MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
  • Page:
  • 1
MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 01:31 PM EST
Dragon PointDragon PointDragon PointDragon PointDragon PointHalf a Dragon Point2.0
User Icon
  • United States of AmericaUnited States of America
Rank
Posts4968
Likes0 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 03:10 PM EST
great job man, it ain't easy so you deserve the four dragonpoints.
User Icon
  • HungaryHungary
Rank
Posts13894
Likes1 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 04:17 PM EST
That was perfect. I wonder what would happen when you get really into the story?

Dragon Points for this one, please!
User Icon
  • United States of AmericaUnited States of America
Rank
Posts5387
Likes0 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 07:34 PM EST
Very cool. You've perfectlry illustrated the bond Sub-Zero and Smoke have. I wonder how it will play out when Smoke is automated. Great job.
art by fear-sAs
User Icon
  • United States of AmericaUnited States of America
Rank
Posts3691
Likes0 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 11:48 PM EST
That was a remarkable story. I love the way Sub-Zero thinks about Scorpion. Sub-Zero's relationship with Smoke is very notable aswell. My favorite part on that piece was when Smoke was giving the advice to Sub-Zero about death. When I was reading those lines I visualized Smoke becoming automated and tracking Sub-Zero down. I see those words as something that makes Smoke most human. That is the perfect way to have Sub-Zero spark Smoke's human emotions when he is a cyborg. The dialouge was great, the characterization was great, and overall I am looking forward on you to continue this part of the story. I can't wait to see Smoke and Sub-Zero deal with the fact that they will be become automated.

Keep writing...
User Icon
  • United States of AmericaUnited States of America
Rank
Posts5387
Likes0 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/02/2005 11:56 PM EST
That last part with Smoke just eats at you. Where he states that head never kill Sub-Zero, especially since we know he gets automated.
art by fear-sAs
User Icon
  • JamaicaJamaica
Rank
Posts675
Likes0 received
0 given
RE: Fan Submission: MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 3: Trek
01/07/2005 10:25 PM EST
do I need to say anything after my last posts to your submission?smile
what ever happened to... um.. ChiefThunder?
  • Page:
  • 1
Sunday School
01/17/2021 08:00 PM EST
Fatal Friday
01/22/2021 08:00 PM EST
Survival Saturday
01/23/2021 08:00 PM EST
User Poll
Mortal Kombat Movie First Impressions?
100.0%
Show me more...
0.0%
FINISH HIM!
0.0%
Outstanding!