MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 1: Warning
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MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 1: Warning
12/28/2004 05:33 PM EST
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12/29/2004 08:00 AM EST
This keeps getting better and better. Very good, indeed, very good.
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12/29/2004 03:08 PM EST
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how do you do it!!?? you must have Steven freakin King locked up in your basement with a type writer! 5 dps
what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?
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12/29/2004 11:51 PM EST
I liked it, but the part where Sonya was, in Illinois.. I thought she would be at Jax's side. Because I thought that when Kano was freed from Shao Kahn's grasp by Jax, Kano managed to evade Jax and not travel through the portal that led back to Earthrealm. I thought he wandered the wastelands of Outworld but was captured by the mutants of Outworld and was brought back to Shao Kahn. But instead of being thrown back in prison, Shao Kahn used Kano as a tool for teaching his forces on how to use Earthrealm weapons and provide him with information on Earthrealm so that he could know what was where in Earthrealm before he conquered it.

The meeting scene was good, I liked how vividly you described all of the men that were at the meeting with Jax. And I liked how you explained Jax's anxiety over the matter of Shao Kahn invading Earthrealm and the fact that he was looked upon as a deranged veteran by his ranking officers who believed that Jax had seen too much action and it affected his mind in a very negative way.

I like the direction you are moving in, you moved forth from the battle with Shao Kahn, and now you moved on too the next important characters in Mortal Kombat 3, Jax and Sonya. I wonder which character you will be writing about next.

Keep this story going, it is moving along great. I can't wait to read more.
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12/30/2004 12:59 AM EST
I'm guessing the next character is Sub-Zero. Anyway, this is awesome. I hope we can work together on a fanfic later on. I found the whole anxietey thing funny as hell. Escpecially giant lobster. This is really cool. The dexcription of each character, their reaction and their comments is all well put together. The transition works well also, it somehow moves seamlessly through Kang's fight with Kahn to the meetin with Jax and the heads of the armed forces. The throwbacks to the prolog is also well done. Nice job to say the least.
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12/30/2004 02:04 AM EST
I'm very, very glad you all like it. And no worries, Grizzle - I have a very good reason for Kano's returning to earth - you'll see why later on. He's got to see a fellow BD member...someone with hookswords...

Anyway, next chapter involves Sonya. Be up in a sec...
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12/30/2004 02:37 AM EST
Is it Sindel?


HAR!


Sick.
We've got chicken tonight. Strangest damn things. They're man made.
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RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 1: Warning
12/30/2004 04:42 AM EST
Actually Poasty, I hate to break it to you, but it's actually the mythical brown ninja known as Poo. :P

Anyway, on closer inspection, these are loafers. Also, I'm going to wait until tomorrow evening to post Sonya's chapter - I've already got a character and his pic, and 2 fanfic chapters flooding the first page. I'll let it die down a bit.
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