My First Banner
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My First Banner
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Well, this is my first attempt at a banner. I know it's not much, but input would be appreciated.
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submitted 01/05/2004 10:05 PM (UTC)byNovaStarr
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noob_sareena "Goddamn the torpedoes.
It's time to run away with the sideshow.
Full speed, right ahead.
Don't stop, you can sleep when you're dead." •01/03/2004 12:41 AM (UTC) •
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It's time to run away with the sideshow.
Full speed, right ahead.
Don't stop, you can sleep when you're dead."
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really nice nova, it could use some more stuff in it, but it looks great as it is, nice job, five out of five dragons
bleed •01/03/2004 03:05 AM (UTC) •
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The text is too weak, almost invisible.
You could try giving it a white outline or a glow to make it stand out more.
I would also fix the blood, it looks too much like cut and paste even though it's not. Maybe color some of it like the MK2 fatality sign so it looks more like it's really bleeding.
I would also try using some different fonts, Im not really feeling this one.
The text is the only thing that bothers me in this banner.
You could try giving it a white outline or a glow to make it stand out more.
I would also fix the blood, it looks too much like cut and paste even though it's not. Maybe color some of it like the MK2 fatality sign so it looks more like it's really bleeding.
I would also try using some different fonts, Im not really feeling this one.
The text is the only thing that bothers me in this banner.
illu§ion •01/03/2004 05:14 AM (UTC) •
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Edited.
Born-Again-Vampire
Anything war can do, peace can do better. •01/03/2004 01:44 PM (UTC) •
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Anything war can do, peace can do better.
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It is ok but it is just kind of plain. The blood needs to be replaced and like others said a better font.
Is this for a site?
Is this for a site?
BlindSite •01/04/2004 12:07 PM (UTC) •
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Not very good. I'll admit it's a harsh comment.
The text doesn't fit the theme. The color scheme for a start clashes in places and the blood looks out of place. IMO pic 1 character to have in the banner or do many and do it greyscale (greyscale looks good if you know what your doing).
The background isn't all that good.
Sorry but I don't like it and I tried to be constructive.
The text doesn't fit the theme. The color scheme for a start clashes in places and the blood looks out of place. IMO pic 1 character to have in the banner or do many and do it greyscale (greyscale looks good if you know what your doing).
The background isn't all that good.
Sorry but I don't like it and I tried to be constructive.
sandspider •01/04/2004 06:45 PM (UTC) •
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hmmm, well, i like the wordage I dont know, somethings missing here, the fonts are not the best choice the look nothing like a mortal kombat theme, and the bloods in to many "perfect drops" need to mix it upa little.
2.5/5
2.5/5
illu§ion •01/04/2004 08:47 PM (UTC) •
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If you want to make "cool" stuff go here:
PhotoShop 1 0 1. It's really helpful.
And if you're looking for good fonts:
Fonts/Text.
Enjoy. Credit goes to deadinholywood for the PhotoShop Tutorial link which I found on her site.
Ignore my other reply it didn't get edited.
PhotoShop 1 0 1. It's really helpful.
And if you're looking for good fonts:
Fonts/Text.
Enjoy. Credit goes to deadinholywood for the PhotoShop Tutorial link which I found on her site.
Ignore my other reply it didn't get edited.
RedScorpio •01/05/2004 09:53 PM (UTC) •
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It's simple but cool. It needs a little more work.
you can see yellow on the back of Scorpion's head.
The word "Victory" shouldn't be on top of Scorpion's face. The font for "Flawless Victory" is too simple, try drawing "Flawless Victory", scan it, color it in Photoshop, cut it and replace the current one with the one you make.
2/5 Dragon Points.
Peace.
you can see yellow on the back of Scorpion's head.
The word "Victory" shouldn't be on top of Scorpion's face. The font for "Flawless Victory" is too simple, try drawing "Flawless Victory", scan it, color it in Photoshop, cut it and replace the current one with the one you make.
2/5 Dragon Points.
Peace.
timsmk •01/05/2004 10:05 PM (UTC) •
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Well,
I like the text for one, but it definately should be brighter. That or more readable, Scorpion really makes that right side hard to read, as mentioned.
I feel it should have a background, preferably bright (somewhat anyway), banners are mostly for attracting attention.
As mentioned, it's just too simple, but nice going for a first .
I like the text for one, but it definately should be brighter. That or more readable, Scorpion really makes that right side hard to read, as mentioned.
I feel it should have a background, preferably bright (somewhat anyway), banners are mostly for attracting attention.
As mentioned, it's just too simple, but nice going for a first .
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