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05/05/2004 11:31 PM (UTC)by
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cazzael68
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elbarto
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Seems easy, but nothing could be so hard.
Trying to guess life's dealing, what's the next card?
I'm surely folding, I don't like this hand at all.
05/05/2004 03:07 AM (UTC)
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This is pretty good. The character design is great with the ripped pants. However, you should have put in a better background. The shadows on the ground could also have been done better. Aside from this, great drawing.

-Word Life.
Simple but cool drawing. It reminds me the Justice League that shows on Cartoon Network, similar style. You could've used a better background and the shadows could be more complex. Also, the coloring is simple but cool.
3.5/5 Dragon Points.
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Moosie_Fate
05/05/2004 06:47 AM (UTC)
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I like the style you’ve used to do the characters in and although it’s rather simple looking you’ve managed to get some shading and detail into them. However I think the background is way too dark and not detailed enough, surely a little more time on this would have been enough to throw in a simple pit 1 background or something like it. One last thing I just noticed is you’ve got a light source showing on the background, the characters are shaded according to this source but their bodies are casting a shadow towards it.
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buterbals113085
05/05/2004 09:17 PM (UTC)
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this is very simple looking, but its your style. the look reminds me of samurai jack on cartoon network. Dont like the background. Needs something more interesting, also the shadows of the characters arent well done either. Overall 3/5
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05/05/2004 10:11 PM (UTC)
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hehe, this is really good. 5/5.
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05/05/2004 11:31 PM (UTC)
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Hehehehe! I actually like this style. Almost has a Samurai Jack quality to it.

I think you can develop this style wich more pracitce if it's the direction you intend on going with this. A background setting to place these characters would have been good. A temple or wooded area for example would have worked. I think you have an idea of how to express movement of the figure, but working with it more will help you a lot.

Good job.

Rating: 2.5/5


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