I like the drawing, it has comic feel to it. The fact that everything is black and white, except for Sub-Zero's eyes is a nice touch, in my opinion.
I stopped looking at the typograhpy after a fraction of a second, I think it's pulling the viewer's attention away from the drawing, and not in a good way, which is a shame.
Why not keep the typography in the same style as the drawing, so it becomes part of it?

I don't know if you drew the bodies of the characters like that intentionally, but if you need any help on getting the proportions right (more realistic), I suggest you pick up some books on the human anatomy. They can really help a bunch.

-Acj

Nice concept, I like that you did it in black in white. Keep going, progression is good. :)

i did the body s two acjbazar

Better, the style is very unique and it's not overwrought with filters. It's really pretty good. You just need to work on anatomy now.

Wyatt

They look like apes because of their long arms and short legs. As always, the gel effect ruined it for me.

karim Wrote: i did the body s two acjbazar

Ik geloof niet dat je begrijpt wat ik bedoel.

Translation: I don't think you understand what I'm saying.

nu moet ik nog allemaar kleuren begrijpen acjbazar

Spürt die Liebe. :)

What was that? Come on now, translate for us lazy Americans who don't learn other languages.

Wyatt

Well, if one can cast aside the distorted proportions, this is actually a quite detailed b&w lineart. Cage's abdomen and all their arm muscles are especially well-formed.
I like the touch of blue glow for Subby's eyes, but I think you should make the text black and white- to drawl more attention to the actual lineart and make the composition appear more consistent.

Also, even considering the distorted proportions, their lower bodies are just too small- especially on Subby, since that vest makes his upper body seem massive. When working with realistic portions, keep in mind that the average human body stands 7.5-8 heads tall. Of cpourse, as AcjB advised, human anatomy books could really be of some use to ya. Also do consider taking a model drawling class, if 'tis available.

But again, the lineart itself is pretty damn good, just clean up the portions and you've got a winnar!
Later Karim- don't spam please ;)

RaMeir Wrote: What was that? Come on now, translate for us lazy Americans who don't learn other languages. Wyatt

i set i must understand the colors know

it dont like it, u need to add color or summtin and it could be better

I like it except for the shitty part.....so I hate it.