Komic: Watch
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Komic: Watch
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posted11/24/2006 04:22 AM (UTC)byJust trying to see if anything funny is coming to me. Hopefully, it is. What do you think though?
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Dude, I love the graphics, seriously.
But...
but...
It's not funny man. And it's too short.
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But...
but...
It's not funny man. And it's too short.
2/5
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Needs to be longer and funnier
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Arctic Wrote:
Ah fuck!
Ah fuck!
well that was pointless. Just make it longer, and funnier. The art in it is good, just lacking what comics are made for: humor. And to make it really funny you have to make it longer to get ready for the comic's punch-line.


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Ok, I will be honest with you. The graphics are great but where is the humor? Also, it could be longer.
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3/5 Just cuz the background looks so cool. Wasnt funny though.


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I think it has potential. The graphics are great, but the humour is lacking. It would work a lot better if it went on for longer, with Kung Lao thinking he's wearing a watch. I'm not sure what kind of jokes you could include, but it would be a lot funnier as a punchline.
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Eh... Usually a visual gag has a gag attached to it.
Maybe if you put some kind of importance on the time, like... They have until midnight until the realms merge. Then have Kung Lao non chalantly refer to having plenty of time, or something along those lines -- and then finish with a big, "Wait a second..."
It might not be hilarious, but it just needs some kind of structure to punctuate it. Nice to see a short strip, but yeah... While it's easy to go over, it's still possible to go under on the set-up.
Like the guys have already said, though. You're clearly competent with using and manipulating the sprites.
Maybe if you put some kind of importance on the time, like... They have until midnight until the realms merge. Then have Kung Lao non chalantly refer to having plenty of time, or something along those lines -- and then finish with a big, "Wait a second..."
It might not be hilarious, but it just needs some kind of structure to punctuate it. Nice to see a short strip, but yeah... While it's easy to go over, it's still possible to go under on the set-up.
Like the guys have already said, though. You're clearly competent with using and manipulating the sprites.
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