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Fight
08/03/2003 06:44 PM EST
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/04/2003 10:09 AM EST
Well, what's with the greyscale?

Anyhow, this is pretty basic really, and it's mostly props.

I'm not liking the grey "board" that flies up the center from the well.
The fonts used in the lifebars are pretty dodgy, you can barely read them as they are pretty thin, and they are also not suited. Try the MKDA font, (at the warehouse).

I don't like that it's all grey either.
It's a nice open space though, I do like the way you organized the space.
The rest is pretty much so, so.
Keep going, and try to edit and make new props.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/04/2003 10:12 AM EST
Well, what's with the greyscale?

Anyhow, this is pretty basic really, and it's mostly props.

I'm not liking the grey "board" that flies up the center from the well.
The fonts used in the lifebars are pretty dodgy, you can barely read them as they are pretty thin, and they are also not suited. Try the MKDA font, (at the warehouse).

I don't like that it's all grey either.
It's a nice open space though, I do like the way you organized the space.
The rest is pretty much so, so.
Keep going, and try to edit and make new props.
But it's nice for your first artwork.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/04/2003 08:05 PM EST
Uhh... something seems strange about your response Zentile, like I've seen it before wink.

Anyway, I'm not sure I like this much. Its quite obvious you just used the poses for these two characters at the warehouse, because I can still see the 'box' around them. The screen is a little too big as well, the lifebars look odd because they seem small to the image. Its very hard to read as well, and the texts aren't lined up at all.

I'm not really understanding the BG very much at all, I see the upside down candles, but I really don't know what to make of them. There is alot of black here as well, way too much of it. And that big gray rectangle in the center is very odd looking, you need to use more colors and make it less 'square' looking to improve it. The floor doesn't make much sense either really, as you need something on the other side to make it look more like an actual arena for fighting. And what are those two lines that are running across the pillars in the background?

Anyway, its pretty simple, and originality is on the low side. You need to do some more editing with this, and also the jpg will take a toll on the image if you save it in paint. Keep trying at it though.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/04/2003 11:06 PM EST
He seems new the forum. So I think he did good for his first one being 3d in some parts of it. GJ on it. Keep it up.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/05/2003 01:40 PM EST
at least you tried, i mean, come on. he had an idea and used it and it is his first time. you gotta give him some credit.

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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/06/2003 07:53 PM EST
i donno why people respond so harshly sometimes especially to newcomers i mean if they were doing something they were new at i bet they would like someone to tell them kindly what they were doing wrong not say oh its mediocre and verry verry shitty.
try getting some fat lazy arse computer geek to rebuild an automobile engine.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/06/2003 07:58 PM EST
You know, I suggest all of you people actually try READING the comments made, explain to me where you see someone saying "this is shit and you suck" you don't see that do you? If you don't give constructive critism, then it is impossible for whoever it is to improve.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/28/2003 06:06 PM EST
Hmm..Pretty good for your first fake..I noticed you tried to cheat though. Dimming the backround cause you couldnt take out the black backround around the fighters...Cheater! tongue.

Nice though..Next time try to put more effort into it, and you might be able to be the new TimsMK! wink

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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/28/2003 06:55 PM EST
It's shit like this that deserves a zero. Everything that was bad to say about this God awful fake picture has been said already, but in a totally underseved nice way. No need for me to repeat anyone.
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
08/29/2003 06:37 PM EST
Nice avatar bs
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
02/02/2006 12:13 AM EST
5/5
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RE: Fan Art: Fight
02/02/2006 02:15 AM EST
UltimateRyu Wrote:
5/5


wtf?


Anyways, err 1/5. Just copy and paste.
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RE: Fan Submission: Fight
02/02/2006 10:20 PM EST
It seems like you only copied, pasted, and changed the colors. It's also a bit to dark. Nice idea though. 2/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Fight
02/04/2006 06:55 PM EST
Keep trying and you will improve. Im sure you can do better.
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