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posted02/27/2005 05:29 PM (UTC)by
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~Crow~
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Don't be afraid to submit your work!

Anything you may have... created character concepts, character profiles for MK7, or full length novel-type work is great. Point being, we have a lot of authors here who aren't using the Fan Submission system. I would like to think those of you who have submitted your works, but I would like to see more of you making use of this feature.

I guarantee anything that you submit will be up within 24 hours from the time you submitted it. Submission time is not an issue with me. I will approve it at the very moment I realize it has been submitted.

Thanks for your time.
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~Crow~
02/21/2005 08:45 PM (UTC)
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Another note: If you are having problems actually uploading something, don't hesitate to ask me about it. I will do whatever it takes to see that your work is properly submitted.
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Rorak
02/22/2005 04:39 AM (UTC)
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I have a created character, but I can't draw him.....
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~Crow~
02/22/2005 08:03 AM (UTC)
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Rorak Wrote:
I have a created character, but I can't draw him.....


That isn't necessary if you wish for him/her to be uploaded onto the site. All you need it the profile (text). Images are not necessary.

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Black-Rose
02/22/2005 05:06 PM (UTC)
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Name: Rorak
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Alliance: Neutral
Orgin: Outworld
Allies: Kung Lao, Scorpion, Baraka
Foes: Shang Tsung, Reptile, Noob-Saibot, Smoke
Fighting Styles: Dragon, Manis, Ninja Stick
Costume: Will be shown soon....
Power: Fire, Physcic
Strength: Knowing the enemy has fear
Weaknesse: Knowing the enemy has no fear

Rorak was once an ordinary man who was a master at Kung Fu. He had a wife, three children; two boys, one girl. His wife name was Shairn. Then there was Johono, Bladerik, and Xaining. Rorak, was called Decreot back then, before the accident, but we will get into that story later. Decreot and his family moved near a different school, every year, so Decreot could teach his ways of Kubg Fu to the younger people. He loved this job, and would like to never quit. At one school, he found no ordinary fighter. His name was Shujinko. Shujinko was the best learner in his class, for he had also been getting teaching from Bo' Rai Cho. Shujinko, unlike other students, passed the training and left town to teach with Bo' Rai Cho for some time. Decreot, after this, had no more concern for Shujinko, only that he was a good fighter.

A few years later, as Decreot and his family were sitting down at the table and eating, smoke filled the whole house. Everyone was coughing and hacking. Then Decreot fills a hand grab his shoulder and yank him out the door. He was on the ground, but when he looked foward, he wasn't in the same place. He looked around him and saw Shao Kahn's palace. Right then and there, he new that he was in Outworld. Who grabbed him by the shoulder though? And how did he get here? He turned around to see Noob-Saibot and smoke right there infront of him.

Decreot: Wh- who ar- are you?
Noob-Saibot: I am Noob-Saibot and this is Smoke.

Decreot hesitated for a while, but then started to talk to the two new bodies he was looking at infront of him.

Decreot: What do you want with me? Why did you bring me here, to Outworld?!
Noob-Saibot: We need your assistance. We need you to ki-
Decreot: No! I know where this is leading. I will not assist you in your quest. Now bring me back to my family!
Noob-Saibot: You didn't let me finish. Me and Smoke are joining forces to take down the one known as Shao Kahn. If you help us then you will be a ruler with us. Yes, or no?
Decreot: Still no! It is not in my nature to kill someone, even someone that evil. Now take me back to my house!
Noob-Saibot: Oh I can't do that now, you have heard to much.

Smoke jumped from over Noob and kicked Decreot in the chest and he fell to the ground. Sure this gave the greatest of pain to Decreot once the foot colided into his chest, but he just wouldn't let himself die. He got back up, and barely dodged another kick by Smoke. Smoke tried to kick Decreot once more, but Decreot caught his leg before it touched any part of his body. Decreot swung Smoke around and then threw him toward a tree. Smoke's systems, were shut down. Decreot felt a foot hit his head hard, and turned around quickly as his head was in pain.

Noob-Saibot got out a sword and went toward Decreot. Decreot had nothing, but his ninja stick could help defend himself. He quickly got it out and then waitied for Noob to make his move. Noob swung his sword towords Decreot, but Decreot dodged it. Noob then aimed for Decreot's feet, but Decreot jumped over that. As Decreot was still in the air from jumping over the sword, he colided his stick into Noob's head. Noob went straight toward Decreot. Decreot held out his stick to defend himself, but Noob just pushed it out of the way.

Noob-Saibot: Do you really think that a stick can help you win? You won by luck with Smoke, but you won't be to lucky anymore.

Noob held the sword high in the air. Before Noob could make his move, Decreot got his stick in his hand again, and then all of a sudden swords come out of the sides of them. He planted one end of the stick right into Noob. Noob fell to the ground, but was still alive. Decreot had enough. He left his two foes on the floor and went to go search for a way to get home.
What of his family? What are they doing at the moment? He looked all around outworld for desperate help to get back to Earthrealm. He looked around everywhere, but there was no one that could help. For there were hardly any people outside, and everyone he asked told him to leave.

Decreot quit seaching for help, after many hours and sat down on a stump in the forest. He felt that all hope for him was gone. Surely he would never find his family again. He heard a noise. He looked around, but there was no one there. He heard footsteps. He looked all around him, but still there was no one there. Then he began to see the footstpes on the leaves in the forest. They were coming straight toward him. He quickly got out his ninja stick incase whatever (or whoever) was walking towards his would attack.
The figure started to outline, then it's body showed, then feet, then the rest of his body. It was Reptile, but Decreot didn't know who this was.

Reptile: There is no reason to be alarmed, my friend. Please I need your assistance in something.
Decreot: I will not accept unless you give me details about this mission.
Reptile: I need you to find my medalion for me. Someone stole it and went somewhere over that way.

Reptile pointed south,

Reptile: The warrior is too strong for me, but once I saw you defeat those other people a few hours ago, I have been following you. I see that you have lost your way from home, yes?
Decreot: That is correct... who are you?
Reptile: My name is Reptile, but we can't talk now. Do you accept my quest? If you help me then I will help you.
Decreot: You will take me home? But you do not know where I live.
Reptile: I know you are from Earthrealm, and I can take you there. Surely you can go to your home once you are in the correct realm.
Decreot: Okay, once I get the medalion, bring me to Earthrealm.

Decreot stormed off. He headed south and looked everywhere for a warrior. All of the people here looked like ordinary people though. There was no man or woman in a suit at all. Just beggars. Then he saw a man in yellow. He had a mask, a costume, and had a sword. There were skulls on his shoulderpads as a symbol. This must be the man. Decreot hurried over to the one in yellow and started talking.

Decreot: Do you have a medalion of some sort? Reptile said that a warrior has took it from him, and ran off with it.
---------: This is MY medalion that HE stole. So I just got it back from him.
Decreot: What is your name? I am Decreot.
---------: My name...... is Scorpion. And you have no buisness with me so GO!
Decreot: Well, do you have a price for the medalion?
Scorpion: Why do you want this warrior to have my medalion so badly? Are you working for him? Cause if you are then you will be dead in a matter of seconds.
Decreot: This warrior, known as Reptile, said that he would take me home if I brought back the medalion.
Scorpion: Lost from home? Well that is too bad. There is no price for my families medallion.
Decreot: Is there something I could do in order for you to take me to earthrealm then?
Scorpion: Actually there is...... There is a man called Quan Chi. He destroyed my family and clan, and this medalion is all that I have left of them. He is located in the Netherrealm. If you bring him to me. Then will take you home.
Decreot: How am I to get to the Netherrealm? And once I am there, how do I bring him back here?
Scorpion: I will take you to the Netherrealm and I will not leave. until you complete your quest. Are you ready?
Decreot: Yes.

Outworld turned blury and the only thing that he could see was himself. Then the blurness faded and he was in the Netherrealm, with Scorpion infront of him.

Scorpion: I will meat you at this sopt once you find Quan Chi.

Decreot went to find Quan Chi. After many hours of searching, he still saw no sign of Quan Chi. Then the world was blury again. He could see nothing but himself once more. Once again, the blurness faded. He was in Outworld again. But how did he get here? He saw a great light burst through the night sky. He looked over and saw a familiar face walking in a prtal. He couldn't relize who the man was, but he had seen him before. He went into the potal, in hope to find earthrealm.

He was in a weird place. With a Kamidogu sitting on an altar. There were three portals open. One was green, one was blue, and one was red. The red must lead back to the Netherrealm. And the blue back to Outworld. The green portal must lead back to earthrealm. He hurled into the green portal and was in Earthrealm. He was home! The portal was so close to his house he could barely see it. He raced over to his house. He went inside. And stopeed. He saw his family dead, on the floor. He heard the door open again, and saw Shang Tsung there. Decreot didn't know if Shang killed his family, but he was to angry to care. He went toward Shang Tsung with all of his might. Shang Tsung waited for the right moment, then stuck a sword through Decreot's heart. He was dead.

Decreot's soul was lifted up and in a new body. He was in a skeleton. He had aurmor on him, and had the symbol of Onaga the Dragon King on him. He couldn't move. He seemed to be under someone's control. He saw Shang Tsung, then and there right infront of him walking with Quan Chi. He saw his body, and his families' bodies on the floor. He new that Shang Tsung was the murderer. He had to move. He had to kill Shang Tsung. His anger rised, his hatred consumed him, and he was out of the control. He could move. Without thinking, he went after Shang Tsung with all of his might again. Shang Tsung was startled and put the same sword through Decreot's heart. But, he wasn't dead, he seemed to be imortal. He grabbed Shang Tsungs neck and started to choke him. Quan Chi blasted a Fire Skull at Decreot. He let go of Shang Tsung knowing that his soul could be taken away from him. He fleed.

His appearence was hidious. He could not show his face like this. He made a costume. He made a mask. His hatred for Shang Tsung grew. He couldn't remember his old name sense he was to angry and hatred consumed him. He was, and is, Rorak from that day foward. Seeking the death of Shang Tsung.
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~Crow~
02/22/2005 06:08 PM (UTC)
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It's simple. Just click this link and find the file on your hard drive. Give it a name, something such as "Character Concept: Rorak" and say a free words if you would like.

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Black-Rose
02/22/2005 06:14 PM (UTC)
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One of my friends are making me him. I gave them all of details that I could. Marine_Warrioir has the credit for the drawing. I don't have it yet though.
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Black-Rose
02/22/2005 06:51 PM (UTC)
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Okay. Thanks Marine_Warrior.

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Black-Rose
02/24/2005 04:28 AM (UTC)
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Name: Aiwendre
Age: 52
Gender: Male
Alliance: Evil
Orgin: Outworld
Allies: Noob-Saibot
Foes: Kung Lao, Sub-Zero, Baraka, Shinock
Fighting Styles: Dragon, Crane, Straight Sword
Power: Mimicer
Strength: When enemy has power he can mimic and use against them
Weakness: When enemy uses nothing but their strength to fight

Aiwendre is the leader of his clan, the Koratome. He started this clan so that he may take over all of the realms and conquer. He has not suceeded... yet. His clan still grows and everytime he gets a new member in his clan, he will learn their powers and submit them to his own. Aiwendre is a mimicer, like Shinock. He has mastered mimicing and can preform the power used against him before it even gets thrown at him. His clan fears him, so that is why they have joined.

With the combined power of him and his clan, he has a chance to rule all of the realms. Then, the deadly alliance was formed, and there were two sorcerers that had the power to destroy Aiwendre even with the combined power of his clan. He had to get more power in order to take down the sorcerers, but who is that powerful? Who has the strength to take down both Shang Tsung and Quan Chi?

It was all clear to Aiwendre. He must learn the power of Liu Kang, the Earthrealm champion. He set off for the warrior at once. Aiwendre went to the portal in order to get to Earth. Aiwendre spent many, many hours looking for Liu Kang, but couldn't find him. He looked everywhere, but still no sign. It was then that he went back to his clan in Outworld and told them to search all of the realms for him, in case he had left Earth. They did as he said.

Aiwendre remained in Outworld to train for his battle with Liu Kang once his clan has found him. He trained all day, waiting for his clan to come back with Liu Kang. Late at night, Aiwendre spotted one of his clan members walking towards him. He could see another body with the member, so he thought for sure that it was Liu Kang. He hurried towards Liu Kang.

The warrior let go of Liu Kang from his cluctes and Lui Kang fell to the floor. He was dead. He was killed by Shang Tsung and Quan Chi. Aiwendre was so mad with this that he grabbed the warrior by the throat and choked him to death.

There was only one other person that has the power to defeat the sorcerers and that is Kung Lao. Aiwendre gathered up all of his clan and told them to search for him. Hopfully, the two sorcerers havn't killed the last hope for Aiwendre's sucsess. The clan set off for Kung Lao.

------------: Hey..... you.
Aiwendre: What the? Who is there? Show yourself.

Aiwendre could hear the voice, but could not see the body. Then from behind a boulder, came Shinock.

Aiwendre: Shinock? Why have you came to me?
Shinock: I see that you seek to rule all of the realms. Well, so do I. I also see that you have the same power as I do. After many years, I have also learned other's powers and have mastered them all. If me and you join forces then we both can rule all of the realms.
Aiwendre: There will be no need. My clan is off to collect Kung Lao, so I may learn his power and then destroy those two sorcerers.
Shinock: Do you think that the power of one warrior can match the length of two sorcerers' powers?
Aiwendre: I have also collected my clan's powers. Surely once I get Kung Lao's power I will have more then enough power that I need to rule.
Shinock: Remember, that once you destroy Shang Tsung, all of the souls will be freed, even Liu Kang's. The souls will return to their bodies and will live again. Liu Kang, alone, has the power to take you or me down, but if we join forces then we will be unstopable.
Aiwendre: Yes, I see your point an-

Aiwendre spotted his clan with Kung Lao. He started towards Kung Lao.

Aiwendre: Release him!

The clan members let go of Kung Lao and at that very moment Kung Lao went foward Aiwendre. He jumped and kicked him in chin.

Kung Lao: Bring it!

Kung Lao kicked Aiwendre several times and did all sorts of combos. Aiwendre was bleeding bad and was beaten. Kung Lao got out his sword and stabbed it right threw Aiwendre's heart. Kung Lao turned around to see all of Aiwendre's clan scurring off in fear of Kung Lao. Aiwendre got up, but Kung Lao didn't notice. Aiwendre grabbed Kung Lao, turned him around, then lifted him in the air while he was choking him.

Aiwendre: You FOOL! I am imortal, you cannot kill me for you cannot take my soul.

He dropped Kung Lao. He then turned to Shinock who was still standing in the same place.

Aiwendre: I accept your offer. Come, we will head towards Shang Tsung's palace at once.
Shinock: No! We cannot just leave Kung Lao here aive. Aiwendre: Why not? He is no threat to us. Shinock: Yes, but he has the friends who can. Raiden, the thunder god, can take both of us down, but if he doesn't know that we have formed our own alliance then we will be fine and safe. We must kill this Kung Lao. Aiwendre: You are right. He looked over at Kung Lao who was still on the ground... he went over to Kung Lao and stood over him. Aiwendre: I will kill you.... He grabbed Kung Lao by his shirt and threw him on the ground. Kung Lao got up, and tried to defend himself. He kicked Aiwendre. He kicked him again, and then again, and then many other times. Kung Lao was too fast ofr Aiwendre, but Aiwendre was the one who had the advantage, for he was imortal. Aiwendre finally caught one of Kung Lao's kicks and hit the knee cap so it bended back backwards. Kung Lao let out a powerful yelp. His knee was broken and dislocated. He couldn't fight any longer and surely he would die if he did continue too. Kung Lao got out a sword and cut his head off. He preformed a hara-kiri. Aiwendre: Well, I guess that is less work for me. I have learned Kung Lao's moves and combos. Theese are sure to come in handy as we make our attack. Shinock: I was watching all of his attacks and moves as well. I have seen better though. Now, it doesn't even matter if Raiden finds out about our plan. Together, we can take him. He will not stand a chance. Aiwendre: Now that Kung Lao is out of the way, we will make our way for Shang Tsung and Quan Chi.

They headed towards Shang Tsung's palace. Aiwendre's clan followed them.

Aiwenre: Once we get there, make sure that the sorcerers do not know that we have entered. Then while Quan Chi is alone we will kill him quick and silently so he doesn't make a noise as he dies. Then we will both go for Shang Tsung.
Shinock: Good plan.

They were looking straight at the palace. It was visible from where they stand.

Aiwendre: Remeber, don't let them know we are here.

They walked in the palace as the clan stayed behind. They went in the doors, looked around. They saw no one. So they carried on looking for Quan Chi. They went to a door, and slowly opened it.

Quan Chi: I will carry the amulet! I do not trust you with it.
Shang Tsung: Well, I don't trust you more then you trust me with it!
Quan Chi: I don't care what you say! I am keeping the amulet.

Quan Chi fired a flaming skull at Shang Tsung and went off into another door.

Aiwendre: I have already learned Shang Tsung's and Quan Chi's power.
Shinock: Yes me too.....

Knowing that sense Shinock has learned how to steal souls, he wondered if a form of betrayal was about to come. He did not want to take any chances. He punched Shinock to the ground and took his soul. Quan Chi and Shang Tsung were back in the room together arguing. Shang Tsung spotted Aiwendre.

With the two sorcerers in the room he wouldn't be able to continue with his plan. He set off before they could attack him. He ran passed his clan and headed back to Outworld while his clan followed him.

Aiwendre was so close to sucseeding, but he could not risk the chance up of being betrayed. He had to kill Shinock. Unfortunatly, Quan Chi came back in the room and Shang Tsung spotted Aiwendre. There was no possible way Aiwendre could've survived the battle. He had to continue his quest another time.
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Marine_Warrior
02/24/2005 07:51 PM (UTC)
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Here ya go Black_Rose:

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Black-Rose
02/24/2005 07:59 PM (UTC)
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Wow! Thanks dude... again! Thank you for everything.
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Black-Rose
02/25/2005 04:30 PM (UTC)
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I am editing Aiwendre's story little by little. I wonder if there is some sort of errors of grammar or spelling that I am missing. I added a fight with Aiwendre and Kung Lao before they left.
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Black-Rose
02/25/2005 05:04 PM (UTC)
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I thought of the look of another character... just havn't thought of his background story yet... it will come soon!
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mccauslander
02/26/2005 01:36 AM (UTC)
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Hey ~Crow~, how come I can't submit my character bios as Word Documents? I would have thought that it was complusory to have Word documents for Fan Fiction.

And, what type of file is RTF?

Thanx
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~Crow~
02/26/2005 03:49 AM (UTC)
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RTF stands for Rich Text Format

You should find it as an option in most text programs. If you don't see it in what you are using, use WordPad instead. All versions of Windows carry WordPad, to my knowledge.
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Torchia
02/26/2005 06:12 AM (UTC)
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No no, people.

You don't post your character bios/ stories/ pictures here. Go here and uplode it.
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Black-Rose
02/27/2005 03:29 AM (UTC)
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torchia Wrote:
No no, people.

You don't post your character bios/ stories/ pictures here. Go here and uplode it.


I know how to post my submissions but these stories aren't going to be submitted (at least, not all of them wink ). I post my stories here because I want to see if there are any errors or if other people like them or not.
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mccauslander
02/27/2005 03:47 AM (UTC)
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~Crow~ Wrote:
RTF stands for Rich Text Format

You should find it as an option in most text programs. If you don't see it in what you are using, use WordPad instead. All versions of Windows carry WordPad, to my knowledge.


Thanks, I've submitted my work now
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~Crow~
02/27/2005 06:31 AM (UTC)
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mccauslander Wrote:


Thanks, I've submitted my work now


Thanks. :>
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Black-Rose
02/27/2005 05:29 PM (UTC)
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I can't wait to see it. I am sure that it will be good. Hey, do you mind rating my character concept of rorak? that would be great, thanks.
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