it looks better, a lot better, it's clean easy to read I give you props for that but the humor is weak.

thank you.
if i email it to someone does it have to be as a bmp?

Congratulations, man! Finally, a comic where the speech bubbles are in order, the sprites aren't stupidly resized, and the size of the white frames is not gargantuan.
HOWEVER
For some reason, it took forever to load... and that would've been fine, if it had been worth it, but it wasn't. It just wasn't funny at all.
AGAIN, I recommend that you stop this little joke and dedicate yourself to something you're good at. I'll only say this again two more times, and then I'll just stop reviewing your comics.
You're not funny with this. Write fanfics. Make movies. Go out at night. Become a computer geek. Beat video games. Just... just don't make sprite comics.

Hmmm, Zentile zentile zentile... Let's see you make a Sprite Comic, or come out of retirement from fakes.

*laughs at MaxDam's sig*

MaxDam Wrote: it looks better, a lot better, it's clean easy to read I give you props for that but the humor is weak.

Yeah you gotta work on your humor. Too simple and bland!


GD

SuperMarioBro Wrote: Hmmm, Zentile zentile zentile... Let's see you make a Sprite Comic, or come out of retirement from fakes.

Uh oh... SuperMario, you do not want to get started with me. Especially like that.
Oh don't worry, I have a sprite comic I've been wanting to submit for some time now. I submitted it to ]ombat's pavillion, but I guess it was too offensive for some of those stupid web comic artists out there.

Say, do you critisize videogames, SuperMario? Or movies? Do you critisize things that you can't do yourself? I have a feeling you do.

MKM, you're getting better, keep at it. I'm happy that the comic did not take 45 minutes to load. The humor is better, but, try not to use vulgar humor. It will turn a lot of people off.

This comic is your best one, yet. Don't listen to all the negative remarks that you will accumulate. However, better yourself with constructive criticism.

Zentile, how come I haven't seen you in the IRC channel lately?