Holy shit Zombie, this is beautiful. o_o Boy did you make her anorexic though XD

I can't really see her as Frost; maybe with colour it'll help. My one crit, since everything else you seem to have a lovely handle on, is that her muzzle is flat with the mask on. Kinda like the thing is crooked and her nose just drops off behind it. Maybe work on that in the future; I know 3/4 views with masks aren't easy. o_o;;

Beautiful work though :)

Very nice indeedy.

RammSPOOn Wrote:My one crit, since everything else you seem to have a lovely handle on, is that her muzzle is flat with the mask on. Kinda like the thing is crooked and her nose just drops off behind it. Maybe work on that in the future; I know 3/4 views with masks aren't easy. o_o;;

I see what you mean, but it's really not a problem from my view. I think the design of the muzzle may have been a challenge to get right from 3/4 view, but like you said, it isn't easy. Perhaps a simple design would have yielded more decernable detail, but why quible over a miniscule thing such as this?

But I will say that Lin Kuei markings on her costume would have really tightened her up perfectly. But hey, it's a great piece you've done here Zombie. Worthy of a 5/5 rating.

Did you ink the piece before you scanned in or in a photo editing prorgam?

GD

ghostdragon Wrote: Perhaps a simple design would have yielded more decernable detail, but why quible over a miniscule thing such as this? GD

Because she looks like her face was squished up against a wall while her mask was put in place and it's something that needs to be worked on, that's why. Everyone quibles over how JAX draws watermelon lips when it's a matter of style, and this is an anatomy issue that needs some work. Thank you, next question.

Her shoulders and crotch need a bit of work, but the overall design is very good, good penmenship as well. :)

Awesome job Zombie. The whole thing looks good imo. I like the pose you have her in. Her mask looks fine to me. You can draw hair very well. I like her outfit as well. The only critique I see is that her bottoms seem to come over a little to much over her leg on the left side. Other than that she looks great to me. 5/5 Dragons.

Holy shit! Nice drawing, this is Hanabelle Lector for MK7!
Seriously this is very good. As usall you did the hair so well (I am quite jealous). Nice costume too.

WOW, great work zombie!! Her hair and clothing look great, as usual a very nicely detailed picture. I agree with the others when they say the nose looks a little weird, I don’t think it’s because of the mask, it’s more from the lack of detail in that particular area of her face. But I’m sure you’re planning on coloring this piece and blowing our minds with how totally wrong we are, so I’ll just sit back and patiently wait for your finished master piece.

That concept is awesome. Her mask looks really good. I couldnt picture frost wearing something like that. Speacially her spiky hair. I really like the detail on the outfit. I dont think there is absolutely anything wrong with it. Awesome job. 5/5

Very nice

B e a utiful pic my friend!

man thanks for the responses!

yes i see what everyone is talking about with the nose thing, i'll what i can do when i color it,

ghost- yeah i ink everything before i scan it,



i'll have to see how it turns out when i color it, but i think i'll make her a "new" character instead of frost.

Mm, yeah, I didn't think about colouring fixing it. Yeah, just manipulate the lighting and shadows around the area, you should be able to fix it :)

pretty awesome- although when I saw the pic I was thinking she looked more like a female classic reptile.
and yeah- crotch is a little too square...

bring on the colour, that is an amazing pic!

Well crap you just beat me to it. Indeed the coloring will probably be used to fake depth on the mask.

As for the rest, it's beautiful, but no way is that Frost. That's no problem by me though.

Wyatt

beautiful.

Just beautiful. Very, very nicely done, but as someone already said, it's not very much like Frost at all. I guess what really bothers me is the mask, which has some sort of teeth design on it, like Reptile's, which doesn't make sense. Lin Kuei masks have always had a classy design to them, not like this at all.

That is awsome Zombie. I was just checking out your other drawing as well, amazing man. You got quit a tallent. I like that Lolita character you drew as well.

My only critique with this pic though is her long hair doesn't make it seem like Frost. Maybe go shorter with the hair (but not like how she was with the spiked hair in Alliance). It's certainly an imprivement over he spiky hair though. Maybe a slightly shorter than shoulder length hair would work a little better. I love the costume, and unlike what a lot of people are saying I actually like the mask, and don't find a problem with it. It looks fine to me.

ok, first of all.....you have incredible art skills, my art is probably half as good as yours, they are ok. second, my favorite character has always been subzero, when i heard about frost it made me think"suby has a hot girlfriend" when i saw her, not so bad could use a thing or two on the ice hair. this picture makes me think of what i thought she should look like, cant wait for it colored. 5/5

If Frost looks like that, u bet I'll play her haha...

She's really well drawn, I like your style. The outfit is innovative and sexy too, I'd like to see her style going this way in the next MKs.