Komic: Keeping the marriage alive
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posted11/23/2006 12:20 AM (UTC)by
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Arctic
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06/07/2006 07:26 PM (UTC)
All marriages are not perfect, so they have problems. I would like to share with you Kahn and Sindel's problems or problem... whatever.

Just read the dang komic!
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Nemesis316
11/22/2006 09:32 PM (UTC)
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Nice comic, but I didn't find it funny.
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11/22/2006 09:35 PM (UTC)
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Well, you know it's not gonna be any fun when Earthrealm is taken over by Kahn. tongue
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Hikari715
11/22/2006 09:50 PM (UTC)
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Good, but not funny.
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11/22/2006 09:54 PM (UTC)
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Arctic Wrote:
Well, you know it's not gonna be any fun when Earthrealm is taken over by Kahn. tongue


Yeah, I don't think that's the problem... tongue

Again, nice effort, but length doesn't do it any favours, and it's still lacking in any kind of comedic structure. It's just sort of a silly scenario that isn't silly enough to pull a laugh.

Is that sitting Kahn an edit, though?
I don't think anyone's going to question your ability to use the sprites.
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Zentile
11/22/2006 11:10 PM (UTC)
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Ok, now you're starting to annoy me. Please start reading my reviews.

The comic is PERFECT. Great visuals, original stories, good dialogue, good grammar... but where is the funny? Can you tell me what the joke is? What's the punchline? What...I mean, what!? There's nothing.
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11/22/2006 11:52 PM (UTC)
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OK, OK, OK! I lack funny, sorry. I just thought it would be funny. I guess not. sad
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Zentile
11/23/2006 12:12 AM (UTC)
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Man, I hope that one Scorpion guy who sucks at making comics (and aparantly fake pics too) reads your response. See, now that was showing respect. Instead of mouthing off, you responded easily. Brother keep up the good work, just get a little bit better in the funny department. What you're lacking the most is an actual gag and punchline, you just throw funny concepts into the comic, but no funny GAG. Keep trying.
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11/23/2006 12:20 AM (UTC)
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Sure thing.
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