Kenshi's Telekinetic Sword Stab
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posted07/23/2003 11:25 AM (UTC)by
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02/19/2003 04:02 PM (UTC)
My latest fake. I think it's pretty good.

The Kenshi sprite took me about 2 1⁄2 hours to make and the Kung Lao about 1 hour.






Wow, I like.
But there are still a few things (read on for the good bits lol).

- Lifebars, fab, but no win marks/win texts or a timer.
- That blood is a bit star shape don't you think? I love the colours, but I am not so keen on the way it is "spurtin", i.e. in lines.
? The pose Kenshi in is an interesting choice, with his hand on his hip and the way the hand is. Not really a bad or good thing I guess tongue.

Good things:
+ Nice idea.
+ Excellent sprite edits.
+ Telekinetic effect is fab.
+ Loving what there is on the lifebars.
+ Shadows included, background dark, all those little details included.
+ The blood is of nice colours tongue.
+ Nice texts in the lifebars as well.
+ Most amount of +'s I've probably ever given.

Love the fake, but I think a little more creativity with the blood could have been added smile.
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07/18/2003 04:01 PM (UTC)
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timsmk Wrote:
Wow, I like.
But there are still a few things (read on for the good bits lol).

- Lifebars, fab, but no win marks/win texts or a timer.


I knew I forgot something! I'll fix that.
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07/18/2003 04:20 PM (UTC)
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My latest fake. I think it's pretty good.

The Kenshi sprite took me about 2 1⁄2 hours to make and the Kung Lao about 1 hour.





::EDIT::
Added timer and win marks.


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NoobSaibot
07/18/2003 04:30 PM (UTC)
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Woah...the Kenshit sprite looks almost perfect. But you of done a little more work on his face. The Lung Lao sprite is great as well, but that too, his hat should of been remade or edited to look just like the MKDA Kung Lao.

The life bars are nice...and so are the bullets you put there, to Indicate the winnings. Hmmm...nice this is Kenshi's Telekinetic Sword Stab, isn't this a fatality? Where is the fatality text?

Anyways, Rating: 4/5. Good Work glasses!

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Zentile
07/18/2003 04:32 PM (UTC)
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They're all red Xs right now, but I saw the fake a few minutes ago, so here here goes:

On the plus side:
- The Kung Lao sprite is EXCELLENT. The Kenshi sprite is pretty good, but his stance...well, I think it's a bit ...inapropriate.
- The lifebars are pretty nice.
- The psychic effects are good.

On the minus side:
- The Kenshi sprite is a bit... inapropriate.
- The blood looks too spiky.
- No timer and no victory marks(I'm talking about the fake you showed earlier, and it didn't have any victory marks nor timer.)

Overall, I think it's an awsome fake. :D the Kenshi sprite needs work, though.
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07/18/2003 06:44 PM (UTC)
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Great Sprites! I think Kenshi's Hand position is well put and exacly on his sword direction.
I just think that the colors are too bright for my taste, don't get me wrong about that, the amount of detail is exacly like the MKDA ones in your sprites.
The blood is too straight imo.
Overall and exellent job on the sprites and a great fatality idea! wink

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Sub-Zero_7th
07/18/2003 06:49 PM (UTC)
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Well I think overall this is a good pic but I do have a couple of problems. The first problem I see has to do with the blood. To me, it sort of seems as if there were a bunch of red spears trying to impale him all at once. The second problem (and this problem is smaller than the first one) is that whole hip thing. It's sort of weird but I'm not going to explain it. The third problem has to do with the lack of the victory and fatality thing. It should have "Kenshi Wins! Fatality". But overall, I give it a 4 out of 5 since I like the concept and the sprites.
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07/18/2003 06:51 PM (UTC)
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Sub-Zero_7th Wrote:
Well I think overall this is a good pic but I do have a couple of problems. The first problem I see has to do with the blood. To me, it sort of seems as if there were a bunch of red spears trying to impale him all at once. The second problem (and this problem is smaller than the first one) is that whole hip thing. It's sort of weird but I'm not going to explain it. The third problem has to do with the lack of the victory and fatality thing. It should have "Kenshi Wins! Fatality". But overall, I give it a 4 out of 5 since I like the concept and the sprites.


No there shouldn't be any Fatality text and Kenshi wins text, simply because the fatality is still hapening! If Kenshi was in his winning stance and Kung Lao on the ground I would have agreed, but is not the case here. Saibot got that right here!
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MaRcElunbeatable
07/18/2003 08:32 PM (UTC)
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wow your getting a lot better w/ sprite making. But for some reason theres some few things that need more work for example:
The way the sword when in to KungLao and the blood could use more detail its hard to see the sword maybe you should make it bigger, the blood... you should add more and it looks like red lines :-/
The screen should be dark
Add WINS on top of the lifebars
KungLao yellow color is a bit bright
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07/18/2003 10:24 PM (UTC)
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Ok, I like this one. The sprites look amazing for the most part. Kung Lao is basically perfect, i think you nailed the right shades of all the colors you used there. The Kenshi sprite... is pretty good I suppose. The telekenetic effect is well done, and the position of his right hand is as well. But I'm not liking what he's doing with his left hand, it doesn't look very realistic.

I have to admit that the fatality idea is awesome in itself. The sword looks pretty good, and the effects on it look as great as they are on Kenshi. Shadows are there, good job. The blood, however, is a problem. It looks to cartoony, and its 'spurting' too straight. It would be nice if it wasn't flying so high, perhaps just falling toward the arena floor a bit would have made this better, not that this fake isn't good already.

Ok, the lifebars you added, I'm really not liking them to well. You went with the transparent effect, and I really don't favor those types of lifebars, though its not difficult to tell that Kung Lao has no life left in the meter. The win tokens are pretty cool though, not something I'd expect in MK, but they're not bad either. I do like the timer though, trying to be more original I suppose. Overall, I think this is an above average fake.
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SubScorpTile
07/19/2003 06:44 AM (UTC)
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HOLY SHIT KICK ASS!!!!!!!!
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balkcsiaboot
07/19/2003 03:11 PM (UTC)
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That's pretty damn awesome. Kenshi is almost perfect besides his goofy looking arm and his head. I think Kung Lao looks too cartoony, I don't really like the health bars, you didn't add the timer or the icons for the rounds he won, and I think you should have used another stage.
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07/19/2003 03:28 PM (UTC)
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Its pretty good, better then most shit on here. I dont like the blood though...
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07/23/2003 02:21 AM (UTC)
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I can't see anything!!! sad

sharemation is not working properly lately I think!!!
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07/23/2003 05:50 AM (UTC)
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O.K nothing personal but whats up w/ this "MK5.ORG yadda yadda yadda"? SST did you ask SubCero if its o.k to? I mean jimbo ask me to join his Original Gangstas, then Skorpion's MK5.ORG Pimps are parner w/ us, then I see "MK5.ORG Self Poclaim Mods" then I see "MK5.ORG Loners" and now this? O yeah lets not forget the "Clown Posses/MK5.ORG Jaggalos Elite".
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07/23/2003 11:25 AM (UTC)
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I like it! It's really cool although Kenshi's face looks a little weird, but then I'm no artist! Great job, dude!
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