Here are some tips:
-Use better speech bubbles and tails using shape and line tools not brush
-Try to actually make something that people will lol at no matter what

other than that 1/5

The humor is lacking and use shape and line tools for the bubbles instead of the brush tool. 1/5

Listen to what they said.

The humor is non-existant. 0/5.

You get bonus points for using Dan (I mean hell, I have a long standing comic series on the Pavilion that stars him but it's dead now) but those bonus points get taken away due to the lack of humor, coordination, and bad text bubbles.

Thanks for the advice, but....I made this YEARS ago. Like maybe 2003 or 2004. Before I even read }{ombat's sprite comic tutorial. Want to read a better comic of mine? Well, I have been contacted by }{ombat that he wants to put my "The Troops" comic series on the Kombat Pavillion. Anyways, I put this up after I found it on the computer. It was my very first comic. I know ot sucks out loud, but know it was made before I was okay at making comics.

Then why did you post it?

What he just said.

I'm sorry but it just isn't that good.2/10,having Dan in it just saved you from
a 1.