Removing all posts for editing, will put them back in a sec.

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Kurtis Stryker
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Knowing for certain that he wasn't as skilled as some of Raiden's other Chosen warriors, he volunteered to stay behind, using his weapons expertese to combat troops Kano had trained during Shao Kahn's invasion of Earth. Stryker's military and police background gave him proficieny in enough weaponry and explosives to hold back the tide of the still-inexperienced warriors of Shao Kahn just long enough for Raiden and the others to inflitrate Kahn's fortress. But Kahn's warriors had apparently adapted to Kano's training quickly. Stryker's traps killed many of their number, but because they knew what to look for, the rest of Stryker's bombs were found and disarmed. Forced to flee due to sheer numbers, Stryker barely survived, but was saved at the last moment by Rain, who had realized his mistakes and switched sides at the last moment.

Stryker returned to working for his police department after Kahn's invasion was halted, and has heard from the others only through letter correspondance. He became concerned when he didn't hear from his friends after a few months, but he couldn't get away from his duties to investigate. But then Fujin appeared to him in the midst of his station, wanting his help to stop Raiden, who had gone mad with hatred and was threatening to destroy all the realms save his own. Stryker, knowing that if Fujin had come to recruit him, he was truly desperate, accepted.

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Styles
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Kickboxing
Dux Ryu
Tonfa

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Movelist
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Grenade: qcb + P (LP near, HP far)
Stryker throws a grenade, one that detonates either on contact or after a few seconds.

Gunshot: b, b, f + LK
Stryker whips out his infamous gun and fires off a round.

Tonfa Trip: f, b + LP
Stryker whips out his tonfa and swings low with it. If he catches his opponent with it, he hooks their leg and knocks them down.

Tonfa Clock: f, f + HP
Stryker whips out his tonfa and strikes down with it in a half-circle. Can his already knocked-down opponents and acts as an overhead.

Tonfa Throw: f, f + HK
Stryker reaches out. If he manages to grab the opponent, he holds them by the neck, hooks his tonfa's handle under his/her/its chin, and throws them over his shoulder.

Tazer Slam: f, f + LK
Stryker pulls out his fully charged tazer and slams it into the opponent's crotch.

Fatality One: (sweep) Hold HP, f, f, f, release HP and press Block twice
Stryker pulls out a grenade, and slams it into his opponent's mouth roughly, audibly breaking several teeth. He pulls the pin and runs away, laying facedown a few feet away from the opponent with his ears covered, as the opponent staggers, clutching his/her mouth in pain. A few seconds later the opponent's head, arms, and chest explode. The camera pans over to Stryker, who is now sitting casually on the ground, and gives a thumbs up.

Fatality Two: (close) f, b, u, d, u, b, f
Stryker pulls out his tonfa (if not already out), twirls it, and strikes his opponent three times, twice across the face and once with the tonfa's handle to the opponent's temple. He then shoves his tonfa into the opponent's eye, smirking as the opponent screams in agony, staggering back. He then chuckles, pulling out his tazer, and tauntingly charges it in the opponent's face. He then shoves the tazer into the opponent's other eye, holding it there as smoke erupts from the opponent's face and he/she screams even louder. After a few seconds of that, he holsters his tazer again and pulls out his gun. He empties an entire clip into the opponent, his/her chest becoming covered in blood as he/she falls over, very much dead. Stryker then blows smoke from it, twirls his gun and does a sentai-esque pose, pleased with himself.

(Sidenote: THIS is what I thought Brutalities should have been like in MKT.)

Harakiri: HP, HP, LK, Block, Block
Stryker takes out his gun, salutes the winning player, puts the gun's barrel in his mouth, and fires. A bunch of blood and brain bits go out the back of his head, and he collapses.

Friendship: (anywhere) d, d, d, d + HP
Stryker pulls out several grenades and starts juggling them. A little bit into his routine, the pins fall out, and Stryker gets a panicked expression on his face. He throws them aside and jumps into the opponent's arms just as the grenades explode, shaking the screen. Stryker sighs in relief and grins weakly at the opponent, who just drops him in digust and walks away, saying 'Oh brother.' Stryker, laying on the floor, just laughs and shrugs.

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Stryker's Ending: (FMV script)
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(Raiden and Stryker are seen fighting in Raiden's temple stage. Stryker manages to get in a few hits and grenade strikes, but the fight is obviously one sided. Finally, Raiden hits Stryker with his torpedo move, sending him crashing into the wall. Stryker staggers, and slides down the wall, staring dazedly up at Raiden, who sneers down at him.)

Raiden: *his eyes glowing, scowling* Fool. You were barely useful in Kahn's invasion. What could have possibly possessed you to think that you could defeat me?

Stryker: *his face is bloodied and bruised. He coughs wearily, spitting up blood... and smiles, shaking his head* No, Raiden. I never thought I could beat you. Never.

Raiden: *blinking, confused* Then why did you even COME?!

Stryker: *chuckles, but the chuckle breaks up into a coughing fit. When he gets control, he smirks wider* I came to act as I did before, thunder god. As a DISTRACTION!

Raiden: A dis...

(Suddenly, a strong wind rips the doors off of Raiden's temple. Raiden turns, his eyes flashing, as Fujin flies into the room, with Liu Kang, Cage, Sonya, Jax, Kung Lao, Kitana, Nightwolf, Frost, Shujinko, Jade, Sindel, Sareena, Blaze, Ashrah, Dairou, Scorpion, Smoke, Rain, Khameleon, Reptile, and the ressurected Sub-Zero right behind him. Raiden's eyes widen in shock as he realizes that he's been tricked, and he turns to Stryker again, his eyes blazing with anger.)

Raiden: YOU...

Stryker: Me. If you die, Raiden, then go to Hell knowing that you got outwitted by the merest of mortals.

Raiden: *roaring, he grabs Stryker by the throat, lifting him up by the neck* INSOLENT MORTAL!! I'LL KILL YOU FOR THIS!!!

Liu Kang: Lord Raiden, please NO!!!

Stryker: *chuckles, gagging slightly* Then I'll die. I've lived my life, and have no regrets. Just remember that nobody's perfect, thunder-brain, and things don't always go the way you want them to. To expect otherwise of anyone, mortal or god, is foolish.

Raiden: *too furious to recognize that Stryker is right, he screams in rage and incinerates Stryker, his body turning to ash in a flash of lightning. He whirls, and turns to face the heroes, all of whom have grim, sad looks on their faces as they charge Raiden...

(fadeout)

Fujin: (voiceover) Because of Stryker's sacrifice, I was able to gather a strong enough force to confront the maddened thunder god. With our combined might, we defeated Raiden and restored his sanity. Consumed with grief over what he had done, all the foolish things he did that nearly led to the destruction of the realms, he exiled himself to seek penance for his foolishness, giving up his godhood entirely. A memorial was held for Kurtis Stryker in his home city, celebrating his sacrifice. And I paid tribute to him by placing a new memorial in my statuary garden, honoring him as one of the greatest, most humble heroes of Mortal Kombat.

((Side note: Not all of the above mentioned characters will be in MK7, I realize that. I'm including them to show the strength of the force of good Fujin is using. I will be posting more later.))

Gah, forgot Stryker's costumes.

Costume 1: Basically the same as his MK3/UMK3/MKT outfit, only without the baseball cap. His hair is also longer, mounted in a ponytail and greyer, and he looks like he's in better shape.

Costume 2: A S.W.A.T. uniform. Kevlar armored clothes, boots, and gloves, but no helmet.

Frost: Sounds quite workable, though I'd ditch the happy smile from Sub Zero when he reawakens, as well as the teared up and hugging Frost. Such mushy sentiments spoil the rest of the atmosphere you generated with her new story.

Mokap: Eh. Don't like any of that. I understand it's a joke and all, but any character can be made to be great if given some work and care. I'd rather see something good made out of Mokap to warrant his existence in the first place. Personally, I don't think joke characters should exist as playables, secret or not. As sketches/mini-comics and other 'extras' type content sure, but not as playables.

Stryker: This seems feasible as well. I was hoping he'd be back for MKD, but I guess there'll always be a chance next time.

You said: -
Frost: Sounds quite workable, though I'd ditch the happy smile from Sub Zero when he reawakens, as well as the teared up and hugging Frost. Such mushy sentiments spoil the rest of the atmosphere you generated with her new story.

I reply: - You're right, I know, but hey, I'm the sentimental type and a Subby/Frost fanboy. I couldn't help myself.

You said: -
Mokap: Eh. Don't like any of that. I understand it's a joke and all, but any character can be made to be great if given some work and care. I'd rather see something good made out of Mokap to warrant his existence in the first place. Personally, I don't think joke characters should exist as playables, secret or not. As sketches/mini-comics and other 'extras' type content sure, but not as playables.

I reply: - *shrug* The entire thing was a light teasing at people getting mad at Ed Boon for MKD's gameplay. I could do better, I know, but I never saw any reason for Mokap Man to exist in the first place. He has a bad look, and his moves are just slapped together from random characters and generic styles. I don't like him at all.

Anywho, next up from me is Khameleon, Rain, Shao Kahn, and Fujin.

Okay, so I'm not removing them all, just the ones I feel need slight correcting.

I like frost's a LOT!!!! Especially all her moves

editing this one as well

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Shao Kahn
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The last thing Kahn remembered before his death was Shang Tsung betraying him, teaming up with Quan Chi. Then, void, and lots of pain as he was sent to the netherrealm to be tortured. He vaguely remembers a brief moment of satisfaction involving Shinnok, lava, a warhammer, and an Earthrealm device called a chainsaw, but soon found himself ressurected. He stared down at Havik, recognizing him instantly for what he was, and asked what the Chaos Cleric wanted. Havik simply stated the truth.

"I want Chaos."

He then handed Shao Kahn a crystal forged from the energies of Onaga's heart, which Havik himself had devoured, and left. Shao Kahn chuckled, believing that he could certainly provide chaos in abundance. Especially if the Earthrealmers didn't know that he was alive again. But what to do? Ressurect any lost warriors of his? Perhaps even Onaga? The old fool had a sense of honor, and would swear himself to Shao Kahn.

Oh, such delicious possibilities...

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Styles
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Self-Taught
Demon
Warhammer

Costume 1: His old outfit from MK2 & the MK3 series. A big, buff, muscular demon in a horned skull helmet, with bladed shoulder, elbow, and knee pads. Red boots, spiked red wristbands, an armored loincloth over the wrap that coveres his crotch, and leather bands attached to his shoulder pads and belt holding an armored, skull-faced plating to his chest.

Costume 2: Still has his trademark wristbands, but the helmet is a different design now, and covers his whole head. His armor now covers him more fully, a red, black and silver ensemble that makes him look even more demonic. His gloves also have bladed fingers.

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Movelist
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Devil Breath: b, b, f + LP
Shao Kahn leans forward, breathing a huge ball of green fire at the opponent.

Stun Strike: (in Warhammer style only) b, f + HP
Shao Kahn strikes downward with his hammer. If it makes contact with the opponent's head, it dizzies them briefly. The hammer can hit already downed opponent's, but it doesn't stun then.

Devil Shoulder: qcf + LP
Shao Kahn slides forward, blood-red afterimages trailing behind him as he lowers his bladed shoulder to strike the opponent.

Devil Knee: qcf + HP
Shao Kahn rises into the air at a wide angle, knee extended and blood-red afterimages.

Devil Grab: f, f + HP
Shao Kahn reaches out to grab his opponent. If he connects with this unblockable grab, he punches the opponent in the face twice before tossing them to one side.

Taunt: d, d + LK
Shao Kahn points at his opponent and says something mocking, along the lines of "You weak, pathetic fool," or "You have no chance against me." There are ten possible phrases.

Laugh: d, d + HK
Shao Kahn leans back and laughs mockingly.

Fatality One: b, b, f + HP
Shao Kahn brandishes his hammer, twirling it and taking it up in both hands. He then smashes the opponent across the face with it, turning them completely around. He then swings the hammer again, smashing it into the opponent's back. There is a loud snapping sound, and the opponent falls like a puppet with its strings cut, laying limply on the ground, facedown. Kahn grunts and brings the hammer down once more on the twitching opponent, a thick pool of blood forming underneath the opponent, a visible dent in the opponent's back. He chuckles, hefting his hammer up and hoisting it over his shoulder.

Fatality Two: f, f, b + LP
Shao Kahn clasps his hands and kneels, as if in prayer. A huge portal opens up underneath the startled opponent, the arms of thousands of tortured souls dragging the opponent down to the netherrealm. The opponent is then dropped into a large, lava-filled chasm, screaming in terror all the way, scenes of people being tortured all around him/her. The opponent continues their long fall towards the ground, but doesn't make it, as a winged demon grabs the opponent in its mouth and drags him/her away, eating the opponent alive.

Harakiri: b, f, b +LK
Shao Kahn removes his wristbands and helmet, revealing his demonic face. He then drops one wristband and his helmet, using the spikes of the other wristband to slash his wrists and his throat. He falls to the ground, gurgling.

Friendship: f, b, f + HK
Shao Kahn readies his hammer, but then the music for the Friendship finisher plays, and he groans. "I REFUSE!" he shouts, and storms off... only to bounce off of an invisible wall. He grumbles, and folds his arms petulantly. "NO!!" Seeing that nothing is happening other than the fighter he just beat giving him a confused look. He sighs, and says, "All right, but this is it!" He then begins to dance, and sings "I like to sing-a, about the moon-a and the June-a and the Spring-a..." That's as far as he gets before he shudders in disgust and storms off, this time nothing stopping him. The losing opponent gives Shao Kahn a confused look, and then looks at the camera, holding up a sign that says "I don't even want to know."

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Shao Kahn's Ending: FMV Script
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(Raiden's temple is in ruin. The once proud beauty of the place is in shambles, the floors and walls covered in blast marks, pillars, statues, and Raiden's throne shattered. Raiden himself lays before Shao Kahn, his hat destroyed, his clothes in shreds, bleeding in several places and is barely able to stand up. Although he is certainly trying. Shao Kahn, by comparison, looks almost unhurt, save for a nasty looking burn on his belly. He leans casually on his warhammer's handle, chuckling at Raiden.)

Shao Kahn: That felt good. That felt truly good. *looking down at Raiden, he kicks the thunder god in the chest, getting a satisfying grunt of pain as Raiden rolls away from him* Yes indeed. Revenge certainly does do the heart good. Or whatever passes as a heart in being like me. HA!

(Shao Kahn then looks around, smirking as he sees Raiden's smashed up throne. He gestures, and it rearranges itself, becoming an obisdian thrown with the likeness of a massive, demonic skull overtop of it. Shao Kahn purposefully strides up to it and sits down, grinning so widely that it can be seen underneath his helmet. Raiden growls, and slowly gets to his feet, his powers flickering weakly.)

Raiden: This... *cough* ...This isn't over... This world doesn't belong to you.

Shao Kahn: *chuckling* Nor does it belong to you. Although you've been acting like it does quite a lot, lately, haven't you?

Raiden: *looks away, closing his eyes in humiliation, realizing that he's right, but not wanting to admit it* Monster...

Shao Kahn: Demon. And a very successful one, too. Let me show you.

(Shao Kahn gestures. Before Raiden can react, powerful arms grab him, holding him by the shoulders, while a mechanical arm clamps out his neck. Raiden gasps in horror as he realizes that the ones holding him are Jax, Liu Kang, and Johnny Cage, all bearing skeletal markings on their faces. Shao Kahn laughs as Kitana, Jade, Mileena, Sindel, Frost, Ashrah, Sonya, Kira, Li Mei, Khameleon, Sareena, Nitara, and the ressurected Tanya saunter out, all bearing similar markings on their faces, and sit down around Shao Kahn, staring at him with adoring eyes. Goro, Kintaro, Sheeva, Motaro, Shang Tsung, and Quan Chi, all with skull markings and being led by Onaga, who seemed amused despite the fact that he still wore the collar Shao Kahn created to control him, step out from the shadows beside Raiden, Sheeva joining the other women at Shao Kahn's feet. Raiden just stares, the glow going out of his eyes completely. Shao Kahn chuckles.)

Shao Kahn: It's over, Raiden. You've failed. Through the dark magics I've studied, I have made your warriors my slaves, turned the mightiest women in the realms into my harem. The realms are mine. And there isn't anything you can do about it.

(Raiden says nothing, going limp in the arms of his captors, completely defeated. Shao Kahn chuckles, and gestures, his warriors dropping Raiden roughly. The thunder god just lay on the floor, too shocked to move. Shao Kahn shakes his head, laughing.)

Shao Kahn: Pathetic. Onaga? FINISH HIM.

(Onaga chuckles, cracking his knuckles as he goes over to Raiden. The camera fades out on a closeup of Raiden's face with Onaga's feet getting closer and closer. Once the camera fades out completely, there is a sound of a head being crushed into pulp...)

Khameleon's ending was a little to happy go lucky. they both weren't even humans in the first place they were just disguised as humans. these endings, bios, etc. are really good.

I was working under the assumption that on Zaterra, their species had evolved to humanoid. Also, if that wasn't true, well, then, Fujin just went a little further in re-evolving them than he should have.

HA! There are NO PLOTHOLES!

have to agree about khameleon's ending, probably a little too 'happy happy', but i think its mostly the comedy stuff with scorpion and co laughing at the end etc that make it seem weird. As for the human thing, they evolved to the point where they looked human (so far as wel could tell with those ninja outfits anyway), but they weren't actually humans. A simple rewording would easily fix that.

That aside, Khameleon's bio is easily the best one yet, nice stuff.
Rain's bio works great, don't change it. His ending, well, I'm not going for it. I can't see Sindel asking the advice of Kang or Lao or anyone else. I think she'd be capable of making the decision without asking anyone for their thoughts. I think was a little TOO bold of Rain to ask for the top job of Sindel's army. It's certainly probably something he'd hope for, but I don't think he should actually ask for it. I think Sindel would reward Rain with the position of General of Edenia's Army for his services and proving his loyalty to Edenia by fighting for it's best interests
Shao Khan's bio, mostly the last few lines, I dunno, seems out of place somehow, perhaps a rewording? As a whole it works though, even if at it's purest state it's "I want chaos, go make it for me".

His ending works fine, I feel like it drags on a little too long maybe, but it's definatly something I can see happening. I'm enjoying these thingies, look forward to seeing more, and eventually posting my own stuff was I've got a copy of MKD to nut out it's story specifics.

how long does it take you to do these? i guess there are no plotholes now...