MK Mini Stories: Corruption
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MK Mini Stories: Corruption
09/14/2010 01:12 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Mini Stories: Corruption
09/16/2010 02:16 AM EDT
I don't know how wild I am about the Goro fight scene, I mean... this is Goro after all, and I'm also not sure if you plan to elaborate why these villains are all working together. I would assume this takes place after Deception, so even if alive the two sorcerers would probably not be good friends, and Goro would even be less of an ally for them. And if he was, why Shang Tsung would allow Frost to kill him. I suppose I should wait and read on a bit more before deciding all that, but to be hit by it suddenly is a bit much.
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Mini Stories: Corruption
09/16/2010 10:07 AM EDT
~Crow~ Wrote:
I don't know how wild I am about the Goro fight scene, I mean... this is Goro after all, and I'm also not sure if you plan to elaborate why these villains are all working together. I would assume this takes place after Deception, so even if alive the two sorcerers would probably not be good friends, and Goro would even be less of an ally for them. And if he was, why Shang Tsung would allow Frost to kill him. I suppose I should wait and read on a bit more before deciding all that, but to be hit by it suddenly is a bit much.


I had trouble thinking about that part, I know it makes no sense whatsoever, but I felt like it was this giant obstacle that she had to go through thinking that "ohmigosh there's the end of the sewers, I'm almost free!" And then right at the end she gets back into trouble.

There are certain parts of this story I struggled, you can so see it right there. Goro seemed like the perfect fit. What happened is that because of the lost he suffered from Liu Kang in the first tournament, he was devastated, so Shang Tsung kept him hidden in the sewers thought he could like re-train Goro back to his normal state, but he doesn't.

I still have plenty of other characters to create, Goro will be a main character in Shang Tsung's story. Remember, it's bit by bit, certain things will be like confusing but it's more down the line like "Okay, I gotta wait and see." Hope that explains a lot.
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