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05/09/2004 02:17 AM (UTC)by
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cazzael68
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12/17/2003 06:51 AM (UTC)
Cool. I like your style. The characters look too simple, you could use more details. Shang Tsung's chest looks a little weird without the line that divides the chest muscles.
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Moosie_Fate
05/08/2004 04:00 AM (UTC)
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I like you’re drawing style and the coloring/ shading you’ve done. As you pointed out you can’t draw backgrounds but perhaps you should give them a try and do some anyway, I’m sure you’d improve over time and it would add depth to the picture. At the moment there is a big Shang Tsung and a small Zateran, we can all assume that’s because Shang is closer but a background would help with depth perception + it might look cool. Other than that I’d also say the fire needs a little work, everything over the Zateran character has blended with his costumes color. Anyway I like the picture even if my critique is mostly based on what could be improved.
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05/08/2004 04:50 AM (UTC)
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Your style is awesome. Shang looks great but, there should be more detail on his chest. The costume designs for both characters is good. A background to this picture would have been nice, you should give it a try. The fire needs a little work also. Once again, awesome style, 3.5/5.
The style is pretty cool for cartoons because it's so simple, but for a normal drawing I'd like to see a lot more detail.

This Superman cartoon style can be used as a base for a more complex drawing.

So you can do something like that quick, then spend time on the little details.



Your eye for proportions is pretty good.



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05/08/2004 08:56 AM (UTC)
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Cool piec you made. The only thing is that the Zentaran doesn't look to be burning very much. Maybe more flames would have helped.

Shang looks nice in this loose cartoon style. Good job with this one!

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05/09/2004 02:17 AM (UTC)
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I think you have a good art style. It could use more detail though. Its too simple.

The piece looks pretty good. Shang looks too simple. It was done nice but it needs more. Cant really tell whats going on, there isnt any details showing whats happening to "reptile" looking guy. I think you should attempt to try and draw yourself a background. It would make the picture look alot better. 3/5

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