Komic: Be careful of what you say.
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posted12/04/2006 05:23 AM (UTC)by
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Arctic
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06/07/2006 07:26 PM (UTC)
C l i c k !

Rate plz! grin
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Hikari715
12/03/2006 09:59 PM (UTC)
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Lol, that was good. 4/5
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Nemesis316
12/03/2006 10:02 PM (UTC)
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That was ok, but what was up with the Cage sprite?
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Arctic
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12/03/2006 10:03 PM (UTC)
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She ate some of his head and maybe a little bit of the brain. I'm relieved you guys liked this one better than "Reactions" grin
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Zentile
12/03/2006 10:30 PM (UTC)
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Pretty much all speech bubbles are placed wrong and it's not funny; the joke is waaay too easy.
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MyQueenSindel
12/04/2006 01:16 AM (UTC)
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Biting someone after they say "Bite me" is 90's humor, but it's kinda okay cuz she bit his face off. You could have had a funnier mileena sprite when he's doing the splits, something like... Standing w/ her arms at her sides, and a teeth showing grin, because the sprite you used didn't really show emotion. The speech bubbles are a little out of place. I like the way you did the blood, just use more shades of red other than pure red.

1.5/5
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12/04/2006 01:58 AM (UTC)
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I wonder if this kind of language gag is maybe funnier if English isn't your first language.

Yeah, I'm always going on about length.
Five panels is a really awkward format for something that really could've been a single panel gag.

You might have even milked an extra laugh or two if the execution in a single panel was right. Either playing to the aftermath of the matter, or the moment of 'impact.'

Not great, though. tongue
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prodigy004
12/04/2006 03:36 AM (UTC)
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2.5/5
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cyrax29
12/04/2006 05:23 AM (UTC)
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I'm not really into this. the humour is way old school and its just not funny. the sprite for johnny after his face was bitten off is kinda weird. as everyone else said the speech bubbles are wrongly placed. so its a 1.5/5 for me.
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