How's this for a sprite comic?
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posted08/16/2004 10:34 AM (UTC)by
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Tetra Vega
This took me awhile ,it's my first sprite comic. Any and all criticism is welcome ,and look! No InuYasha!



^_^^_^InuYasha^_^^_^
forgot something hold on.
EDIT:Fixed it.
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UltimateRyu
08/13/2004 04:09 PM (UTC)
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lol nice
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the_shirt_ninja
08/13/2004 05:20 PM (UTC)
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Hmmm...not bad, not bad.
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Slelica
08/13/2004 06:23 PM (UTC)
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it sucks
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Manneen
08/13/2004 06:55 PM (UTC)
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It's ok...but there's one problem:

Kano's MK3 sprite changed suddenly to a MK1 sprite.
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08/13/2004 09:19 PM (UTC)
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I was afraid to click on this... in fear of another shitty Inyuasha thing... but now that I see it's not like that... it still fucking blows.
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JoRdANMan
08/14/2004 12:53 AM (UTC)
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Hooky-Fooky Wrote:
It's ok...but there's one problem:

Kano's MK3 sprite changed suddenly to a MK1 sprite.

If u would have read it, it said that he changed cloths. Anyways i thought it was pretty cool, i like how she said "say hi to scorpion"
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Manneen
08/14/2004 07:37 PM (UTC)
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^ oh sorry i missed that Stryker said to Kano about the clothes thing sad

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Good comic anyways
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Zentile
08/15/2004 11:37 AM (UTC)
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slelica Wrote:
it sucks



Shut the fuck up. I'm as angry as you are, but saying ''it sucks'' isn't going to help this guy get any better. Because I do think he can get better, even though I absolutely dislike this comic.

Well first of all, the quality is dreadful, man. It looks like you saved it as a jpg on Paint, then opened it up on photoshop, saved it as a gif, then you opened it on Paint and saved it as jpg again. I have no idea what you did to get such bad quality.
I was very glad to see that all the speech bubbles are in correct order, I wasn't expecting that at all. Very nice surprise.

It wasn't really funny... and it really didn't seem to have any jokes, except that you were driving us all into a punchline at the end... which didn't happen. Everything happened as it was predicted in the beginning. Kano was taken from prison and executed... there's no joke, there's no punchline, nothing.

Keep trying though, I think you can get better at this.
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08/15/2004 01:00 PM (UTC)
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But I've got to give you props on... well... the props! Normally I hate custom backgrounds that are just everything mixed up together, but you've arranged everything quite nicely, I must say.
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balkcsiaboot
08/15/2004 02:32 PM (UTC)
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slelica, I bet the only damn reason why you think it sucks is because you saw the anime in his avatar and signature. But yeah Vega... ^_^ ...those faces are kind of annoying.

This is actually not the worst comic I've ever seen. Although I didn't fall off my chair and roll around the ground laughing my ass off, I got the joke in my head and sort of said 'hah hah' to myself. I agree with Kombat's comment with your background. I think you should try and improve the picture quality, and fill in the 'white stuff' you left transparent (parts of sprites, especially Raiden's thunder).

I have yet to see am MK Comic that makes me literally laugh out loud... so don't feel like "you suck and you should never try again." I have seen 10 times worse than this, I honestly have.
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-A-nubis
08/15/2004 05:26 PM (UTC)
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for a first time comic i think this is good also that background, but the quality is bad like every1 else said. Fix the quality and the comic will be allot btr. but to complete ur comic you need to have some funny jokes. with out funny jokes, allot of people will probably say: it suckstongue. so think of some good jokes and fix the quality and then ur comic will be goodsmile

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08/15/2004 08:12 PM (UTC)
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I love it, this is very good.
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Geez, I've been a member since MKDA was just a pic of Scorpion and Jax looking at each other and I have less than 2,000 visits. I should really log in more...

08/15/2004 08:48 PM (UTC)
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Shang Tsung: IM GOING TO KILL YOU!

LMAO that was great. Especially at the end when Dan "Toasty" Forden scared Stryker shitless.grin
Saying it sucks doesn't make it or my crap-ass skills any better. Personally I don't care if you dislike it, it's for the people who do like it, everybody has their own tastes. I'm not some rich fucker with fancy computer gear either, and excuse me for not being able to use "Paint" to its fullest. My original idea had the whole throne with the skull things as the source for the electricity. The reason Kano's sprite changed was 'cause I wanted his arms up holding the bars(look closely)and His MK1 sprite has that sitting frame for some reason. You could try giving frienly/helpfull advice, unless you want to see more low level crap.



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-A-nubis
08/16/2004 10:34 AM (UTC)
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Tetra_Vega Wrote:
Saying it sucks doesn't make it or my crap-ass skills any better. Personally I don't care if you dislike it, it's for the people who do like it, everybody has their own tastes. I'm not some rich fucker with fancy computer gear either, and excuse me for not being able to use "Paint" to its fullest. My original idea had the whole throne with the skull things as the source for the electricity. The reason Kano's sprite changed was 'cause I wanted his arms up holding the bars(look closely)and His MK1 sprite has that sitting frame for some reason. You could try giving frienly/helpfull advice, unless you want to see more low level crap.



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