I still don;t like the font, the little humor in there wasn't all that humorous, and the clone sprites/stances got annoying

artwork:8/10 good edited sprites -2 for clonism of both sprites and stances
originality:5/10 been done before, all of it, sex jokes, secret plan mission
humor 5/10 blowjob joke was OK, but that's it.
overall: 6/10 it just didn't scream WOW AWESOME or MAN THAT SUCKS it was just, okay

To be honest, I have writers' block. That's why it's taken so long to get back to. I've even been considering a series reboot. I'm just making up as I'm going along anyways. -_-* Spriting is becoming more work than fun. I don't have the energy/motivation.

Thanks Vash.

Not to sound snarky, but I've never claimed to be the greatest. That much I've always maintained.



Ka-Tra

HOLY shit that title's colors couldn't be any worse. Reading it gives me brain cancer.

Sorry, i don't mean to be an orthography nazi... but i've seen this in a LOT of places and its getting bad, its SORCERER, nor sorcerOr!!!
Lets stop perpetuating this O thing!!! its an E!

sorry... other than that... the story is kinda slow, but i like ur generic linkuei ninja design

I like it, but I think it's funny that most people see that something is a sprite 'comic' and automatically assume it's supposed to be super funny. I like it when people take time to make a continuing story rather that staying with the single shot 'sometimes' funny ones. Keep it up Tetra. I do agree that the Lin could have been done better (based on your other edits I've seen), but they work for what they are.

Zentile, can you NOT be a dick to someone for once?

I thought it was somewhat funny but like everyone else I think the humor is a bit dry. Think about what you've written so far and then think about what would be funny both in the MK universe and just in general funny.

It wasn't meant to be hillarious. I had a different "sex joke" originally. Involving Baraka walking in while one of the generics had Kitana's top open. With Baraka balking him for attempted rape. I declined as I thought it wouldn't be recieved well.

15 is up. Radical layout change. Like, totally radical...



Ka-Tra

Not bad - I think the Smoke guns blend in a little too much though with the background, took a minute to notice that they were shooting and not just ducking. Chest guy might have been better for this one, though not as original - maybe a predator style shoulder gun? PS, much better word bubbles - love it.

The second one is definitely an improvement. The speech bubbles are much more appealing and have an RPG quality about them.

You're always amaze me with the level of editing you do on your backgrounds. You take anything and turn it into something completely different (like using the walls and floor to make the sorcery tables in the 6th panel)

Also what did you use to make that Shao Kahn statue on the horse? it's incredible

can't wait to see more

Here's episode 16.



Ka-Tra

Ninja's always have good style. heheh :)