(CONTEST ENTRY)Mortal Kombat 2: Scorpions Story
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09/06/2005 10:58 PM (UTC)by
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liam616
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07/26/2005 10:49 PM (UTC)
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Bloodline666
09/06/2005 10:58 PM (UTC)
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As soon as I looked at the results, the first thing that crossed my mind was, "This guy must have a good fic." However, upon reading this one, I seem to question just how this fic got Second Place.

Try being more descriptive in each chapter. And try better than one brief paragraph per chapter.

Also, take your time and brainstorm this before writing and submitting. This work looks like it was rushed.

I'm gonna have to give this one a 1/5 here.
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