MK3 Stryker; My First Render Edit.
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posted10/06/2006 10:40 PM (UTC)by
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Ninja_Mime
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10/04/2006 06:42 AM (UTC)
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I like it, for a first time thing it's pretty good. Although you should fix the edges, they look a bit uneven and choppy (kinda like you rushed the erase feature around the edges)

Also, patrial body parts start to get blurry such as his right leg and left arm (from our point of view)

Also, the skin color seems totally different on the right arm. I dunno if it has anything to do with the shading.

One last thing, call me crazy, but it seems the upper half of his body is a bit smaller than the bottom half. I could be crazy though...

I give you credit for the effort, it looks decent (especially since it's your first)

3/5
For some reason this reminds me of Final Fantsy VII.

I like it.



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Ninja_Mime
10/04/2006 01:09 PM (UTC)
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Vomit Wrote:
I like it, for a first time thing it's pretty good. Although you should fix the edges, they look a bit uneven and choppy (kinda like you rushed the erase feature around the edges)

Also, patrial body parts start to get blurry such as his right leg and left arm (from our point of view)

Also, the skin color seems totally different on the right arm. I dunno if it has anything to do with the shading.

One last thing, call me crazy, but it seems the upper half of his body is a bit smaller than the bottom half. I could be crazy though...

I give you credit for the effort, it looks decent (especially since it's your first)

3/5


Yeah, the edges are a bit too soft. I think I was scared that it would turn out too square. I was wrong. Way too blurry.

I just couldn't get his left arm the right color, and I don't know why. I'm just blind with those types of things. Maybe I shouldn't be doing these. tongue

His upper body is smaller. I wanted to make his pants baggy, and have them up a bit higher, but it just made him look small in the end.

Thanks for you're comments, guys. grin
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Hikari715
10/04/2006 09:12 PM (UTC)
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Vomit Wrote:
I like it, for a first time thing it's pretty good. Although you should fix the edges, they look a bit uneven and choppy (kinda like you rushed the erase feature around the edges)

Also, patrial body parts start to get blurry such as his right leg and left arm (from our point of view)

Also, the skin color seems totally different on the right arm. I dunno if it has anything to do with the shading.

One last thing, call me crazy, but it seems the upper half of his body is a bit smaller than the bottom half. I could be crazy though...

I give you credit for the effort, it looks decent (especially since it's your first)

3/5

I agree. 3/5
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10/04/2006 10:16 PM (UTC)
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Blurry on the top half, and it seems just a bit smaller than the bottom. His hair has great detail, but the face doesn't match Stryker. Also, his boots were from the render but it'll do. Hmm... 2.5/5
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Ninja_Mime
10/04/2006 10:40 PM (UTC)
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Arctic Wrote:
His hair has great detail, but the face doesn't match Stryker.


The hair is just from Johnny Cage. but that wasn't really what I wanted to show off. And the face does match Stryker, as it's just his old face, but skinnier, younger looking, and with new lips and eyebrows. grin

I edited the first post to include an edited version. I cleaned up the blurryness a bit, and fixed his arm.
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khanswarrior15
10/04/2006 10:42 PM (UTC)
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It looks too much like rolento from the street fighter alpha series.so 3/5wink
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6volt
10/05/2006 04:47 AM (UTC)
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You know who that looks like?

That looks like Final Fantasy VIIs Cid.

Maybe if you made him look more like Stryker?

It's still good though. 7/10.
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Ninja_Mime
10/05/2006 01:13 PM (UTC)
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6volt Wrote:
Maybe if you made him look more like Stryker?


I don't get it... Why are people saying that?
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durandal
10/05/2006 04:47 PM (UTC)
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Sorry cant say I like this much at all. The quality is low, and overall it just looks really bad.
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JimboLimbo
10/05/2006 05:17 PM (UTC)
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It's OK, but the body is so blurry compared to the boots and head that it looks kind of odd really, good effort though.

The pose is a bit odd too, looks like he's about to rub his crotch or something tongue
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10/05/2006 07:07 PM (UTC)
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Very good, 10/10 for effort(better then i can dogrin) and */10 overall. i like it.
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Ninja_Mime
10/05/2006 10:05 PM (UTC)
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JimboLimbo Wrote:
The pose is a bit odd too, looks like he's about to rub his crotch or something tongue


He is. wink
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JimboLimbo
10/06/2006 10:08 AM (UTC)
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Ninja_Mime Wrote:
JimboLimbo Wrote:
The pose is a bit odd too, looks like he's about to rub his crotch or something tongue


He is. wink


Eeeh nooees!
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kidkombatant
10/06/2006 01:32 PM (UTC)
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That is Strykers face from the group pic isn't it

Spaeking of Stryker you should work on his comic
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Ninja_Mime
10/06/2006 10:40 PM (UTC)
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kidkombatant Wrote:
That is Strykers face from the group pic isn't it


Yes, but edited. The one on the group render is hella ugly.

Way too pasty looking, fat, and wrinkly.
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