no hes not lol

do you mean that i should have said `goro is the shokan`, or that the art is shit, or both?

I think it looks pretty cool.

You obviously have talent.



Things I'd work on are...

Make it look cleaner

Put a sheet of paper on your Wacom tablet and draw on that.

It helps to make your lines straighter.

Instead of using just a line for the muscles, use shadow, Try and make stuff look more 3D. (I'm looking at the abs specifically)

The arms stand out pretty good, but the face seems crooked.

Did you try flipping the image to check for errors?

thanks dude.

The lines were drawn on paper in pencil, and the rest was done using a mouse on the computer.

I checked by mirroring after scanning, and saw that it looked a bit messed up. I tried using the free transform tool to make things look a bit better.

I think i need to learn some more anatomy- i find it hard to do things cleanly and clearly since i'm not totally sure what they should look like. I might try repeating this using a reference picture.

Ta very much for the advice- hopefully i can make use of it for next time...

To fix a crooked face, use the Liquify filter in Photoshop.

Filters>Liquify


It gives you a new set of tools that are great for fixing crooked looking stuff and more...


I use it all the time to fix my heads, eyes,.........etc.

If I make a head too large, I use the liquify tools to shrink it. First paint a mask for the head in the Liquify tools window, then I use a large push brush to push the lines in from every angle.

It doesn't blur the lines and it's a lot better than the transform modifier depending on your need.


If you do a lot of art on the computer, get a Wacom tablet. It's way better than using a mouse.

I only have Paint Shop Pro. THat has a `warp` brush that i sometimes use to fix stuff- especially faces. I assume it's the equivalent of that thing in Photoshop. Maybe i will get a tablet. I reckon i should at least invest in a shaving mirror or something to check my stuff before i scan it.

I think warp is similar, but not as good.



Photoshop has a warp tool too. IT makes a wireframe over your selection, and then you can move the points and bend the lines.



The Liquify filter is way better though.

But you don't have PS.

Maybe you can download it somewhere, or a demo.

no i think the pics gd but i hate goro i think he shud die on a bed of nails and slowly bleed to death i hate him that much but the pic really gd

That's a pretty cool sketch. I think that you could probably develop it more to make a better picture though. 3.5/5 because it just looks too unfinished. But I think that you are on the right track. Keep practicing and you'll probably get better.

4/5

This is an excellent picture. You should only fix the right arms and make them look bigger so they dont look like tehy are glued to his body.

Awesome.