Jade in thought
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Jade in thought
02/09/2006 01:11 AM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/09/2006 12:10 PM EST
I don't know why, but there is something about the picture that reminds of Julia and Michelle from Tekken. The way the hair is placed gives her an Indian look, maybe?

I don't think the head is too big. It could be a teen-age Jade! Teen-agers heads appear larger in proportion to their bodies than adults do. It's more like 1/6, as opposed to 1/7, or 1/8.

It's nicely done anyway, so I'm giving it full points.
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/09/2006 04:44 PM EST
nobrainer Wrote:
I don't know why, but there is something about the picture that reminds of Julia and Michelle from Tekken. The way the hair is placed gives her an Indian look, maybe?


I don't think the head is too big. It could be a teen-age Jade! Teen-agers heads appear larger in proportion to their bodies than adults do. It's more like 1/6, as opposed to 1/7, or 1/8.

It's nicely done anyway, so I'm giving it full points.

I like the drawing and as nobrainer said, she looks like Julia from Tekken. :P And all my comments are pretty much the same as above. The head is ok and she defintely looks like she is in her teenage years, but it's still pretty good. 4.5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/09/2006 07:36 PM EST
Sachmis! grin

Its great to see you back. Where would MKO be without Jades biggest fan? I hope you post more often. Good to see you.

Now, I think your pic is excellent. The pose is fantastic, I love it, and the outfit looks superb. I really like the way you drew her, good job!

But I have to say the face doesn’t look like Jade at all, nor does her hair-style. She looks like a different character, but your pic is practically perfect in every other aspect, so I will still give you a well disserved 5/5. Good job!
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/10/2006 12:07 AM EST
Thank you for your comments. I agree with what everyone has said about the face and hair.



Does this look better?

The full image
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/10/2006 12:11 AM EST
Nice drawing


I think it might help to get rid of some of the lines on her nose.

I see you are trying to get the perspective going, but the extra lines are making It stick out too much.

Just hint at it, and see if it looks any better.
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RE: Fan Submission: Jade in thought
02/10/2006 12:24 AM EST
bleed Wrote:
Nice drawing


I think it might help to get rid of some of the lines on her nose.

I see you are trying to get the perspective going, but the extra lines are making It stick out too much.

Just hint at it, and see if it looks any better.

Thanks!


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