a bit too simple and repetitive...not amazing.

Amazing? More like ASTONISHING. No, more like DUMBFOUNDING. Marvellous, Undreamable, AWE INSPIRING.

No, gentlemen, I think the word that describes this EPIC OF IMMENSE PROPORTIONS (proportions simmilar only to Lucifer's secret Bible), is CRAPTASTIC.
EDIT: satinsoven, why edit your post from a sarcastic remark to constructive criticism? You are not human.

Add a little more detail, because that is too short to actualy be a storyline, even in a nutshell.

Hurray, a nub that spells Liu Kang correctly.

because my jerkiness was un needed when this newbie deserved critism instead. i was like him too so i know what im doing.

That is more of an idea than a stoyline. I suggest you make a proper storyline with detail and description (around 3-4 pages on Microsoft Word) if you want to make it a good story. Perhaps then you can post it on MKO. But until then, there is no need to post ideas like this because not everyone is that... nice. But yeah... if you need any help, just IM me. And welcome to the site!

Nope, agressive pointless sarcasm is the way.

OmG that is like teh best idea ever!!!!111





(sarcasm)

I think this guy is like my cousin or something.

well zentile i think agrresive pointless sarcasm is more or less needed for guys with over 10 visits

Oh yes. Of course it's needed for guys with over 10 visits. Sarcasm! Look at me! I have over ten visits! I need sarcasm!

i meant sarcasm was more or less needed for n00bs who keep repeating the same mistakes regardless of the good advice people give them in several seperate threads. and in this case, he didn't deserve it bcz he's a first timer.

Oh, look at me! I'm a first timer! Someone give me sarcasm! I'm the sarcasm man! From irony town! Oh! Look at me!

now you're being so sarcastic i don't have a clue what you're saying

hmm.Thats such a crap idea Im suprised midway havent done it yet.Sheesh