Interesting, but I am just a little much reminded of Cyborg Smoke. The cloths you added look nice, that one going up his chest has a transparent effect which looks kinda cool. I think you should have changed the color/position of the light thats on the belt, maybe to green.

The 'striped' part on Cryostasis' arms look like they need a few more colors. But the light effect on his head looks pretty good, not a bad render.

It looks like you drew all over him with a crayon after you switched colors. I hate it.

That was GREAT. I love it, I can tell you spent time on this, and I'm glad you didn't just Pallete Swap, but actually tried to add textures and effects of your own, great job.

But there are some flaws....

In stead of just using one color as his sash and his shoulder thingy. Maybe tried to add a new layer(for people using PSP and PS) and hide the layer under the actual piece, change the Original layer to Luminace, and proceed to color in the second layer of choice.. its hard to explain, but I hope to get a Tutorial of it soon when FBX opens.

However....

The eye effects are great, and I think you did an amazing job, your choice of Blue's were wonderful, and I really think this could be a character for MK6. Or maybe the Cyborg Version of Sub Zero, either way, great job, as I now look forward to seeing more of your renders.

i don't like it at all.

theres no texture on the blue that you added
its a flate blue,

things to do- add something to the blue areas
make them look like there on him, not just drawing on top.

a decent start but needs more work,

here's an update after the input given.

NoobSaibot Wrote: Hmmm... It's better than the original. That's for sure.

thanks for the comments. i hope the updated one looked alot better than the first. but something just came to mind. wasnt there a topic going around about frost becoming a cyborg. well here is a cyborg that can control ice so...

How is the original, NoobSaibot's? I'm guessing you mean the board member. This is clearly the render from the game so why mention someone not involved. I'm just curious why.

BN run amuk
Wyatt

RaMeir Wrote:
How is the original, NoobSaibot's? I'm guessing you mean the board member. This is clearly the render from the game so why mention someone not involved. I'm just curious why.
BN run amuk
Wyatt
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When I talk about the "original" I mean the original Cryostasis render DeadlyFrost did. The yellow Cyrax you see above is mine. DeadlyFrost asked if he can use the render that I cut out and stuff... So I allowed him.