Komic: Watch
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posted11/24/2006 04:22 AM (UTC)by
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Arctic
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06/07/2006 07:26 PM (UTC)
Just trying to see if anything funny is coming to me. Hopefully, it is. What do you think though?

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Nemesis316
11/23/2006 07:49 PM (UTC)
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Dude, I love the graphics, seriously.

But...

but...

It's not funny man. And it's too short.

2/5
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Zentile
11/23/2006 08:50 PM (UTC)
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lol this is so bad it's funny, it's like you're making fun of yourself. I hope that's the case.
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SubMan799
11/23/2006 09:02 PM (UTC)
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Needs to be longer and funnier

2/5
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11/23/2006 09:02 PM (UTC)
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Ah fuck! furious
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SubMan799
11/23/2006 09:11 PM (UTC)
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Arctic Wrote:
Ah fuck! furious


well that was pointless. Just make it longer, and funnier. The art in it is good, just lacking what comics are made for: humor. And to make it really funny you have to make it longer to get ready for the comic's punch-line.
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Hikari715
11/23/2006 09:40 PM (UTC)
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Ok, I will be honest with you. The graphics are great but where is the humor? Also, it could be longer.
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decrazed
11/23/2006 09:50 PM (UTC)
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What was kung lao diong looking at lui kangs butt beacuse thats what i saw and if it is 4/5 took me a while to find it out but i got it.
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ScorpionMKSM
11/23/2006 10:34 PM (UTC)
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3/5 Just cuz the background looks so cool. Wasnt funny though.
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Ninja_Mime
11/24/2006 12:13 AM (UTC)
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I think it has potential. The graphics are great, but the humour is lacking. It would work a lot better if it went on for longer, with Kung Lao thinking he's wearing a watch. I'm not sure what kind of jokes you could include, but it would be a lot funnier as a punchline.
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11/24/2006 03:51 AM (UTC)
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Well, I thought the comic would be funny because I thought that's how a visual gag WORKS! Please, somebody correct me if I am wrong.
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11/24/2006 04:12 AM (UTC)
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Eh... Usually a visual gag has a gag attached to it. tongue

Maybe if you put some kind of importance on the time, like... They have until midnight until the realms merge. Then have Kung Lao non chalantly refer to having plenty of time, or something along those lines -- and then finish with a big, "Wait a second..."

It might not be hilarious, but it just needs some kind of structure to punctuate it. Nice to see a short strip, but yeah... While it's easy to go over, it's still possible to go under on the set-up.

Like the guys have already said, though. You're clearly competent with using and manipulating the sprites.
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11/24/2006 04:22 AM (UTC)
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That deserves a chuckle, but that's it.
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