Machete Massacre
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Machete Massacre
05/03/2007 09:34 PM EST
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 12:29 AM EST
lol yeah I already saw this. 10/10, very nice work.
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 12:42 AM EST
Mmm........I don't have much to say about this one....it's superior....but don't worry, I find something wrong with it.........thinking.............


...........I got it. You stated in your comment "Click for clearer picture." There doesn't seem to be a difference between the FS on here and the same one after the image is clicked. It's not clearer, it's the same.

Maybe you should add lightning and rain animation. Your choice.

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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 12:43 AM EST
very good picture. I like the 2D MK Trilogy style of it. 4/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 01:09 AM EST
Hmm. This fake is really marvelous. I have a few issues with this however.
I'm really puzzled by how Kobra killed Rain. Did he go down then pull back or stab in the face then pull up? Kinda confusing, won't mark you up for that though. confused

Rain's chest seems to thin from front to back, it appears side to side but whatever. His chest needs more paralax, that's all.

Everything else is fantasic! Keep it up, you'll be remembered for your works. grin

Score: 4/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 03:38 AM EST
Noooo! he maimed my beloved Rain sad

Wonderful fake dude. You fixed up all your mistakes from your last attempt (making it darker, more blueish etc) but the sprites still look a little cartooney to me (even though they are incredible sprites in themselves. So you won't lose points for that).

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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 04:28 AM EST
el perfecto

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Made by MINION.
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 09:19 AM EST
10/10

Perfection
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 10:09 AM EST
Hands down best Animator on MKO *followed closely by Arctic*. That's all I can say, and I voted on it so I've put in my input, 5/5
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 10:59 AM EST
The only thing I really see wrong is that you didn't add shadows to the background barriers. And the blood looks sort of cartoony compared to the sprites, but other than that, its a flawless fake.

4/5.

*Waits for UR to give this 1/5*
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 02:40 PM EST
I give the a 4.9/5 cuz Rain's head is gone. But still, your awesome at makin fakes and this is the best fake i've seen in a while.

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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 10:17 PM EST
The artwork is nice, however several of Rain's bodyparts are missing, and Kobra's forearm is waaaay to long.
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/05/2007 11:28 PM EST
LucaTurilli Wrote:
The artwork is nice, however several of Rain's bodyparts are missing, and Kobra's forearm is waaaay to long.


First of all, thanks for both the kind comments and critiques. I appreciate that.

Second, I just wanted to clear up some obvious confusion a few people have about missing body parts or areas being off in width or length.

I do agree with the arm being too long, but the chest is thick enough, I think it just gets lost in the shadows.

Here's an outline showing both characters fully.



Also, Arctic, Kobra is chopping with the machete, first blow took off Rain's hand when he tried to block it, the second cleaved his nugget, spilling his left eye out of the socket (you can see it if you look close). The current action is the back swing from Rain's head to begin the third hack.

Thanks again all, especially the critiques so that I can improve.

p.s. Fedegita, I guess the cartoon look is my style. That and I just don't know how not to make them look like that lol.
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/06/2007 01:14 AM EST
This is definitely an awesome fake,Except the fact you said that his hand was cut off. I understand that,But where is his arm? Shouldnt it still be attached somewhere? I mean if it was cut off i would imagine it would be laying on the ground right?

Other than that.

I love the rain and lightning background. You get a 4/5 from me.wink
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/06/2007 02:26 AM EST
K1LLKANO Wrote:
p.s. Fedegita, I guess the cartoon look is my style. That and I just don't know how not to make them look like that lol.


It's a good style. I promise I won't bug you about it anymore smile
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RE: Fan Submission: Machete Massacre
05/06/2007 02:53 PM EST
It's a good improvement but why does Kobra still look like he's lit up by an overhead lightning? 3/5

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