Mortal kombat: Tournamnet One
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06/17/2007 06:54 PM (UTC)by
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GrotesquetheBeast
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I need a new sig, something with Kabal from UMK3 would be sweet. Just imagine that here
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04/01/2007 07:32 PM (UTC)
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LiuKangFighter
06/10/2007 04:43 PM (UTC)
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Nice. I like how you made Ermac's name an acyronym or whatever they call it.
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06/10/2007 06:15 PM (UTC)
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Aside the numerous grammatical errors, it is pretty mediocre, mostly beca-use you have little background to work with.

Lo, a misconception such as in the case of Eric as I recall. tai Chi and explosive force. Have you ever seen Tai Chi? It would be probably better
if he would have a martial art that emphasizes explosive outburst of energy, to which Tai Chi is an exact opposite.
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06/10/2007 07:11 PM (UTC)
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Chrome Wrote:
Aside the numerous grammatical errors, it is pretty mediocre, mostly beca-use you have little background to work with.

Lo, a misconception such as in the case of Eric as I recall. tai Chi and explosive force. Have you ever seen Tai Chi? It would be probably better
if he would have a martial art that emphasizes explosive outburst of energy, to which Tai Chi is an exact opposite.


k, thanks, I don't know that much about martial arts, all i knew was that tai chi helps focus positive energy, or something. And this whole thing was written very quickly, that's why there are so many mistakes, you should have seen it before I revised it, it was a real mess.
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06/11/2007 01:35 AM (UTC)
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Excellent Story. Has Chrome ever written a fan fiction? I bet it's really good.
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redman
06/11/2007 02:31 AM (UTC)
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Good read, i loved it. You deserve DP's i hope Kung lao kicks shang's ass in the next one!
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I need a new sig, something with Kabal from UMK3 would be sweet. Just imagine that here
06/11/2007 04:11 AM (UTC)
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redman Wrote:
i hope Kung lao kicks shang's ass in the next one!


It's funny you mention that, I was thinking about writing a sequel that takes place during the 10th tournament, where GKL defeats Shang Tsung.


And to parody: http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?id=57590
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06/17/2007 06:54 PM (UTC)
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honestly, its an ight story. but i dont see no pics u drew. A) those are pics i drew in 6th grade. B) if u think u can do better STEP UP OR SHUT UP. so basically im sayin.... if u wanna see who is better. i got something for ya. if not, den shut up
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