Machete Massacre
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Machete Massacre
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Click for a clearer Picture --> Thanks to everyone's critiques in the other thread that was the start of this battle, hopefully I was able to incorporate all the good stuff from there and create a masterpiece. Enjoy!
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User Likes | User Ratings | 17 | Score | 4.5 |
prodigy004 •05/05/2007 05:29 AM (UTC) •
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lol yeah I already saw this. 10/10, very nice work.
MortalKombat2007 •05/05/2007 05:42 AM (UTC) •
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Mmm........I don't have much to say about this one....it's superior....but don't worry, I find something wrong with it.........thinking.............
...........I got it. You stated in your comment "Click for clearer picture." There doesn't seem to be a difference between the FS on here and the same one after the image is clicked. It's not clearer, it's the same.
Maybe you should add lightning and rain animation. Your choice.
5/5
...........I got it. You stated in your comment "Click for clearer picture." There doesn't seem to be a difference between the FS on here and the same one after the image is clicked. It's not clearer, it's the same.
Maybe you should add lightning and rain animation. Your choice.
5/5
nastynate •05/05/2007 05:43 AM (UTC) •
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very good picture. I like the 2D MK Trilogy style of it. 4/5
Arctic •05/05/2007 06:09 AM (UTC) •
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Hmm. This fake is really marvelous. I have a few issues with this however.
I'm really puzzled by how Kobra killed Rain. Did he go down then pull back or stab in the face then pull up? Kinda confusing, won't mark you up for that though.
Rain's chest seems to thin from front to back, it appears side to side but whatever. His chest needs more paralax, that's all.
Everything else is fantasic! Keep it up, you'll be remembered for your works.
Score: 4/5
I'm really puzzled by how Kobra killed Rain. Did he go down then pull back or stab in the face then pull up? Kinda confusing, won't mark you up for that though.
Rain's chest seems to thin from front to back, it appears side to side but whatever. His chest needs more paralax, that's all.
Everything else is fantasic! Keep it up, you'll be remembered for your works.
Score: 4/5
Noooo! he maimed my beloved Rain
Wonderful fake dude. You fixed up all your mistakes from your last attempt (making it darker, more blueish etc) but the sprites still look a little cartooney to me (even though they are incredible sprites in themselves. So you won't lose points for that).
5/5
Wonderful fake dude. You fixed up all your mistakes from your last attempt (making it darker, more blueish etc) but the sprites still look a little cartooney to me (even though they are incredible sprites in themselves. So you won't lose points for that).
5/5
StreetKing •05/05/2007 03:09 PM (UTC) •
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Hands down best Animator on MKO *followed closely by Arctic*. That's all I can say, and I voted on it so I've put in my input, 5/5
Ninja_Mime •05/05/2007 03:59 PM (UTC) •
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The only thing I really see wrong is that you didn't add shadows to the background barriers. And the blood looks sort of cartoony compared to the sprites, but other than that, its a flawless fake.
4/5.
*Waits for UR to give this 1/5*
4/5.
*Waits for UR to give this 1/5*
LucaTurilli •05/06/2007 03:17 AM (UTC) •
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The artwork is nice, however several of Rain's bodyparts are missing, and Kobra's forearm is waaaay to long.
K1LLKANO •05/06/2007 04:28 AM (UTC) •
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LucaTurilli Wrote:
The artwork is nice, however several of Rain's bodyparts are missing, and Kobra's forearm is waaaay to long.
The artwork is nice, however several of Rain's bodyparts are missing, and Kobra's forearm is waaaay to long.
First of all, thanks for both the kind comments and critiques. I appreciate that.
Second, I just wanted to clear up some obvious confusion a few people have about missing body parts or areas being off in width or length.
I do agree with the arm being too long, but the chest is thick enough, I think it just gets lost in the shadows.
Here's an outline showing both characters fully.
Also, Arctic, Kobra is chopping with the machete, first blow took off Rain's hand when he tried to block it, the second cleaved his nugget, spilling his left eye out of the socket (you can see it if you look close). The current action is the back swing from Rain's head to begin the third hack.
Thanks again all, especially the critiques so that I can improve.
p.s. Fedegita, I guess the cartoon look is my style. That and I just don't know how not to make them look like that lol.
KARATE •05/06/2007 06:14 AM (UTC) •
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This is definitely an awesome fake,Except the fact you said that his hand was cut off. I understand that,But where is his arm? Shouldnt it still be attached somewhere? I mean if it was cut off i would imagine it would be laying on the ground right?
Other than that.
I love the rain and lightning background. You get a 4/5 from me.
Other than that.
I love the rain and lightning background. You get a 4/5 from me.
UltimateRyu •05/06/2007 07:53 PM (UTC) •
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It's a good improvement but why does Kobra still look like he's lit up by an overhead lightning? 3/5
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