MKA motaro WIP
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posted12/17/2006 02:14 AM (UTC)by
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09/07/2002 09:20 PM (UTC)
I'll keep updating this image as i progress.

I'm posting this wip to get some critiques.


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Kombosus
11/26/2006 07:28 PM (UTC)
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LMAO looks like he's trying to pop a squat! I like it alot though very good.
I was thinking more like he's getting ready to charge and bash the opponent's rib cage out of their body. grin
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Kombosus
11/26/2006 07:40 PM (UTC)
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Make is look like he's "roaring" that will give him more emotion. His face looks like he's constipated and he's squinting to try and see his victim. Splendid job on the body by the way.
Sounds good man, I might try that.
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Kombosus
11/27/2006 08:32 AM (UTC)
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Come on people how about some constructive criticism. Are you gonna give this pic a background bleed?
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Zentile
11/27/2006 08:45 AM (UTC)
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kwl.
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Hikari715
11/27/2006 09:16 PM (UTC)
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Nice. 3/5
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Ninja_Mime
11/27/2006 11:44 PM (UTC)
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Hikari715 Wrote:
Nice. 3/5


You'll give my sprite comic 3.5/5, and this only 3/5? I've got the feeling that something's wrong...

He looks great, but kinda naked. tongue
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11/27/2006 11:47 PM (UTC)
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He are naked!
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Pretty sweet.
Maybe fix up the face a wee bit?
4.5/5.
Thanks

I hadn't thought of a background for this one.

Hmmm, I don't know what to do,.............yet. confused
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11/28/2006 01:49 AM (UTC)
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Very nice. Just make the face meaner, and give him his colors, and it'll look awesome.

As a work-in-progress, 4/5.

I changed the face to a roar, I think it looks better.

I started smoothing him out and I went back to my old technique.

Gray scale first, then color


Doing colors right away was taking too long. I'm not used to working that way.
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Kombosus
11/28/2006 03:42 AM (UTC)
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SWEET! the mouth looks kind of cartooney but it's a definite improvement. Also your picture looks more bluurred in black and white then it does in color i wonder why that is?
Because I was blending it in.

It'll get sharper the more I work on it.
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11/28/2006 06:23 AM (UTC)
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Very nice looking so far. This should turn out well. But it may just be me, but I think that the first mouth looked better. Eh I don't know. Nice work so far though. Looking forward to the final.
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11/28/2006 06:42 AM (UTC)
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Looks good so far. But he still missing the five fingers....

Also, his tail is bothering me for some reason. It seems too high first off. I think it should be a bit lower. And all though you tried to foreshorten it a bit, the tail just looks small, rather than recceding bacwards.

If you were going for a more "charge" look I think his torso needs to be lower, so more of his shoulders are visible.
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fedegita
11/28/2006 07:16 AM (UTC)
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Its cool so far. I would suggest making him a lot bulkier and taller-looking though. I remember in his ending pic for MKT his shoulders and chest were fucking massive, he looked more like a body-builder; or if you wanna be more specific he looked like Goro or Kintaro minus the two arms and plus two horns. I also prefer his ram-like horns more than the ones you gave him here.
Maybe you could also add those spike things that he had coming out of his elbows back in MKT?
Actually... just look at your 3D model of him and forget the two back legs. THAT was what Motaro should look like.

Unfortunately his new MKA look makes him appear to be a mischeivious critter of celtic folklore than a tanked up centurian beast (or minotaur whatever the fuck).
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11/28/2006 07:59 AM (UTC)
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That's awesome!
The only thing I would change is... SOME PANTS!!! wow

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did some more tweaking on the upper torso and arms, also got the 5 fingers going.

The hands still look like crap, but I'll get to it.

Still a lot of work to do
Did some more sharpening work on the body and a little detail work on the hooves and tail.

Keep checking the gray image in the first post. I keep updating that same picture whenever I post an update.
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Kombosus
12/01/2006 05:54 PM (UTC)
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I like evreything except the eyes. To me they lack savagery But hot damn this picture is looking good. Hmmmmm...photoshop to be or not to be that is my question.
OK, I gave him the crazy eyes.
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Kombosus
12/02/2006 12:46 AM (UTC)
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Still not feeling the eyes too human. Not everything has to be anatomically correct. Have some fun with the eyes.
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12/02/2006 12:48 AM (UTC)
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I would have kept them blank.
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