MK: Redemption, a mk story by kingjolly
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posted12/22/2004 06:21 AM (UTC)by
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07/12/2004 02:15 AM (UTC)
Here's a story I wrote for mk7:

Story:

Shujinko had used his gift to combine the powers of all the fighters he had encountered in order to kill the Dragon King. Shujinko was aware that this attack would be extremly fatal that it would even end his own life, but it was worth the sacrifice to undo the evil he had caused.
Shujinko harnessed all the powers his body contained in the palm of his right hand. This resulted in an eminent energy source that radiated from Shujinko’s hand. Before Shujinko released the power that would truly end the Dragon King, he said to him self "“finally I can rest"”. In a split second, the energy was released and the Dragon Lair was filled with the eminent energy source. The blast was extremely powerful that the world shook for a while. The Dragon King was no more, but sadly Shujinko was no more as well.
Though the Dragon King was now dead, the One Being still existed as an invisible force. The One Being became outraged because it’s plan at been plundered. The One Being roamed through many realms seeking a new being he could work through. It searched meticulously.
In Earthrealm, Raiden stood on Mount Fuji wrathfully. Raiden had become disgusted with the doings of Earthrealm’s mortals, because it was Shujinko's vanity and desire for glory that had led to the return of the Dragon King. Raiden was no longer a god of love, but a god of a hate and he sought for the destruction of Mankind.
During this time, the One Being was searching for a new host in Earth. It then stopped for a second and felt a great degree of hatred that was being emitted from the mountains of Japan. It then discovered it was the God of Thunder, Raiden. In a simple whisper the One Being hissed “perfect”.
In flashes of lightening and thunder, Raiden and the One Being became of one blood. Raiden then suddenly went through a metamorphic transformation similar to what the Dragon King at went through. Raiden'’s hair became viciously longer, his nails became like claws, his eyes became as red as blood, his veins could be perceived all over his face and his skin was as white as snow. Raiden'’s mass and powers had augmented tremendously, as well as his hatred.
The new Raiden, the Dark Raiden then took height to devise a plan that would bring an end to Mankind, and how he would create a new race that would be faithful to him. All would fear the God of Thunder.
Raiden decided he would enjoy seeing Mankind die slowly and painfully. He decided he would send 3 plagues that would put the world in sorrow and end it. The first plague he unleashed was “darkness”. The world would no longer see the light of day, but only darkness. The whole world fell in apprehension, and people cried rivers of tears. Raiden smiled at their suffering and he then unleashed his 2nd plague “"the death of the 1st born child"”. The sorrows of Earth only increased.
Before Raiden could unleash his final plague, Fugin, The God of Wind, the new protector of Earthrealm approached him. Fugin was horrified by the hideous appearance of Raiden and he asked “why do you this?” In respect for his fellow brother, Raiden explained why he decided to choose the dark side. After hisexplanation, Fugin exclaimed firmly “" The fate of the world can and only will be decided through Mortal Kombat!”". The god of thunder then responded with a sinister smile “So be it. Earthrealm will be given 2 months to prepare for it’s self for the tournament, and who ever wins decides the fate of Earthrealm”. Fujin then asked “" how do you attend to finish Mankind if you win?"”, Raiden responded yet again in an evil smile “ My 3rd plague will be a thunderstorm that will kill everything that moves. Prepare yourself my dear friend.”
In mere seconds Raiden teleported in to an unknown place. Fugin scared but yet optimistic immiediatly went for the search for Earth’s greatest warriors to participate in Mortal Kombat. The ultimate fight for redemption begins now.




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kingjolly
12/19/2004 04:11 AM (UTC)
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I'd like comments. I'll be posting Bios soon.
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12/19/2004 06:14 AM (UTC)
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This would make a great story for MK7 for two reasons.
1) It shows Raiden as he was originaly planned from the days of MK1, evil.
2) It also fallows Ermacs ending. For those who haven't beaten the game with him I'n spoiling his ending.
I think this has some serious potential. Hope Smoke's in it. Nice job wink
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kingjolly
12/19/2004 07:29 PM (UTC)
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thanks man
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kingjolly
12/20/2004 01:06 AM (UTC)
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Here's my first bio

Name: Kide Funderu
Age: 6 months
Height: 5’11
Weight: 192lbs
Hair: white
Eyes: blue
Origin: first created in Edenia
Occupation: 2nd plague of Raiden
Fighting styles: Nan Chuan, Jujutsu, double katanas
Bio:
Many years ago during the reign of Shoa Kahn, Raiden and the Earth Warriors fought intensely against Shoa Kahn in Outworld. After Lui Kang delivered his final blow that would defeat Shoa Kahn until his invasion against Earthrealm there was a parade in Edenia to celebrate the Fall of Shoa Kahn.
Raiden became joyous and with his powers he created a child named Kide Funderu in order to symbolize “"friendship"” and "“rebirth"”, because Edenia would have to rebuild due to the chaos Shoa Kahn had created, and the different races that were once enemies were now friends at least for a short while.
Kide Funderu was known by the Earthrealm warriors as “kid thunder” for he looked as if he was a child of Raiden. Kide Funderu eventually went back to Raiden’'s hand from which he was created from.
Many years have passed since then. Raiden is no longer a god of love, but a god of hate. In order for Raiden to express his anger towards humanity, he created plagues, plagues of darkness. Raiden re-established Kide Funderu and sent him to Earthrealm to kill the first-born child. Kide Funderu seems to have as much hatred as his master. He can't stand the way humans smell, look, and think. He truly hates humanity with all of his heart. He is also furious with the fact that he is only limited to killing the first-born child, but he most remain loyal to his master. Though Kide Funderu is cold hearted and frightening, he always appears innocent due to the angelic smile on his face. Kide Funderu is extremly deceptive and intelligent.
Kide Funderu appears to have abilities similar to Raiden. He can project bolts of lightening from his hands, teleport, and fly. In addition to these abilities he seems to have the mysterious ability to take over the minds of others. He has used this ability to cause thousands of people to commit suicide.
Kide Funderu, the 2nd plague of Raiden, will continue his mission and his hatred towards mankind. He must be stopped.

Appearance: Kide Funderu appears to look like a teenager. He cloths as a human in order to avoid suspicion. He is usually seen with a long, black, leather raincoat that covers his whole body except his head and he also wears black gloves. He does however appears to have a distinguishing feature on his face. He has a scar from the top middle of his forehead running down to his chin. The scar seems to have a resemblance of a lightening bolt.

Special moves:

Electric conductor- Kide slams both of his hands in anger towards the ground and charges the whole ground with electricity and if his opponent is on the ground he/she gets shocked.

Teleport-This move is identical to Raiden’s move. Kide teleports from one side of the arena to the other.

Electrolysis-Kide slams one hand through the ground and sends a lighting bolt which then appears at the other side of the arena from the ground and shocks his opponent.

Mind control - Kide’s most deadly attack. Kide sends a mystic force from his head. If it comes in contact with his opponent he is able to control the person’s mind. This can cause his opponent to commit suicide by throwing his or her self to a death trap.

Fatalities:

Pulling the plug- Kide psychically controls his opponent to get closer and to bow down to Kide in honor. Kide then shoves his hand to his opponent’s hair and starts to shock him/her until he fries. Kide then pulls the head of the body off.

Call for Raiden- – Kide calls for his master to finish of his opponent. Raiden sends many, powerful, lightening bolts from the sky that causes a gruesome mess on Kide'’s opponent.

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kingjolly
12/20/2004 01:40 AM (UTC)
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what do you guys think?
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Raiden01
12/20/2004 03:41 AM (UTC)
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Coo.
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kingjolly
12/20/2004 03:51 AM (UTC)
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For those who dont know, Raiden's friendship in mk2 was "kid thunder".
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Poasty-Guy
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We've got chicken tonight. Strangest damn things. They're man made.
12/20/2004 04:24 AM (UTC)
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Wtf? Yeah by KingJolly, you stole this from me!


I thought I could fucking trust you. Thanks.
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kingjolly
12/20/2004 04:26 AM (UTC)
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Huh, did I really? Please prove it. If i did, I'm sorry it's coincidence.
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kingjolly
12/22/2004 02:24 AM (UTC)
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Name: Savage, real name: Ho-Han
Age: 196
Height: 6'2
Weight: 230lbs
Hair: no hair
Eyes: green
Place of Origin: Edenia
Occupation: Bounty Hunter, previously a trader
Fighting styles: wrestling, dancing beast (own style), pirate blade
Bio:
Decades ago in Edenia, Ho-Han worked as a trader who passed goods to other realms under King Jerrod. With his bare hands, Ho- Han built his mighty ship which he named the "Beast". It had the ability to create portals that could go from realm to realm. The "Beast" became Ho-Han's home which he and his family lived in.
Ho-Han was an elated man for he had everything a man could ask for. He had money, a beautiful family, and he had the greatest ship in Edenia, but that would all change one day.
One night while Ho-Han was sailing through the Isles of the Netherealm, Ho-Han was ambushed by a group of relentless, demonic pirates. During that night Ho-Han lost everything he had worked hard for, including his most treasured item, his family. Ho-Han watched his crew and his family get slaughtered one by one. The pirates had destroyed the ship, and the treasures of the ship were stolen. Ho-Han, the captain of the ship was then thrown into the sea to be eaten by the vicious, sea creatures. Ho-Han became dramatized from the experience and he accepted death to overpower him. But destiny had a change of plans for him.
The next morning, Ho-Han was found lying on the shores of the Island of Netherealm. Ho-Han was shocked that he had survived but he also discovered that he had lost his left arm. Ever since the incident of the death of his family, Ho-Han's life was never the same again. Ho-Han was now a depressed, angry man who sought for revenge.
During his stay on the island, Ho-Han slaughtered many creatures that tried to kill him. He once saw a Netherealm hound puppy which he took as his own. Ho-Han trained the dog to be a ruthless fighter who would be loyal to him, and who would defend him at all cost. Ho-Han named the dog "Kroza" meaning in Edenain language "Son of the Beast"..
Around the island, the ruins of other defeated ships could be perceived in the sea and on the shores. With the ruins Ho-Han made a mechanical arm as his left arm, armor and a new magnificent ship that he named "The 2nd Beast". With the ship, Ho-Han along with Kroza escaped the hellish Island. Every night, Ho-Han had nightmares that depicted the night where he lost everything. Ho-Han still wanted his vengeance.
In order for Ho-Han to obtain the revenge he sought for, he became a bounty hunter so he could kill those who killed the good. Under his name Ho-Han killed many that had bounties on them and he made precious money for it. He was named "Savage" by others because of his cruel nature.
In recent times, Ho-Han has heard of a being named Kide Funderu who has killed thousands of humans. He has also heard that the bounty on him is beyond imagination. Savage sails to Earthrealm with Kroza to obtain his bounty and vengeance.

Appearance: Savage is a large, gruff man, filled with anger who frowns most of the time. He is bold, and has an untidy, black beard. Savage wears a heavy, bronze, chest plate which states in crimson in an ancient Edenian language "Beast" in the center. He wears bear fur which cover his shoulders and back. He has ropes wrapped around his waist where he places his pirate sword. He has a mechanical arm which as been disguised to look like his other good arm.
Kroza, Savage's pet is a vicious Netherealm hound who is very large, vicious and has spikes running down its spine.

Special moves:

Rope swing- Savage unties the ropes around his waist, and swings it across his opponent which then gets tied to the person's leg. Savage then pulls the rope which causes the person to trip, and he then swings the opponent to the other side of the arena for additional damage.

Hound attack- During the match Kroza fights along with Savage. Savage can summon his hound to attack his opponent.

Cannon blast- Savage's mechanical arm is detachable. When Savage detaches his arm, a hidden mini - canon is revealed. With the canon, Savage can send powerful blasts of gun powder. He can send 2 or 3 at the same time.

Fatalities:

Fetch- Savage pulls his opponent's head off, and throws it far in the sky. He then commands Kroza to fetch. Kroza leaps in the air and eats the head, a nice gruesome mess.

Rope trick- Savage throws his rope to his opponent's leg which then gets tied to it. Savage then swings the rope in circles extremely fast which causes the opponent to go around as well rapidly. You can then see the skin pilling off, eyes going everywhere, organs flying off. When Savage stops swinging, all that his left of the opponent is the skeleton.
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We've got chicken tonight. Strangest damn things. They're man made.
12/22/2004 02:43 AM (UTC)
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I was joking. Good times, good concepts.
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kingjolly
12/22/2004 05:43 AM (UTC)
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Oh, my bad. I guess i have no sense of humor sad
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We've got chicken tonight. Strangest damn things. They're man made.
12/22/2004 06:21 AM (UTC)
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I'm just not funny.

/quits clown collede
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