I think it's sorta okay.

The arm infront of her body looks totally deformed, and her fist doesn't match.
I don't even see why her top stays on her body, there isn't even a strap keepting it form falling down. Even if the strap were on the back, she would expose herself. Her hair "quality" looks wierd, but i love the idea. I like the new design on her outfit, you did a good job... a lot better than some of the other render edits I've seen in my day.

Here's a new challenge for ya: Make one without her mask.
Or not, and do as you please.

I really like it. I do think you should try to do what he said and [ut a strap and try to make without mask. If u dont want to its still really cool. I think u should make a sindel one cant wait to see ur next one

Great Job!

sorry, but I dont like it. She looks deformed, and it looks like she has no breasts.

Ah, pixel work can be a pain when starting out. Its a decent edit though.

I have to agree with balkcSaib00t on that left forearm- seems too shortened in comparison to the upper arm. It also seems to be turned outwards a bit much- maybe shade the elbow area more?
Also- the hand, though painted well, is just too small..

The hair is well drawn, but I think you should have placed it between the right arm and the shoulder- it seems odd how the tails overlap her fist like that :/

Heh, no real comment on the breast edit- could have the collar not look so flat on her neck- so it actually does look like it wraps around to keep the top up. Same applies to the head-band- it seems to flat on her forehead.

Despite all the negative quips- it is a valiant effort at pixel art. Keep practicing er, ActingArtist 8)

Man, Zentile. I can see why Marcel and many others don't like you anymore. You're losing your good senses. You don't know good, half descent, or bad art when you see it.

What are you compairing everybody's work here to? Gold? Maybe you should look at it in this scale: CAN I DO ANY BETTER? or HOW HARD WOULD IT BE TO DO THAT?

And that's not just for this picture alone...

Zentile Wrote: sorry, but I dont like it. She looks deformed, and it looks like she has no breasts.

boobies anyways it looks cartoonish cuz I know your an artist not, a sprite editer.

Heh - yeah. Well I took the original sprite and edited it. I had to crop the glove off of the front arm. And yes, I completely agree that I fucked up her hand. And the thing with the hair is that I had to cut out the shape from another image and then paste in on the sprite. And then the pixels were bigger, thus causing it to look wierd. However, I got the outfit idea from a concept drawing. I just made it more realistic and in color. Thanks for your comments - I'll work on it!

Heh - yeah. Well I took the original sprite and edited it. I had to crop the glove off of the front arm. And yes, I completely agree that I fucked up her hand. And the thing with the hair is that I had to cut out the shape from another image and then paste in on the sprite. And then the pixels were bigger, thus causing it to look wierd. However, I got the outfit idea from a concept drawing. I just made it more realistic and in color. Thanks for your comments - I'll work on it!

what a weird picture... she looks to weird you should've conected her body more... and the background black not white!!

I like it. The color of her outfit is very nice.