Very beautiful dude. Great job, I really like how it's depicted as a classier picture, rather than the usual vicious violent kind of art we see around here. The ''classiness'' of it really reflects Rain's Edenian origins. Great job.
Not bad for a 13 yr old. He does look feminine though and the proportions are a little out of place. Is he painting a picture or somethin? 3/5 Edit- Nevermind. He's controlling the seas outuside, through the window. I think you could have depicted that a little better.
Unproportional, the arms are way too bulky and ... whatever happened to her butt? It is almost nonexistant. Also, no shades, the lines blend into each other and there is no toning on them either. If zou would had drawn the backened lines a bit more harder, the pic would have been better.