Dream Demons
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posted05/21/2008 07:59 AM (UTC)by
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Chrisjamwood
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07/09/2007 03:45 AM (UTC)
A golden transparent-looking substance that looks to be alcohol-related is about to be inserted into the skin intravenously. The transparent gold-looking colored substance hits the sunlight that creates a luminousness glow through the half of the room as Jennifer looks away from the reflection of the shine of the sun beaming down on the intravenous tub that hangs off a sterol metal instrument that is nearby. The intravenous needle pricks her semi-soft skin as she flinches a bit as well as her looking away from the inserted of the needle into the skin. Jennifer suddenly felt the impact of this powerful-like liquid narcotics influence at almost after the exact moment the needle went into the right arm. She then feels an overwhelming sense of peace and openness as her body becomes oppressively numb. Jennifer had felt like she still had basic control of the moving of her body although she was not move afterall in this sterol white room. She then notices that she could not at all move around. This is where Jennifer starts to feel the oppression of the surrounding hollow mechanically-suited environment. All of a sudden everything (in her vision) has morph into a simulation-like 3-D environment right before her very eyes. She has entered, now, into UR [Ultra-Reality] -- an heighten sense of reality with surrealism-made 3-D applications is an all-new state of consciousness (a state of mind), of which is a theoretical possibility. She (Jennifer White) walked down a long dim-lit corridor, noticing the several drops of blood on the white-and-black checkered floor: She pays no attention, for it is immensely unimportant to the surrounding begone environment. A chill breeze swift the hallway as a couple of ceiling lights dangle back and forth as we can hear an unidentified source of noise that emulates in 3-D. She takes out her handgun from the holster about her left leg and pulls it up toward the overwhelming darkness that is more than a few meters in front of Jennifer. The imagery of this particular area is like a long gallery of grotesque photography of animal-looking human beings that have been badly mutilated beyond identification of any type. Jennifer is starting to show panic as she can feel her murmur heart beating very fast and hard. We can see she is mildly shaking by the nervous-looking shake of fright. She sees something (or some things) in the static-looking blackness of the dark, a-something morbid and uncanny. She decides by instinct to catwalk her way through the corridor seemingly slow walking and slightly kneeling. The tone of the afternoon had shifted dramatically from a casual pace to a frantic scramble for backup and more information about the family. There were two crime scenes now, and that meant double the resources. A team of about two dozen experts from the Bellevue Police Department, the ME's Office, the State Patrol Crime Lab, and the city's survey department has gathered at the home to begin the tedious work of tracking evidence and piecing together the crime scenes. He offered two different scenarios on what could have happened: Julia's head was either lifted and pounded repeatedly on the floor, or her head was on the floor and the attacker kicked or stomped it. I have been dreaming ever since childhood. I used to have nightmares where I would be in the backyard at night... and I would be alone in the dream... something would happen where something would come down from the sky... a "monster" of some sort. It was called Mr. Moon. I don't know if I or that "monster" can up with the name. I think it was one of my aunts who coined the name for me as I recall just a second ago. Over the many years as a child I used to have these terrible nightmares of him. He used to come to me in my dreams and turn my dreams into nightmares right before my eyes so to speak. Sometimes when Mr. Moon would do this, I would hear this 3-D music that sounded as very alien to me. I don't know how to be more specific about my nightmares. Most dreams or nightmares would happen mostly at night but it could and did happen in the daytime as well. Before Mr. Moon appeared... it was a deisal tire that would come after me in my dreams. It would haunt me at night as the tire stalks me down as I try to hide. There was no hiding from it. It would always finds me no matter where I was in my dreams, my nightmares.
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Chrisjamwood
05/16/2008 09:17 AM (UTC)
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What ya think?
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Sub-Frost055
05/16/2008 02:54 PM (UTC)
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Heh, reading your other "scripts" I highly doubt you wrote this one. It's not Mk And the fact that you got so detailed seeing how your other submissions are not, I can only say that you once again are plagerizing someone's work.

I'm not buying this that all of a sudden you're a great writer because of your other submissions SUCK!. Plagerizing is wrong, Mister, and you can get in big trouble in real life if for some reason you were caught plagerizing one's book.

Try again, sir.

CHEERS!grinEDIT: And yes, for some whatever reason I did, I read your other submissions, ones that got locked and the ones that are torturing the members of this site. The problem you have is sticking to one topic. And don't come back asking me the question "Can you do better?" Becuease I will come back and say, "Yes... yes I can."
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 01:52 AM (UTC)
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For the first time, I think, you are right seemingly... seeminigly if you know what I mean. I guess I have been copying.... Copying who, though? Can you find out 'cause i really like to know for myself, too.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 01:56 AM (UTC)
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Oh, yeah! I almost forgot... Cheers!
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SubMan799
05/17/2008 02:08 AM (UTC)
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Copying other people's work is bad, and double posting is bad and annoying
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 02:28 AM (UTC)
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Sunderland opens the envelope and pulls the mysterious letter. Mary was now just a memory. He stopped at a diner along the way to his final destination. "Sure," said James. He waited in line for a seat. His instincts started to run high. He pulled out the handgun that he found and shot at the Thing that tried to attack him. James sat in the chair. He went through the whirling fog searching for her, his late wife. He drives up to a huge barricade. "1994". "Already here, where did the time go," James thought to himself. He gets out of a blue car, looks around fast enough to get a glimpse of the surroundings, and then starts to walk into the men's bathroom. As he goes inside, the man is just engulfed by a strong and anonymous scent. James looked at the mirror and saw his own pale face starring back at him. "I haven't seen my own face since..forever!" After taking a few steps outside, he stopped in his tracks. Just beyond the observation area, a forest area is seen.
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Sub-Frost055
05/17/2008 03:05 AM (UTC)
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Oh, don't go and plagerize my CHEERS! that's my thing.

But anyways,

Seeing how you already admitted that you stole this whol submission from a book, (Why do I need to show proof when you already admitted) I must say that this thread fails as a submission.

Why not you stop arguing with people who know what they're talking about and actually write something that was made by your own hands instead of other people's work. It's kind of easy to tell what kind of work you've done in your other submissions and reading this one... and what I mean by that is, for some reason that you got WAY too good all of a sudden means something is up. Reading your scripts that really sucked then reading this... yeah, I don't need to say anything else, I've made my point.

CHEERS!furiousEDIT: Why not you change the story on me? Well, next time you change your original submission, I will re-quote what you wrote so the people know what they're really reading.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:07 AM (UTC)
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I guess I was caught redhandedly!? Not! Show me proof that i'm copying other peoples works.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:08 AM (UTC)
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Can you actually show me proof that I'm really copying someone else's work, please?
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Sub-Frost055
05/17/2008 03:13 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
Can you actually show me proof that I'm really copying someone else's work, please?


Heh, I will when you stop double posting and learn to edit your last post.

But it's obvious to tell, I don't need proof, the fact that you got good all of a sudden doesn't make things right. Your last submissions are nothing like these, your scripts lacked so much detail and you had a lot of misspelling words... now all of a sudden your stories have details and no spelling errors. COME ON, you can't say that there's nothing wrong with this submission.

CHEERS!
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:17 AM (UTC)
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You had pointing out that I have no spelling errors. I am impress... with myself. Show me proof that I'm copying, please. Between you and me, I am for real. Cheers!
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Sub-Frost055
05/17/2008 03:22 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
You had pointing out that I have no spelling errors. I am impress... with myself.

Some me proof, please. Cheers!


Please rephrase that sentence to where it makes sense.

And wow, you're like the second person who's stealing my CHEERS thing... wow, you think that's really bothering me? Not really.

But I'm not going to create a pathetic flame war to prove I'm right. If you want to continue this sad attempt for a flame, IM instead of going out in public.

Otherwise, I siad what needed to be said, and I'm finishing it.

CHEERS!grin
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:27 AM (UTC)
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Can Sub-Frost055 show proof that Chrisjamwood is copying? Like Rayden says "I don't think so!"
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:29 AM (UTC)
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Please rephrase that sentence to where it makes sense.

And wow, you're like the second person who's stealing my CHEERS thing... wow, you think that's really bothering me? Not really.

But I'm not going to create a pathetic flame war to prove I'm right. If you want to continue this sad attempt for a flame, IM instead of going out in public.

Otherwise, I siad what needed to be said, and I'm finishing it.

CHEERS!

Chrisjamwood says rephrase your words.

PS: What is "Siad"????
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:49 AM (UTC)
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John Paul Wood has been going to Fresno State for over several years now and he is still unsure on what to do with his life. Him and Vanessa Sasso have been going out for a couple of months now and he still isn't quite comfortable with his friends seeing her with him. Last week summer vocation was over the corner so to speak. Now, summer vocation has just begun as John walks home from the last day of school: A Friday. As the sun has just went down behind the trees, he comes out of the pool and dries his muscular body off as he walks into the house. John goes to the couch and turns on the 42-inch black-color television. After watching an episode of the sitecom FRIENDS, he gets ready to get a middle-size pizza from Me-N-Ed's for him and his little brother by the video store called Video City. Vanessa saw a group of patrol cars drive passed her at a very fast pace with the sirens blazing through the night as she walks home at midnight. She then decides to find a local store and to use the restroom there. Vanessa eventually found a restroom that was opened down the road. Later on, she decides to make a phone call to her home so that she could get picked up without having to walk all the way home.
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SubMan799
05/17/2008 03:50 AM (UTC)
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wow, you're so stupid it's funny. It's obvious you're stealing this
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 03:56 AM (UTC)
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From who?
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 04:30 AM (UTC)
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Sunderland opens the envelope and pulls the mysterious letter out. Mary was now just a memory. He stopped at a diner along the way to his final destination. "Sure," said James. He waited in line for a seat. His instincts started to run high. He pulled out the handgun that he found and shot at the Thing that tried to attack him. James sat in the chair. He went through the whirling fog searching for her, his late wife. He drives up to a huge barricade. "1994". "Already here, where did the time go," James thought to himself. He gets out of a blue car, looks around fast enough to get a glimpse of the surroundings, and then starts to walk into the men's bathroom. As he goes inside, the man is just engulfed by a strong and anonymous scent. James looked at the mirror and saw his own pale face starring back at him. "I haven't seen my own face since..forever!" After taking a few steps outside, he stopped in his tracks. Just beyond the observation area, a forest area is seen.
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MK-4-LIFE
05/17/2008 04:57 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
PS: What is "Siad"????


Obviously a mere typo.

Dude, seriously, I would stop arguing. You are just gonna keep losing. People on this site know what they're talking about. Trust me, I know from personal experience.

Take this as advice, not an insult. You have earned such a bad reputation on this site it's not funny anymore.

Stop arguing, and you might be able to earn at least a bit of respect from the members of this site.

Flame wars are never fun, especially when you have already lost and you keep going.
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05/17/2008 05:24 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
PS: What is "Siad"????

Something "transparency-looking," no doubt.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 05:37 AM (UTC)
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So, what's your point?
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MK-4-LIFE
05/17/2008 05:38 AM (UTC)
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Chrisjamwood Wrote:
So, what's your point?


Oh lord, he's still going. Seriously dude, give up while you can.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 05:42 AM (UTC)
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Is this better:

A dirty semi-transparent-looking narcotic substance that looks to be alcohol-related is about to be inserted into the skin intravenously.
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Chrisjamwood
05/17/2008 05:55 AM (UTC)
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You mean:

Oh Lord, he's still going. Seriously dude, give up while you can.

It's "Lord". it isn't "lord".
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