LOVE the hair. Hand is iffy.

Good work. 8/10

Great work!
But that hand looks kinda weird.
Anyway, my rate:

8.5/10

Thanks for the feedback. I rushed a little on the hand. The funny thing is that it looked a lot worse originally; Her fingers were much more pointy, so I edited it with Photoshop. I should have edited further, but all is good.

Which character should I do next :) ?

Not bad.

The next one, hmm, how about a little more challenge: Hotaru?

Personally I like to draw more recognizable characters. Classics if you will. Having said that, I'll probably draw Hotaru in the future.

If you wish.
Then if you insist on classic characters, how about Kano?

nice job for a starter, I'll give you a 9/10





Kurtis Stryker..............

I think not! anyways that hair rox! 7/10

so you don't agree that he deserves a 9/10?!?
lol

It has an a distinct anime look to it which is really well done. Again, the hand is a draw back, maybe have it open, or dig into the background. 8.75/10

I think you should try Kahn or Smoke next.

Lovely. Just lovely.8/10

Her eyebrow has that odd bump in it. The eye is all wrong. It would look good if she were facing the front. From the side the eye should be shown in a profile view. More of a triangle shape. This makes the eye look like a decal stuck to the side of her head. The hand has already been mentioned. Her right arm is probably too far away from the body but with the hair in the way it's hard to tell. The butt is also wrong. I think I see what you were going for but she has one buttock on the left and then more on the right. Her suit having that triangle shape is the problem. Both cheeks are going to curve in the same direction so the suit on the right side should be the same as the one on the left.

Take it easy
Wyatt

Being a biased Kitana Fan, I love it.

If you can modernize Kurtis Striker and make him look cool, you'd get all the respect I can offer.

I don't see anything wrong with the eye, but her back/body is not proportionate. It looks as if you drew her hair in first and the right arm was an afterthought hence why the arm to body proportion is off a bit.

The color job and detailing elsewise is very good, I like the look with the hair, I've never attempted to draw/colour hair with a sheen before and doubt I'd do as good a job here as you haave done.

I think you could do a decent job of Sindel going on this work if you gave it a whirl.

Very nice. The hair is very cool looking.

Great job for a starter oh and BTW the fingers look kinda weird but good job i like it

my rate: 8/10

Thanks for the feedback. I started on a portrait of Reptile. Sindel will be next. Keep 'em requests comin!

Well shucks, she looks real purty, Clevis! Hyuck!

it's pretty good, the hand, as mentioned before, is aweful, but the rest is good.

DAMN!!!! That is HOT! Nice pic