MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
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01/08/2005 03:25 AM (UTC)by
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Siduu101
01/02/2005 08:10 PM (UTC)
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great job man, it ain't easy so you deserve the four dragonpoints.
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01/02/2005 09:17 PM (UTC)
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That was perfect. I wonder what would happen when you get really into the story?

Dragon Points for this one, please!
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01/03/2005 12:34 AM (UTC)
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Very cool. You've perfectlry illustrated the bond Sub-Zero and Smoke have. I wonder how it will play out when Smoke is automated. Great job.
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Grizzle
01/03/2005 04:48 AM (UTC)
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That was a remarkable story. I love the way Sub-Zero thinks about Scorpion. Sub-Zero's relationship with Smoke is very notable aswell. My favorite part on that piece was when Smoke was giving the advice to Sub-Zero about death. When I was reading those lines I visualized Smoke becoming automated and tracking Sub-Zero down. I see those words as something that makes Smoke most human. That is the perfect way to have Sub-Zero spark Smoke's human emotions when he is a cyborg. The dialouge was great, the characterization was great, and overall I am looking forward on you to continue this part of the story. I can't wait to see Smoke and Sub-Zero deal with the fact that they will be become automated.

Keep writing...
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01/03/2005 04:56 AM (UTC)
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That last part with Smoke just eats at you. Where he states that head never kill Sub-Zero, especially since we know he gets automated.
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what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?

01/08/2005 03:25 AM (UTC)
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do I need to say anything after my last posts to your submission?smile
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