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04/30/2003 04:54 PM EST
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04/30/2003 05:55 PM EST
I like the drawing, it has comic feel to it. The fact that everything is black and white, except for Sub-Zero's eyes is a nice touch, in my opinion.
I stopped looking at the typograhpy after a fraction of a second, I think it's pulling the viewer's attention away from the drawing, and not in a good way, which is a shame.
Why not keep the typography in the same style as the drawing, so it becomes part of it?

I don't know if you drew the bodies of the characters like that intentionally, but if you need any help on getting the proportions right (more realistic), I suggest you pick up some books on the human anatomy. They can really help a bunch.

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
04/30/2003 06:39 PM EST
Nice concept, I like that you did it in black in white. Keep going, progression is good. :)

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 05:33 AM EST
i did the body s two acjbazar
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 06:46 AM EST
Hmmm...the only thing I like is that gold effect on the font you used. And you should really stop doing that, crooked line stuff you used to draw the characters. I've seen that way too many times!! And yes, like NovaStarr said -- Your doing a good job by drawing in black 'N white.

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 08:56 AM EST
Better, the style is very unique and it's not overwrought with filters. It's really pretty good. You just need to work on anatomy now.

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 09:10 AM EST
They look like apes because of their long arms and short legs. As always, the gel effect ruined it for me.
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 09:11 AM EST
karim Wrote:
i did the body s two acjbazar


Ik geloof niet dat je begrijpt wat ik bedoel.

Translation: I don't think you understand what I'm saying.
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 09:20 AM EST
nu moet ik nog allemaar kleuren begrijpen acjbazar
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/01/2003 12:11 PM EST
Spürt die Liebe. :)

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/02/2003 08:34 AM EST
What was that? Come on now, translate for us lazy Americans who don't learn other languages. wink

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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/02/2003 08:50 AM EST
Well, if one can cast aside the distorted proportions, this is actually a quite detailed b&w lineart. Cage's abdomen and all their arm muscles are especially well-formed.
I like the touch of blue glow for Subby's eyes, but I think you should make the text black and white- to drawl more attention to the actual lineart and make the composition appear more consistent.

Also, even considering the distorted proportions, their lower bodies are just too small- especially on Subby, since that vest makes his upper body seem massive. When working with realistic portions, keep in mind that the average human body stands 7.5-8 heads tall. Of cpourse, as AcjB advised, human anatomy books could really be of some use to ya. Also do consider taking a model drawling class, if 'tis available.

But again, the lineart itself is pretty damn good, just clean up the portions and you've got a winnar!
Later Karim- don't spam please ;)
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/02/2003 04:50 PM EST

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What was that? Come on now, translate for us lazy Americans who don't learn other languages.

Wyatt
i set i must understand the colors know
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/02/2003 05:11 PM EST
it dont like it, u need to add color or summtin and it could be better
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RE: Fan Art: johny cage mgs2 snake sub-zero
05/02/2003 08:58 PM EST
I like it except for the shitty part.....so I hate it.
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