 05:58 PM EST
As soon as I looked at the results, the first thing that crossed my mind was, "This guy must have a good fic." However, upon reading this one, I seem to question just how this fic got Second Place.

Try being more descriptive in each chapter. And try better than one brief paragraph per chapter.

Also, take your time and brainstorm this before writing and submitting. This work looks like it was rushed.

I'm gonna have to give this one a 1/5 here.